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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 10:36 CST
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Wow, can I just saw wow?! I love your story, it makes me mad how Hatanaka treats Kurama and Hiei! Ooh and the part with the ring, that just made me hate him a whole lot more! I love this fan fiction and I hope you finish it soon! Can I start a fan club for you?!
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Reviewed By: fire and napalm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very much so enjoying this. I quite enjoy all the detail you've put into this and I don't mind little outside references at all. I think you've done very well on the 'intimate' scenes. Poor Hiei, that was so funny wiht his always dropping himself off the bed, but so sad for him. Maybe the loss of a limb wouldn't hurt the humans? He could always ask Yusuke for pranks. I'm just curious, are yusuke and Kuwabara and the others going to be used here? Just curious. I think that'd be entertaining, personally. Please say the stepdad'll get his eventually? I am favouriting this story. please update soon, I want to see what happens next. I'm sure it'll be good.
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Title: Sikandra
Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 16:42 CST
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You know what would be cool? It would be cool if they earned that weird stepfather guy's respect and crap by saving Shuu-kun from some random demon. Yeah, that would be cool...but I'm sure that whatever ending you've come up with will be better, because let's face it: I'm not that great of an author. I just thought I'd throw that idea out there because I love it when the jerk gets something thrown back in his face...does that make me a bad person? I wonder...
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Reviewed By: Mea On: December 12, 2004 10:46 CST
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Great chapter! I love the ice cream parlor scene. It was funny. So again, it was a great chapter. Update soon! Sincerely Mea ^_^
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: December 08, 2004 20:50 CST
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when you said random, you meant it. i liked it, though. please continue!
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Reviewed By: Tsuin_Kitsune15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTINUE! This story is hilarious! I especially loved the chase scene.
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Reviewed By: HieiAndKuramaLover#? On: November 07, 2004 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha!!! What a great idea!!! I just love the relationship you have created bertween Hiei and Kurama -- very kawaii!!! (I don't know about you, but I would DIE if my mom were to walk in on me like that! *shudders* Uggg..... bad thoughts...) ^__^ I can't wait to find out what happens -- keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!
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Reviewed By: Mea On: November 07, 2004 11:28 CST
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i read this story on aff.net. I loved it so please UPDATE SOON. Thank You! Sincerely Mea ^_^
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Reviewed By: Youko_Akira On: October 20, 2004 15:38 CDT
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This is one freakin hilarious story! (Dies laughing) You have so got to write more. I will continue to visit and check if you have updated.
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Reviewed By: Zillah On: October 02, 2004 19:18 CDT
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I love this fic-- please continue!
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Reviewed By: zpluto8 On: October 01, 2004 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying seeing a playful side of both characters Hiei's especially.
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Reviewed By: Your_master_is_my_dog [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yowzas!! I love this story!! It's absolutely TOO CUTE!!! This is definently one of my favorite Hiei/Kurama stories out there, and I love the plot! What an absolutely wonderful idea!! n.n Keep up the good work, I'm expecting a wonderful story!! ~Your_Master_Is_My_Dog~
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Title: R&R
Reviewed By: Feathers-Forlorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the descriptions. I definatly erdge you to write more.
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Title: bugs
Reviewed By: scorcha On: September 18, 2004 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good, i can't wait for the next part.
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Reviewed By: zpluto8 On: September 15, 2004 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was pretty good for a first time and good story line to.
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