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Reviewed By: Candy? On: April 03, 2005 15:09 CDT
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YAY!!!! You updated VERY VERY quickly and you were....er....nicer to Hiei than most people are. LOL. Now can you update that quickly again? Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 22:13 CST
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O.O Holy crap, no way… Oh, man, I cannot wait for the next update! You'd think I'd be used to reading cliffhangers after so many years, but…no way! This cannot be happening! Except that it is, and I cannot wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: April 02, 2005 21:22 CST
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*glares* You did it again.... In both this and "Coming Clean" you have this annoying habit of leaving off right when one of my favorite characters is about to die!!!!! *cries* Mean, cruel, unfeeling person!!! *glares some more* MEAN! Now be a good girl and go update!!! And be nice to Hi-chan, pretty please!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 21:20 CST
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very nice chapter. i loved the action, too. it was nice to have an action scene that didn't start because of another family member. maybe this will help them all...accept each other, i suppose. update soon!
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Title: Lovely, Lovely
Reviewed By: Harmonie Des Anges [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the title says, lovely. I've never been to a real therapy session...(they-rape-me...hee hee hee...sorry old joke) But I do know that a part of that is sort of real. It's creepy how a good therapist can just...take only a few answers and uncover very deeply hidden emotions. It's scary and it does leave you feeling pretty naked and vulnerable. I really liked this chapter, it touches on a lot of emotion and character-development which is like sweet sweet candy to me. ^_^ Hiei so often portrayed as feeling so worthless, but isn't it so true. *wipes tear from eye and hugs firebaby plushie* Ah Hi-chan...how we love thyn angst. Keep on going, this story is beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 04:28 CST
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nice chapter. i really liked the therapy part of it. just brought out almost everything in a nutshell. i'm surprised, thgough, that he was able to figure Hiei out. didn't really think that waould happen. i actually figured Hiei wouldn't say anything at all & the man would just give up & move on. guess i was wrong. update soon!
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Reviewed By: morwen re not logged in On: March 28, 2005 23:11 CST
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great chapter! i thought you were at least simi-acurate with the therapy session. it was fairly close to what my family has to go through when we go and vist our therapist. so, great job.
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Title: Sikandra
Reviewed By: Ruri_Star [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it's me again! another great chapter from a great authoress! And by the way, Tsuin_Kitsune15 is my mediaminer screen name, so yeah...keep updating! more fluff! more fluff! more fluff!!!
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 13:11 CST
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Aiya! Wonderful update! Now if I can just get you to finish Coming Clean, I could die happy! SO YOU BETTER UPDATE ASAP SO I CAN DIE A HAPPY WOMAN!! ^_^; Just kidding, you don't have to update if you don't want to.
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: March 28, 2005 00:19 CST
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Awwwwww. Yeah, that was DEFINATELY worth the wait.... Now, update again!!!are you gonna start bringing the story to a close now? Or was THIS the end? Anyhow, update this and "Coming Clean" soon!!! Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 21:58 CST
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Ooh, shnazzy chapter. I like it. Revelations, insecurities, snuggles, it has (almost) everything. Definitely worth the wait. I can see how the session furthered the plot rather than stuck to accuracy, but it comes off all right. (Therapists and I have never had great relationships, anyway.)
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Reviewed By: Shinoga [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 21:50 CST
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WOOT *does happy updating dance* Wonderful as always. Too short .....but I think you could write a novel and it still wouldn't be enough. Awaiting the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 19:30 CST
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well worth the wait, but i hope we don't have to wait so long again. continue soon. Nice with the thearpy conclusions
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Title: ONEGAI!
Reviewed By: Harmonie Des Anges [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm seriously hoping to see an update for this soon! Man, do people LOVE to bastardize Hatanaka. This has got to be the third fic where's he's appeared and had serious issues. Sheesh. I'm really loving this story though. Shuu-kun is such a typical teenager, I think you're doing an excellent job with that, as well as the rest of the characters. I hate it when people tell me I have or haven't "captured the true character" so I'm most certainly NOT going to say that to you, but I am enjoying your unique take on things, and totally agree about Shiori being such a peace-maker and accepting her son unconditionally, no matter the circumstance. You are so right about Hatanaka's absence, we really don't have much to go on, but if the a character needs to be bastardized for the sake of fic plot, I am SO all for it! ^_^ I also love the sweet little lovey Hiei. He strikes me as a cuddler too. So sweet! And we ALL know that Kurama is too nice for his own good. *sigh* But that aside, I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shinoga [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*whimper* Need more!!! Please.....*pleads on hands and knees*
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