| "Even Immortals Fall" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 21:55 CDT
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Wow that is the best one-shot i've ever read and i agree with u. it was meant to be a oneshot. you are a great authress and i hope you update your stories soon, arigato. Zirra
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Reviewed By: SilverShadowKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 21:14 CST
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I like it. Can you maybe do me a small favor and write a sequel? I know youre busy with your other fics, but I wanna see what happens with Kagome family and such. Please *puppy pot*?? ~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Lady Hikage of the Northwestern Lands
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: March 13, 2005 21:05 CST
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What a great stroy, and I used to be so against a Sesshomaru/Kagome pairing, now I'm in love with it. I can't tell you how many times I cried reading this. Thank you for writing it, this was the epitamy of fanfiction.
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Title: I couldn't stop! (and your'e only 15/16?) wow
Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just as everyone else has said...tears, tears, and more tears. this fic was absoluteley beautiful. even the way you portrayed kagome's overwhelming grief was something remarkable. to have written this with all of its sadness then include all of the hope for happiness is truly a talent that not many authors have. and let me tell you, i am a very picky reader. i will NOT review a story if it is not a 10. i will not even finish a story if it is not well written in every sense! good job. (your english teacher doesn't know what they are talking about. they'll give a degree to anyone nowadays!) ;P
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Reviewed By: InusGirlD [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that I was in tears for the entire time of this fanfic... literally. All I can say is ... wow. I truly enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: gppr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 08:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was completely captivated by your way of expressing the characters' emotions in this story. WOW.
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Title: oh my goodness!!
Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 23:14 CST
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no matter how many times i read this, it brings tears to my eyes. why, though? how does something so simple bring out all these emotions? i can't quite grasp it, but, alas, who can? I wish that there were words to describe the intensity of your words, but i guess that i can describe it as color, uhm... it's hot-neon-pink mixed with glowing-emerald-green and fire-engine-red with a tweaking of shimmering-sapphire-blue but there is that streak of pure white that runs through the heart of everything. that is the best way i can describe it. color. everyone understands color, right? i can figure out by the numerous adjectives the intensity of the feelings that this causes. and even the title, Even Immortals Fall, that is power. that is the raw power of emotion. revel in it's glory, for it may be short-lived. one of my favorite quotes that seems to describe this is, "The Lady cries, and the world weeps with her, for sorrow is short-lived" the Lady being Earth. but you get the message. anyway, i'm rambling, see what you've done to me? ~~~~Starlett~~~~
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Title: Beautiful!
Reviewed By: Hopeless Romantic2 On: January 30, 2005 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely stunning. And I don't usually even read Sess/kag fics!! You actually made me cry a few times in there. ^^ Lovely writing, well done indeed.
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Reviewed By: EternusLemures On: January 29, 2005 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am purely speechless. That was so incredibly beautifully written. I just...wanna...cry...T_T. It was so happy, I wanna cry. Damn you and your heeart wrenching stories. And yeah, you would have broken the flow if you put it into chapters for there's no perfect place for you to break it off at. Astounding. ~EL
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Reviewed By: The Red Dragons Order On: January 14, 2005 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I honestly loved this fic. You have a flowing style that would make anyone envious, and so few spelling/grammar mistakes that it isn't even worth mentioning. This is also one of the most original fics of this kind that I have ever read - actually, it's the only one of its kind I've read, but that's another story. I really enjoyed it, and although it was filled with Sesshomarou's thoughts and feelings and very little conversation, I didn't miss anything. You truly possess the art of writing. And who cares if it's a slightly long one-shot? Makes it more enjoyable in my opinion, no chapters to worry about. ^.^ Keep it up! Fellow author in crime, The Red Dragons Order www.fanfiction.net
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: chewies_lover On: January 12, 2005 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It captured my attention from the first sentence and that is something really hard to do. I could hardly stop reading it once I started. I loved the flow of the story and how well you kept them in character. I didn't feel you went OOc with them, because I agree taht people do change. But in short, it was amazing and I really loved it. It's definitely one of my fav.s that I've read from you. Keep on writing.
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: ChocolateEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 04:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was truly beautiful. I was crying through out the whole story. You have a way with words. Not even Shakespear could have written something more heart reching, but beautiful story. You truly are a writer at heart. I wrote a poem on Sess/Kag I would be honored if you read and reviewed it. It's called Why? Well I must go, but please continue your writing. Do not waste your talent. *Bows head in respect* I am not worthy to even lick your shoes! Ok I will stop butt kissing. :-)
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this is sooo sad and good and awww.... I loved the line from The Last Samurai. Wonderful job.. I cried it was soooo good and sad... good luck
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 04:51 CST
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Someone please pass me the tissues!! :Picks up one: K, thanks!! There are no words to do this story justice. Majestic-might touch on it; Heart-wrenching- maybe; Beautiful-Absolutely. Wonderful job, really and completely. Thanks for making me cry :)
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!!!!!!!!i cried all the way through!!! this is the best kag/sess i have ever read and all in a oneshot!! ::still cries::i will always luv sesshomaru!!!
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