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| "Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 1095 ] | | Pages (73): [ « ‹ 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 › » ] | Title: I can't speak
Reviewed By: Dolarodus On: March 08, 2005 19:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have stolen my heart with this story. I cannot see a better writer than you. Never stop writing. It is your true gift. I will never forget this story. It has shown such beauty that I know I will ever be able to forget it. Thankyou. You are cherished by those who know you and those who are touched by your stories. You are koishi. Never forget that.
| Reviewed By: Devildice708(forgot to login) On: March 06, 2005 17:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pants* Oh man, this a long story--a good one but long. I've just finished chapter 67 and the thing with Inuyasha and the tampons was real funny. I'll get to the next chap soon.
| Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: EAP On: March 02, 2005 22:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an amazing story! I loved the plot, it was so good, I got really involved with it and the whole thing just flowed prfectly. I loved all of the original characters, you have a great talent for making them very believable. I dont think anyone was OCC, either. I just loved the on-going jokes, with the 'Monk-in-Pain' red and 'purifying the jewel' and all. I cant tell you how many times I laughed out loud at your fic. And the kids! All of them were so cute! I just loved the whole thing, your really talented at this writing thing. Thanks so much for writing, I hope you continue with your other works! EAP
| Title: Chapter 73
Reviewed By: Reviewinator On: March 02, 2005 13:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as always! You think that fall break means torture the parents? YOUR ABSOLUTELY RIGHT!!!! I gotta finish this story up. It's too damn good. Write a book. When I become a millionare, I'll publish it and give you all the royalties you deserve. You have a talent. Use it often. Use it well.
| Title: Edit
Reviewed By: MaginMan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 10:39 PST
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Ack, I meant I am going to read Torrent. Sorry, thinking of a story I was reading elsewhere named Tempest. Please forgive.
| Title: Memorable
Reviewed By: MaginMan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 10:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another incredible story (Took me 4 days to finish). Grammatically, this was not one of your best stories, but plot-wise, I think I may have liked this one more than Purity or Metamorphosis. I was upset in Purity that Sango and Miroku got left behind, and the miscarriages in Meta were driving me crazy. I know you love the angst (and I love you for it usually), but you are coming off as a Sango/Miroku hater (MaginMan like Sango!). Seriously though, I love the depth in your stories. The realization that Sesshoumaru had been manipulating things from the beginning of the story was better than Meta's surprise Koshii. Well, I am off to read Tempest next, and as soon as I can get over the fact that I got hooked on your stories while looking for quick hentai, I will probably end up reading "Out of Time" and some of your others. PS: I loved the Chronicles' One Shots; perhaps there are more coming in the future, yes?
| Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: Someone Interesting [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 03:53 PST
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You have a great fanfic, and I love everything about it. You've got some of the best writing I've ever seen. Good Luck in the future!
| Title: Forget Sleep
Reviewed By: A New Insomniac On: February 26, 2005 22:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And the award for best fanfiction goes to... Sueric!!! Forget sleep! I'm at ch 35 and I wont rest until I've finished!!!! Just forget it!!! I can't!!! Write more!!!!!! I will always read anything you write!!!! I need fanfics!!!! I do not have a problem!!!!!!! I can stop reading anytime I want...I JUST DON'T WANT TO!!!!!!! Great story so far. I've got papers due monday worth half my grade and I cant turn away from your story!!! I'm trapped. Here's an idea. Attatch some jumper cables to my brain after I finish the shock therapy I'm gonna need after this and I recharge the batteries in the cars of all your readers!!!! YAAHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: devoureddarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 16:28 PST
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hi, I'm a big fan of your work, I just hate repling, but anyways, I agree with what you say about lemons, see I don't mind if their in storys. I'm reading to the story if I like how its writing on not how people have sex. So, furthermore, I think that whatever you place in your story, is not up to the fans, but up to yourself. Thanks, hope you read this. ^_^ ~¤devoureddarkness¤~ P.S. (I read alot of your storys it just so late, when I read them o.O;)
| Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 09:33 PST
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This is still one of the best fics this site has to offer, period and exclamation point!
| Title: Dam Your Writing Skills!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Sadly Insane On: February 25, 2005 20:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dam you. This is too good. I can't not read it, but your stealing my life away with these long stories. I'm so confused I'm crying right now. I never cry!!!!! Damit. Make some one shots.just oneshots. Your writing is too dam good. Just shoot me now! Write books!!! I need to read more!!! Shoot me!!! I can't take any more of this beautiful writing!!!!!!!Damit.*sob,sniffle*
| Title: A small thought
Reviewed By: The Wolf Of Endless Winter On: February 25, 2005 19:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm only at ch 24 and I already love the story as much as I loved Purity. One thing. I thought it was supposed to be an antique auction. Maybe I'm getting things mixed up. Anyway, I was just thinking that maybe it could show up at the auction and Kagome's mother would buy it, read it, and give it to Kagome, but that leaves a paradox with the two of the book existing at the same time. Creepy. I hate time travel. But, I love the show. Strange. Anyway. It was just a thought. Dolarodus
| Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 23:53 PST
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(continued!) Most of the IY stories that I've read have forced the core group apart or forced Kagome to leave her family behind. I just really loved that everyone could be together...and it still was an entirely believable scenario! It didn't feel contrived. Gosh, what else?? The complexity of the plot is amazing. It just kills me that you are basically writing on the fly. That is an amazing talent! I've got detailed story outlines and *still* can't manage to finish them, let alone crank out a daily update! LOL I love that you are a believer in happy endings. I am, too. I think there's far too many sad things that happen in real life - I don't need it in my fanfics! That's not to say that I don't appreciate angst, because I totally do, and I think that you use it very effectively. It's just part of the whole process of bringing the characters and couples together and helping them to grow and forge stronger bonds. And to those who wanted you to rush the "lemon" portion of the program - phooey on them! Believe me, I love the adult stuff as much (if not more! LOL) than the next person, but it means so much more when there is a story and reason behind it. You just don't get that squishy, wonderful, warm feeling in your stomach from your one-shot smut fics. And your story definitely gave me that wonderful, first-kiss feeling...ahhhh.... I should wrap up this marathon review. I sure hope that this gets into the "featured" section. You sure deserve it!
| Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 23:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't make it go to 11! WAH! I read "Torrent" and liked it (though it wrapped a little too quickly for me!). I read "Purity" and loved it (though I felt that Gym Teacher!InuYasha was going to get arrested for hitting on Jail Bait!Kagome). But this? This story is, by far, my favorite (and tied with "The Lucky Ones" as my favorite IY story EVER). I didn't find this story until the end of last week and spent three days glued to my computer, reading it from beginning to end. I didn't want to stop to sleep, it's THAT good. I know that all the good comments have already been taken, but I just have to complement you on how well you have crafted every character in this story. They are still the characters we know and love from the manga and anime, but are allowed to grow, make mistakes and mature. I think I'm actually the most impressed by Future Sesshoumaru. I truly believe that the events of the past 500 years have shaped him into the person that he now is. He's still Sesshoumaru...but he's learned a lot along the way. I also think this is my favorite story because all of the characters end up together. Kagome doesn't have to leave her family behind to have a life with InuYasha and they don't have to leave Miroku, Sango and Shippou back in the Feudal Era in order to pursue a life in modern Tokyo. And again, I still felt like the characters remained true to themselves, even when relocated to this new environment. (not enough room...more above!)
| Reviewed By: phoenixburns [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 04:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have an amazing way with words. Your story kept me up late over several days trying to read it all. A throughly wonderful story! I believe that you write the characters truer with every story. Excellent.
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