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Reviewed By: priscel * On: October 18, 2004 04:11 CDT
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uhh sorry typo here it should read '...Wu Fei didn't lift his head to him...'
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Reviewed By: priscel * On: October 18, 2004 04:07 CDT
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In Wuffers' end decision of this latest chapter, he reveals just how honorable he is. Bad Heero Bad! hmm heero being the picture of dominant lion ready to pounce on a poor unsuspecting Wu Fei. I wonder if Heero quesitons his actions when Wu Fei didn't left his to him but meerly nodded apologetically? Well he has lots of time to think about his actions and come to a conclusion if the blue eyed soldier isn't really that inhibited by his sleepyness. On the issue of intimacy... hmm nail the window shut gives Duo the security, but being in the receiving position will make him utterly vulnerable... guards down, the most open to anything even if their door is locked and he's with heero... I think that him being dominant in bed may help a little but he in a way is timid.. I dunno maybe the whole intiamcy things is solve a few simple taps of the hammer to nail and Wuffers won't be alarmed by a freaked out Duo the night before he leaves, unless there's something he hasn't told Heero in fear of shame/rejection and wouldn't dream of mentioning to Wuffers because he would fear being considered weak by him for not being able to protect himself? After all he has put himself in danger to protect those nearest to him like he did with Wu Fei on the dock... more please!
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Reviewed By: kimpisces(2lazy2login) On: October 17, 2004 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fanfic! Wufei is under some predicament and when I think that maybe he'll be okay about it, BOOM! Heero drops another boom...though I was okay with the images from the last one lolol Go Heero! Then again, maybe Heero's just horny since Duo won't do anything with him if the room's 'not secure' ...poor Heero *huggles him* Can't wait to see the next chapter ^-^ ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 17:11 CDT
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Oh boy, Wufei's getting more and more twisted up inside. Mind you, I can't blame him. That was a hot lil' 1x5 moment but I think Heero should have been a bit more detailed about exactly why he wanted Wu to be honest. Was that Heero warning Wufei off? Or something else...? Something tells me he won't be allowed to run away that easily! Whee next chapter please!
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Reviewed By: priscel *nods* On: October 16, 2004 21:37 CDT
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nice! *snickers* uh hmm I see Duo's unknowingly put himself on display and Wufei was looking pretttty hard *snickers some more* SO Heero and Duo haven't been intimate, they haven't taken that step in their relationship that Wu Fei's hentai thoughts had reflected? So does this mean that in the second chapter * i think* when wuffers was in the kitchen and he heard that startled gasp it was Duo and Heero was being the forward one, taking the initiative? AND wuffers was thinking about them all being together... *squeals in glee* oh goodie!! Oi update soON!!!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 10, 2004 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Wufei that was so sad..I love Wufei...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 10:45 CDT
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Super chapter. The psychology of what Wu is studying deepens, as does his understanding of the problems. It's a good touch to make him able to realize things about Heero that Duo doesn't seem able to understand. Wufei is a more dispassionate observer. Even though, and this is where it's 'dangerous' of course, even though he's not dispassionate about the people involved :P Ouch. A glimmer of 1x2x5 showing up, but I find it hard to believe Wu would be able to think about inserting himself into that warmth if he didn't feel anything about Heero on his own, as well as Duo. Next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 05, 2004 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this ..Please write some more and update ...Your storie keeps geeting better and better...
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Title: Hooked again
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a beautiful evoked setting! And a very intriguing dynamic between our boys. Can't wait to hear 01's side of things.
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Reviewed By: blaack beauty On: October 03, 2004 10:08 CDT
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Wow! You got to update soon! Keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: priscel *hmm* [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 02:48 CDT
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YA! Oh this is going to be torture for Ol'wuffers. but I think they are definitely making progress and I think it was, indeed, a very good idea to ask WuFei for help. Like Wuffers said, Heero is observant. So although Heero wasn't able to help Duo deal with his issues and let them fed his own, I'm sure that he can answer any question wuffers has but not really able to give a psychological assessment without it being biased. The tone Duo gives alot though is self-fault: if there is anything wrong then he's to blame and this may also be linked to the loss of his family twice over...maxwell church and Solo. So this in the beginning had me thinking that Heero is somewhat abusive... but I see now that Heero not being able to help but always pressuring Duo to get better can get the same reaction out of Duo. hmm I'm still has this part of me that is alittle peeved at Heero for the pressure he's put on Duo even if cobalt baby blue is still new to dealing with emotions and isn't in the position yet to fully be capable help duo with his. Whew! that was a lot! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: October 01, 2004 21:05 CDT
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I can see Wufei as an analyst, given his thoughtful nature. No doubt he hasn't any idea what he's getting himself into, though watching Duo's braid dance across his posterior should have been a clue. Can't wait until his talk with Heero and learning what Duo's partner's perspective on the problem is. With three stories going, I'm not sure which one to encourage you to update first, so I'll just say keep 'em coming.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 19:18 CDT
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Oh boy, I see the possibility of a whole truck-load of angst coming this way ^^;; Wu Fei helps Duo start to solve his problems...and give Duo the opportunity to jump into Heero's arms. Cue multiple fracture to Wu Fei's heart. Wahhh! Good chapter, with Wu testing the psychology and barriers before him. I'm thinking Duo's view of Heero as being perpetually annoyed with him is a symptom of Duo's problems, rather than actual fact? Hah, can't wait to see how Heero and Wu Fei handle that conversation; Heero knows Wu's interest in Duo after all. Will he still trust Wu, as a friend first who will have Duo's best interest at heart? Next chapter please!
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Reviewed By: Mononoke (mediaminer member,) On: September 29, 2004 05:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story, though I think that you tend to lump all of Duo's personality traits into every fic you writ. The serious ones anyways. Mainly he has a hard time with the touching and stuff like that, and I can understand that, I really can. But does it always have to be that way? Why can't you put more integral thought into his inner strength, allthough you could argue that by showing this insecure and paranoid part you are showing his inner strength... But stull, it seems more like you have a specific mind-set against a stronger Duo, against him *not* having major malfunctory issues. I like the way you continued to delve into Wu Fei's characterisms, and how you made him seem more human, and less Heero-esque. Anywho, I love this fic, and all of them really, and cannot wait until you post some more! Gomen for the strangeness of my review!!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 23:22 CDT
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ohh looks good girlfirend. keep writting
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