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 Title: We've already gone over this........
Reviewed By: MogTheGnome  On: September 16, 2004 21:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
If you look to past reviews, we've already discussed the idea of multiple girls. It's a bad idea, and it probably won't be happening. Please, people, stop bringing it up.
 Title: You have to continue!
Reviewed By: SKaiton [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 16, 2004 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
First off, I really like the way you developed the story, I just wish more would happen with Emma Frost. I'm expecting good things from this dance, hopefully the shit will really hit the fan (I'm waiting for Scott to attack Ranma for "defiling Jean's purity" and get his ass handed to him). I really like the way you're approaching Rogue's problem, you're not making it fully certain Ranma's going to choose her but making it clear that this is her only chance. Please let Ranma hook up with multiple characters! The idea of Rogue loosing her only chance is just a little too angsty. Anyway, great fic and I hope you continue it soon. Kaiton
 Title: jean vs rouge
Reviewed By: marco cabrera  On: September 15, 2004 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
who do you think will win in a fight rouge or jean since they both like ranma. I say rouge have a chance to beat jean and keep ranma as her boyfriend.
 Title: next update?
Reviewed By: marco cabrera  On: September 14, 2004 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
any one know when the next update come out?
 Reviewed By: chaosbringer  On: September 14, 2004 18:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
great. i been readin this since you started on it. i got an idea on Ranma's sudden feelings for Rouges having to do with ______ pill and jean. Am i reight?
 Title: just woke up
Reviewed By: marco cabrera  On: September 13, 2004 07:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I woke up early this morining to see the new story and it really good.
 Title: Chapter 24
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 13, 2004 01:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hm, I realized that there's definitely something wrong with Ranma, as his feelings for Rogue appeared out of nowhere, but I have no idea what it is. My guess was that Xavier fucked with his brain, but from what you said I guess not, not to mentioned his catfist-freakout-autodefence vs. telepathy. I'm terrible at figuring that sort of thing out so I'll just wait and see.
 Title: Yippee!
Reviewed By: Philip Weigel  On: September 12, 2004 13:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't wait Mat. Hope things get better for you.
 Title: it ok
Reviewed By: marco cabrera  On: September 11, 2004 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it ok what people think of me when i ask the author about his story. my questions is narrowsighted but i try the best i can. So just to say for this review is to tell the author to keep doing your best with this story and good luck with your job.
 Reviewed By: Caminatsugi  On: September 10, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Just to let you know I only read the one review/response from ya, so if some things are already addressed, sorry. First off, the N/R page the guy is talking about is probably the Nabiki and Ranma relationship archive. I have no clue why the man would think that he would end up with 'Biki though, your story is in the non-(Nabiki and Ranma)matchups section. The person in charge of the sight has pretty much said that fics in that category are probably not N/R fics, so they aren't gonna be included in the "Matchups" section. Second, I gave ya a 7 for spelling an' grammar 'cause, amongst other things the word "homely" means ugly, and "homey" means a sense of home, or welcome. Oh, and by the way, sometime several chapters back you explain'd 'bout words like goin', gonna, and talkin'; well you're right, but it's usually more a function of rapid speech, more than accent, but good job, most authors don't seem to know that. Also, I gotta agree that Marco is rather...narrowsighted in his requests. Doing a threesome would kinda take away alot of the reason you're giving Ranma a more human slant wouldn't it? Why surround a believable three-dimensional character with 2-D dick-puppets? It should also be noted that I know...little about the marvel universe. This isn't to say I know nothing, but really all I know came from the old X-men cartoon, so I can't really comment on that, but thank-you for not trying to include the (also) usual 2-D Ranma characters in an anime style of writing. cya
 Title: Next chapter...
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 10, 2004 14:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Having it out by Saturday or Sunday is going to be impossible. Found out yesterday the client I work for has requested me, two other guys, and this one chick to stay on for another 3 days. Which is today, Saturday, and Sunday. The problem with this, is, I think I start my next work assignment Monday. Thats up in the air though, my supervisor kinda mentioned the next assignment wouldn't start till Wednessday. It's possible I get it out monday, or tuesday. Who knows? One last thing. This thing is linked to a Nabiki/Ranma thing huh? Where? I've never seen it. Anyway, off to work I go.
 Title: rouge or jean
Reviewed By: marco cabrera  On: September 10, 2004 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I saw the other review and thought alot of people like or dont like ranma with rouge. why i think it ok that ranma ends with eather rouge or jean. I read fanfics were he with storm or kitty or any x-men chick. I just read the one were matdeception tell us that he going to write a big chapter in the next story i hope it come out saturday or sunday. He also said tha proffeser x finds out ranma was the one who took the picture of rouge, jean, and kitty. Man those girls are going to kick his ass so bad that it might take ranma a month to walk again. I wonder how he going to get out of that one hope rouge or jean still forgive if it possible. And emma frost she might see this as a chance to get ranma as her boyfriend. What happen to ryoga were the hell have he bin? and to tell you truth when i first read this story i thought ranma end up with nabiki because i found this page from a another web page that pair ranma with nabiki.
 Reviewed By: Philip Weigel  On: September 10, 2004 12:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, there's not going to be a three-some with Ranma, Jean and Rogue. I'm pretty sure that Mat won't do that. (He never really did like the harem threads on the Anime Addventure, because most of them are poorly written and concieved.) As for this fic not being on FF.Net? Simple enough. The NC-17 rating. FF.Net doesn't allow fics like those anymore, nor any lemons. DAMN YOU SOCCER MOMS AND LAWYERS!! Note: I don't hate anyone in particular, just the people's attitudes in general.
 Reviewed By: DL  On: September 10, 2004 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
really enjoyed ur story its prolly one of the best ranma/x-men crossovers out there. i'm really surprised u havent even posted this on fanfiction.net cause this would most proabably get an average of 50+ reviews per chapter (may also find some one willing to donate to your cause). overall the story is well written i'm not really that fond of the idea of ranma paring up wif rogue, i was hoping for a ranma/jean fic. anyway hope u keep up the story man ;)
 Title: hentai man
Reviewed By: marco cabrera  On: September 10, 2004 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
One more time treesome, treesome, treesome, treesome, and maybe ranma can find a way rouge cant suck jean power away!
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