| "Corporate Deception: Fate of Her Land" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Purple Ghost On: July 10, 2005 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome read! I really like the plot! I'd love to read more tonight, but I really need to get some sleep! I never leave reviews...cause I'm lazy like that, but I liked this story so much that I just had to leave feed back!
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Reviewed By: AmberHaze On: July 07, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Loved it!
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Reviewed By: tiner On: June 29, 2005 01:11 CDT
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Wow, i really like your story. So far that is. I mean, after all it isn't over :P It's seriously one of the best fan fics that i've read.. and i read a lot of fanfics ^_^. well hope the next chapter is up soon. Again, good job.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 21:49 CDT
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Whoa, awesome chapter. The battle scene is great. Very descriptive and compelling. I totally was sweating it when Inuyasha was battling his own despair. The Kikyo scene was very compelling and I am not such a big fan of hers, but I really felt for her. It shows what a great writer you are if you can make me feel bad for her. I can't wait to see what happens; you have me on the edge of my seat. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work with us.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great climax. Great story. I have enjoyed it and I am sorry for not reviewing earlier. Your writing is wonderful, smooth and articulate. Very few grammar or spelling errors, a true work of art. Anyway, great chapter, it was worth the wait! Can't wait for the battle! Will Kagome make it in time? Will Kouga be allowed past the barrier? Will Onigumo fight with Naraku and keep him from corrupting the jewel? See you got me hanging off my seat!!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 11:35 CDT
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Jaken and Kouga are push overs - but for different reasons - LOL. I can't wait for Kagome to get there - she's going to kick some butt I'd bet! I am eargerly waiting for more - you have them all ready for battle - and I can hardly wait for it!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie (Not logged in) On: March 08, 2005 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I've been pretty much reading your story straight through since yesterday! It's awsome! You have excellent plot ideas and everything is written perfectly, so that it easy to picture how everything is happening in my mind! You really have a knack for writing fanfiction and I have to say that I LOVE the length of your chapters! :) I was on the edge of my seat the entire time I was reading! I found the whole soul-communication very original. I don't think I've ever heard of anyone ever using it. :) Very original! Anyway, please update when you can! Your writing is excellent!
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Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 01:14 CST
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oh. my. god. this story rocks! ok ill be honest with you. ive seen the description of your story several times and brushed it off, but then i decided to give it a chance and i was blown away.this is amazingly original and very descriptive anf fulfilling. you really give substance in your chapters and dont leave readers hanging.i know you just updated today (yay!) but please update again soon . thank you for writing this, i really enjoy it.
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Title: chapter13
Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 15:36 CST
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so interesting this new chapter! Another juicy Inu/Kag lemon.... and poor Souta! so in love but so unlucky! I also hope that the situation between Sesshoumaru and Kagura will improve... I like very much this couple. I'm happy you mentioned the Modena because I live in Modena! ^^ I was really excited when I saw that name for the car... ^^ In Modena are produced the Ferrari and the Maserati, but don't think that everyone here has a car like that... -____-
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 02, 2005 21:59 CST
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loved it, another great chapter. what's gonna happen now that naraku has the jewel?dun dun dun
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Reviewed By: Patchcat (not signed in, too lazy) On: March 02, 2005 17:25 CST
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I've enjoyed this story for a fairly good while and have found it to be a truly captivating piece. The plot is well thought out and engaging, the character interactions flow marvelously, and everything is very well-paced and natural. The only thing I found a problem with was in your most recent chapter, and it's not even really a problem, per se. This is what I found: Sesshomaru's sword is called Tensaiga, Inuyasha's sword is Tesseiga. You correctly identified Tensaiga a couple of times and then you didn't and it got a little confusing. I only point this out because I have enjoyed your work so very much, and I'm sure it was just an oversight -- especially considering how long your chapters are. Well, that's all I have to say for now. I look forward to your next update. Laters, Patch
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 02, 2005 15:51 CST
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Death, devastation, chaos - seems your work here is done!! A very full chapter - If Kaugra hadn't kept it a secret from Sess, then they probably could have saved Kanna - but alas - she wasn't thinking that far ahead. I look forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 16:00 CST
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I see that you are still working on this - and I'm curious to see the state of the shrine grounds by the time Inu and Kagome come up for air. I'm looking forward to reading more of your story.
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Title: ‘You go, dawg!’
Reviewed By: Youkai Musashi (apparently not signed in ::kicks mm.org:: On: February 10, 2005 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Kami ::fans herself:: Girl...you...you...darn you! lol. Amazing. Incredibly hot and Sweet, particularly their auras communicating. Absolutely LOVED that...Again, Miroku was Priceless. Shippo was his cute adorable self, and Sesshy got a funny line! lol...this said in his tone of voice definetely makes it funnier...'if the two of you spend any more time in your bed you'll both forget how to walk.' Poor, poor baby Souta ::cuddles Souta:: But girl, not only was this steamy (literally lol) and beautifully written, it had cuteness to spare, and their auras Speaking to each other, not just reacting like they often do in fics after mating, was an awesome, sweet touch :) I adored it. "I'd say you're going down, but really, it's me who's doing that." Naughty naughty Kags lol. I could go on forever about this story, this chapter, but I want more now! As for now: VERY THANK YOU!!! :) For sharing this great fic! I'm looking forward for more! And I'll start reading your other works right away! YOU GO GIRL! Bravo for another awesome chap! Man I can't get the image of Inu dressed in a straw hat and Hawaiian shirt lol...and he would STILL look HOT as Hell...I'll shut up now :) Muchas arigato! YM
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 16:16 CST
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Your story is already on my 'must-read' list: congratulations, great plot (an original one and so well described is not very common) and wonderful writing-style. I couldn't move from my chair till I finished reading the story. ^^ In a few words... I love it! Pease keep writing ^^ I'm so curious that I can't wait to read next chapter ^_~
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