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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2009 05:38 CST
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this was a great story
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Reviewed By: Darkness Child [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job. I really love your stories.
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Title: I can't believe it's really over...
Reviewed By: colorless egyptian [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's over! That sucks. Oh well! You're gonna make a sequel, so, that makes up for it. But, here's my review... Cut. Sweet. Sexy. Hot. *recites* Mirror, mirror on the wall...damn, this story's got it all!!!! There's my incesent babbling.
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Title: I can't believe it's really over...
Reviewed By: colorless egyptian [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's over! That sucks. Oh well! You're gonna make a sequel, so, that makes up for it. But, here's my review... Cut. Sweet. Sexy. Hot. *recites* Mirror, mirror on the wall...damn, this story's got it all!!!!
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Title: Shinoga
Reviewed By: Shinoga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sad to see it end but it was a fun read and I can't wait for the third part.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate to see the end of this story, but am delighted to learn that there will be another (actually lots more I hope). Great ending and perfect gifts. Thank you for this terrific story.
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Title: Cirtique
Reviewed By: Spirit Bagel of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 11:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this all in one shot last night, and couldn't put it down. You really do have a very captivating writing style. Your grasp of Kurama and his family is almost perfect. And, though I object to your, 'some things aren't accurate b/c of my story' strategy, it really isn't too bad. I do the same thing when I write Hatanaka, and make him a total jerk. One glaring error however, that kept sticking out at me just as I was really happy w/ it was the openness of Hiei. Hiei would never NEVER, in my humble opinion, agree to family therapy. And if Shiori caught him and Kura in bed together, orgasming no less, there is NO WAY he'd do anything around her but glare. YOu see, I am under the distinct impression that Hiei resents anyone other than Kura to get close to him. Other than that though, it was flawless. You are an extremely talented writer, and captured the tense atmosphere of unwanted family situations with a skil I can only hope to achieve. I look foward to reading your newest works, and hope you will check mine out, too! Yes, I am totally vying for reviews. Sue me.
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: May 23, 2005 17:28 CDT
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YAY!!! IT IS DONE!!! Okay, I can't write a long review because I have to get ready to go to an awards night and dance at my school, but I'M SO GLAD YOU FINISHED!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 12:43 CDT
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I loved this story so much! Sorry to see it end, but there's another one on the way, and you're still writing Coming Clean, so I'm still happy. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 18:49 CDT
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yay! what a great story! perfect ending, as well. you are such a good author. i can't wait for the 3rd part of the series as well as the updates for Coming Clean. but don't you find it strange that you finished hte 2nd one before the 1st? i do. it's funny in a weird way. but, whatever. this was one great story! see you for the next one :)
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That might be the most perfect thing to end it with. Right back at the beginning, except with no interruptions this time. ^.^ Makes me feel all fuzzy inside. Can't wait for the sequel to this little arc, and best of luck with writing and everything else that you do.
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Neutral Love On: May 06, 2005 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is, I CAN NOT WAIT UNTIL YOU WRITE MORE!!!!!!!! This is one of the best Hiei/Kurama fics I have ever read. Shoot, I would love to have the writing skills you have. Neutral Love PS: MAKE MORE CHAPTERS SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: May 01, 2005 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. again. they always are. i don't really have time for a real long review, but that doesn't matter since all my reviews contain the same basic thing anyway: GREAT STORY GREAT CHAPTER UPDATE VERY VERY SOON WITH LOTA FLUFF AND YOU'LL GET PLUSHIES!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in) On: May 01, 2005 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon!
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Reviewed By: FranceGamble On: April 30, 2005 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You definately have a style of writing that interests me. I'm going to send this to my group, and I will make sure they send me the updates as soon as my internet dies. Thanks for writing this, and please update soon! France Gamble
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Reviewed By: kettricken [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 14:14 CDT
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Wow, you've really got the update bug, haven't you? ...bug...heh. =D Anyway, good chapter. I was very relieved to see Hiei wake up, and his little chat with Shuu-kun just made me go "aww..." Sucks that there's only one chapter left--your stories are definitely some of my favorites!
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 11:47 CDT
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HOORAY! AN UPDATE! I love this chapter, very well thought out and put. I'm glad Hiei is going to be all right. You know, I just realized something.... You like to be mean to Hiei and Kurama in your stories. If one's not dying then the other is, am I right? Still this story seems to be almost finished. I wish it was never ending, ooh like the never ending story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: April 30, 2005 09:53 CDT
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WOOHOO!!!! IT'S ALMOST DONE!!!! AND YOU WERE NICE TO HIEI!!! You must be like me....incapable of killing of a character.... I tried killing Kurama twice and Hiei twice, but I ended up bringing Hiei back both times and I destroyred the fics where Kurama died. I'm hopeless.... LOL. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 08:51 CDT
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Awwwww...cute! continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 23:10 CDT
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yaysies!!! (haha new word!) great chapter. i liked the family-ness of this one. Hatanaka's finally starting to accept this, huh? bout damn time, i'd say. update soon!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 22:30 CDT
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Aw! Finally Kurama is getting some sleep. That's good to know. A nice chapter on the way to family togetherness, I think. Keep it up.
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Title: KWAAHHHH!!!
Reviewed By: Krystal-Nyte [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KWAAHHH!!! Cliffhanger? You should update very soon! Becuz it is at a part that is making me cry! No wonder my friend suggested this story to me! It's awesome! Update soon so I can read and find out what happens!!! - Krystal-Nyte
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Title: Shinoga
Reviewed By: Shinoga [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as always. I love it when the demons rescue Shuichi's family! It's such a fun and rarely used plot in H/K love stories. Two chapters so close together. I'm so happy!!! Awaiting the next instalment as always.
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Reviewed By: morwen_re, not logged in at the moment On: April 04, 2005 06:08 CDT
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great chapter! i loved it, even though it look at first like hiei was going to die. i can't wait to see and read the next chapter. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 23:23 CDT
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cliffhangeresque? interesting word there. besides that though, this was a great chapter. all the detail you put into Kurama's mixtures and tasks for helping Hiei made it seem all the more real. also, i'm glad that Kurama & Hatanaka are beginning to come together. too bad Hiei had to go to the brink of death for that to happen, though. great chapter. update soon!
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 19:40 CDT
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very nice, continue soon!...I still don't like that you hurt Hiei, but at least you made him better
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Reviewed By: kikira-san On: April 03, 2005 17:08 CDT
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oh boy its scary trying to do reviews in this place. I'd say somethign about some place with a better review system but I might get hurt or kicked out or something. poor Hiei-chan and Kurama too. They just don't catch a break do they? of course it would be rather boring if they did but still. I can't wait until Hiei wakes up and gets basically coddled to death. I have a feeling that you wouldn't put us through all that just to kill him. I'm hoping I'm right. It's a really good story and I'm sorry I'm not brave(or un-lazy) enough to do the reviewing more. I still have a bunch of characters left but I never liked long reviews without a point so I'll stop talking. Thank you for the two wonderful updates basically right in a row.
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Reviewed By: Kyoroxmysox...im not logged in On: April 03, 2005 16:36 CDT
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omg! poor hiei...i love this fic and so do all my friends...update soon!! poor hiei...i love him so much *sniff*... LATERZ
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: April 03, 2005 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
those two chapters were AWESOME!!!! they ROCKED! i had hoped kurama and hiei would get to do some fighting around that jerk Hatanaka...but please tell me you aren't going to kill Hiei off. because that would make kurama sad and kurama CAN'T be sad! *hugs kurama plushie* update soon, ya? pwease? *offers you plushie with cute chibi look*
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Reviewed By: Harmonie Des Anges [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 15:21 CDT
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Ah, sorry I didn't comment on the other update. I did mean too, but I was late to work already. *sheepish smile* I'm really enjoying this adorable little tale and hope to see the conclusion soon.
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