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| "Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 1095 ] | | Pages (73): [ « ‹ 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 › » ] | Title: To Lady Orion
Reviewed By: fuzzy wuzzy ears On: December 12, 2004 14:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just wanted to point out to LadyOrion that InuYasha doesn't 'sit' in ANY of Sueric's fanfics, just 'osuwari' since there is a huge difference between the two (and since 'osuwari' is used for a dog) .......... Just wanted to let you know, sueric, i just reread this and... I ADORED it as much the second time as i did the first, if not more! Having read it already once, it is easier to go back and reread to catch the subtleties you leave early on, the forshadowing that isn't as prevalent, even early on. I'm not sure how you've managed to do it but chronicles is a truly amazing piece. Love it more than you know, and highly anticipating A Chronicles Christmas, too! have a great vacation, and now back to Metamorphosis!
| Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 14:25 PST
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my ONLY complaint...Kagome keeps saying sit indirectly and InuYasha doen't ...WHAM! sit. even when she said it in another contex i remember Inu sitting. 'Orion
| Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 05:19 PST
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AAAAGGGG i thought you cut his hiar!!!!! i was about to painc and go on a rampage of destruction. pant pant trys to calm down 'orion
| Reviewed By: reviewer.net On: December 09, 2004 23:04 PST
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well...I'm glad you took it in a positive manner. And i'm sorry too, to arouse such negative feelings at this page. Hahaha i'm actually feeling quite embarassed, raising up such a fuss at such a happy place like this. Well I'll be gone now. Thank you and goodbye!
| Title: To reviewer.net
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 02:54 PST
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this is not a review... this is a way for me to say this to you because... you're not logged in, if you have an account... Ugh, I hate using reviews to do this, but since the story is complete, I can't actually address you in A/N: Thanks for your reviews. Sorry if readers get defensive. I don't remove reviews for stating an opinion. I've had trouble with spam reviews (someone thinking my reviews was a great place to write their own fic... strange but true) and for blatant flames. In that vein, I don't expect a war to break out either. As far as the Osuwari issue, it is true they always come off sometime (except in Torrent where Kagome got a rosary of her own and there was a reason he needed it). Then again, it is true that you do have to start somewhere with the characters, and Kagome does tend to use the 'word' proficiently. I think I'd do worse if I were called a 'bitch', and she's always used it with Kouga around. Anyway, while I respect your opinion, it is a simple TRIVIAL thing, IMO ... and I hope you enjoy the rest of the monster known as Chronicles (aka Bertha) ... Sueric
| Reviewed By: reviewer.net On: December 08, 2004 23:33 PST
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And one more thing, what I said below is mostly meant for that person called 'Duh'. Er, no personal feelings involved.
| Reviewed By: reviewer.net On: December 08, 2004 23:31 PST
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Look, i was kinda hurt by that. I just said what I thought, and I said it fairly, and truthfully. This review is for the author to read. For her to analise and decide whether I'm being an asshole, or not. In fact I did say it was up to HER to delete it. Not for you to see and critisise ME. I didn't put any unreasonable ratings like 1/10, or stuff like that. I just said what a felt, and you don't have to get so worked up about it. Anyway, if you want to argue with me farther, lets just forget about it. I don't want to see so many negative-like reviews in here anymore anyway.
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 18:25 PST
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sneaky wench has to be about the funniest phrase ever lol
| Title: Wow pt 1
Reviewed By: Kane Ryzzol On: December 07, 2004 04:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful beautiful beautiful! Let's see if there are other ways to describe this, since you've so obviously put so much care into your flawless story: Fantastic, awesome, tremendous, tremulous, astounding, electrifying, unbelievable, uncanny, spectacular, magnificent, imposing, amazing. Wow I could go on and on! A friend of mine told me to read this fic. Got tired of all the hapless drivel out there, the stupid PWP's where Kagome and InuYasha hopped into bed for no real reason other than hormones. What I loved was where you started the story, the completely realistic view of the two at odds. What I find interesting are those that say that Kagome 'uses Osuwari' too much. I mean, in the original Japanese manga, he's constantly calling her a bitch, stupid, etc, and that's okay. Let him have 'it' said to him and all hell breaks loose. Like another reviewer said, Kagome *in Chronicles* does warn him, does tell him before hand. It isn't her fault he just pushes it further and further. Funny how MOST of these incidences are prefaced by InuYasha's stupid ability to stick his foot in it first. Funny how MOST of these incidences are prefaced by InuYasha calling Kagome a 'bitch' or the like. Funny how certain people seem to have completely ignored THAT while they were reading. Also funny how that seems to be the only 'criticism'? Oh, other than the idiot who didn't like the bachelor party. Since none of the actual main characters did, that was pretty damn stupid on the reviewer's part. | Title: Wow pt. 2
Reviewed By: Kane Ryzzol On: December 07, 2004 04:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anyway, enough of my rant. I've read the good, the bad, the ugly. Chronicles falls into an entirely different category from that. Intelligent, angsty, with an added layer of humor when the tension is just too much, there are way too many favorite scenes to state them all. I think that the one chapter that stands out brightest in my mind is the one when Inuyasha remembers his past, the way things were supposed to end. The poignancy of his memories along with the awe-inspiring way you presented them was just brilliant. Normally I don't read lemons but the friend who suggested and badgered me to read this fic said that I had to read them because they were, in and of themselves, the most beautiful things in written form she'd ever read. I agree. Something about the emotional way you wrote these scenes turned sexual acts into emotional odysseys. They were amazing in the emotions evoked, in the characterizations you brought to life. They passed physical and went straight for the heart and that is what a great writer does. I hope you've done more with this fic than simply telling an abso-fucking-lutely brilliant story. I hope you've inspired other writers of fanfics to take a closer look, to go for the guts when they try to write for just the libido. My hat's off to you! Thanks for sharing! Wait… Did you really write this in less than six weeks? Dang… !!! I've had thesis papers I've spent longer writing than you have on this…!!! Again, I am awed by your greatness!
| Title: Second Time
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 03:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished reading through for the second time, and I loved it just as much this time! Where to start? The eye-watering laughter over monk-in-pain and other various shades of red ... InuYasha's undesputable baka-ness ... Falling out of the tree during that earth-shaking kiss? The diary for ears trade ... EVERYTHING! ::sigh:: Do you have any idea the amount of beauty this fic evokes? Just as good whether you're reading it for the first time or for the millionth ... If I have a bad day, I get this fic out and voila! Day instantly better! It is hard to understand the emotions you put out there that are wholly experienced in the hearts and minds of your readers. How many times did I have that 'flutter' in my chest when they stared at each other? How many times did I feel like smacking InuYasha for his blatant idiocy? And yet we still love him! Oh, and do have to agree. I don't think there is a soul on earth who could have even come close to rivaling Chronicles in sheer power and beauty in written form, so for you dumbasses who can't see that ... Get a grip, is right. Kagome tends to use Osuwari less often on him in ALL of Sueric's fics than in most ... Which leads me back to the way you described Kagome's heartbreak when she ultimately had to use the subduing effect to calm him, and in his ultimate breaking of the rosary. That was just astounding. Keep it up, Sue, and don't let ignorance get you down! ::wink:: All da luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurve of da Fluff! =Diane=
| Title: Duh
Reviewed By: I Love It On: December 07, 2004 03:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey all you who are bitching... Have you SEEN the anime/manga??? Kagome osuwari's him MUCH more there. Get a grip, will you? The way Sueric gets rid of the kotodama rosary is bloody brilliant, so shut up and read or put the fic down and step away. If you don't start with flawed characters then what's the point of writing? Grow up, dumbasses. InuYasha acts like a complete jerk 99.9 percent of the time, and unless you were reading something that I didn't, A) Kagome CONSTANTLY warns him before she does it and B) He blantantly ASKS for it... So unless you can do better (which I SERIOUSLY doubt) then shut the hell up and GET OVER IT... or do you really like OOC that much????? Sorry, Sueric. That just pisses me off. InuYasha acts like an asshat and Kagome's 'mean' for letting him know he's overstepped himself? But I suppose the same ignorant inbred jackasses think that it's all right that InuYasha is constantly belitting and being mean to Kagome and everyone else who let it slide because he's had a 'rough life' ... Jeez, get a grip, Morons!!!!!! ~Saina MeCreedy
| Reviewed By: mapleleaf~ On: December 07, 2004 03:15 PST
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AHH I AGREE! its soooooo annoyingwhen she keeps doing that. inu seems like the girl and kagome the boy :(
| Reviewed By: reviewer.net On: December 07, 2004 02:21 PST
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um, one more thing. I hope you didn't find that insulting or anything. At the very most, please call it constructive critism =). If you did not like it then feel free to delete it =).
| Reviewed By: reviewer.net On: December 07, 2004 02:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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hi there. Just wanted to make this comment:- its not very nice when kagome keeps saying owasuri to inuyasha. You make her sound like an total meanie and ass. And it really makes me wonder how inuyasha can like her. In this fanfic, she seems to get annoyed very easily at inuyasha, and then uses her 'owasuri' as an advantage to just WIN the arguement. Call me strange or unique or anything, but that just seems to piss me off. Whenever they get into an arguement, she always seems to win. If they get together (i'm only at the first few chaps), its just not nice when the girl keeps winning. The guy has to like WIN sometimes, you get what i mean? now that i've said all that, let me get on to the other stuff. I can see you put in lodes of effort in your fics, and i've been enjoying reading them :D. Do keep writing!!! You have like a million fans at your feet :D.
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