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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 09:19 CST
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Damn! That climbing Q&A was a great idea! A great idea for the Wufei character (though a risky one), and a great idea on the author's part *tips hat*. It sort of got away from Wufei there, but I think the results were that much more worthwhile. Heero has a certain blunt honesty in this fic that would not have allowed him to solve just the Duo-Heero part of his problem without addressing all the rest too. ANd what better occasion to do it, when, by Wufei's own rules, he can't use his ability with language to weasel out, or run away :) Now that it's all out in the open...what will happen next? Dying to find out. (Heheheh, I love Duo's 'I have a theory...there's an easy path on the other side!' line!)
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Reviewed By: pRiscEl- On: November 21, 2004 04:06 CST
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Shucks! One commentary is already on its way to ya! Just a few words here, I guess i was thinking a Wu Fei mindset and thought similarly that this little hike, as it were, would've jelped duo and Heero patch things up and i was just as surprised as Wufers with the questions directed toward him. *snickers* no undies heh... I was sure that Wufers revealing what he felt would be a long drawn out process but a truely enjoyable one with more words like 'Mount' taking on different meanings for me lol but all in all progress has been made and now the step toward figuring out how this relationship thing between the three of them will work out. update soon *glomps Kracken*
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 13, 2004 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Wufie he needs the love of Heero and Duo ..The hell with everything els ...Please update..
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Reviewed By: priscel***` On: November 12, 2004 02:43 CST
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Well, damn Heero got flustered himself when Wuffers made his quick escape that he not only talked/ ask Duo to leave the gun behind but informed him of Wufei's attraction to him and Heero's own interest in Wuffers! Go Heero! That helps a lot and Duo's speaking with Wuffers attempting to let him know that he approves of him being in their relationship was pretty hard, but I think that Wuffers understood but ol'loveable dragon Fei must be difficult in accepting their affection for him and always put up responsibility for the clan and Duty before himself. hmm... Man is it me or Does Wu Fei love that word 'mount'? *snickers* that word will never mean anything truly innocent to me after this fic. *grins* more please!
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: November 12, 2004 02:39 CST
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Ah, clever Wufei, diverting Duo from fighting the poor local lugs. The hike sounds interesting, and I can only wonder what Wufei's surprise will be. He's got his hands full with the both of them, hasn't he? I can hardly wait to see how it all turns out.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 20:41 CST
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Once more, Wufei pulls off a magic trick; slipping into the crack between 01 and 02 and acting a bit like a bridge between them. But I have the feeling things are about to get a looot more complicated. He's falling harder than ever - for both of them - and beating himself over the head with his obligations and stuff, and Heero and Duo definitely have their own problems :P I don't know how you can pull a happy ending outta this mess but I'm dying to find out XD
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 11, 2004 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon and keep up the amazing job!
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Title: The thot plickens!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful developments and characterization. And why is the word "mount" so damn erotic?? *g* Panting for more!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 10:18 CST
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Just got a chance to read this. I have just begun to read Gundam Wing fanfics and I like this a lot. Hope there is an update soon.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 02, 2004 06:09 CST
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Update soon and keep up the wonderful job!
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Reviewed By: stardancer On: October 29, 2004 20:47 CDT
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You have to write faster...I can't wait to find out what happens. Great story.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 18:01 CDT
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More Wu torture (don't worry, I love it), and more illustration of how he fits sort of half way between Duo and Heero; heading off a flare-up, or getting Duo to admit why he's hurting after the swimming incident. So, why IS Heero worried? da-da-dum! Cant' wait to find out!
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Reviewed By: priscel * On: October 29, 2004 02:43 CDT
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hmm I wonder that too. Wu Fei really should talk to Heero about his view or understanding of Duo's problems. If Wu had done that a bit more thoroughly then he'll more insight into the situation. And goodie a bar... so prehaps Duo falls into the temptation to drink more there? thanks and can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 19, 2004 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS CHAPTER WAS AWSOM PLEASE UPDATE.. NOW
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Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 01:26 CDT
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When you first started working on this, I was worried about the effect on the updates of "Lawless Hearts". However, I'm so happy to see you working on a 1x2x5 that it's okay. :) Both stories are great! I'm looking forward to the next update...
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