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| "Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 1095 ] | | Pages (73): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] | Reviewed By: Krami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 02:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the second time I've read this story. It was that good. Now I have a question for you. InuYasha said something like 'Kagome I know when you're birthday is', so my question is, is there going to a "chapter" for Kagome's birthday? Absolutely wonderful. I'll bed and plead for Kagome's Birthday..I guess I already did. Take pity on a poor fan. 10/10
| Title: xbitternessx
Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 06:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're the best Inuyasha writer on this site, and I don't care what anyone says. I loved Purity, Metamorphosis, but I decided to read this before I reviewed you. I can't say anything that hasn't already been said, but I hope your original stuff does get published, since this can't. I hold writing as kind of a religion in my heart, I guess. I'm absolutely insane, and it's the only thing that makes me feel better. And while I'm okay at it, you are gifted. Don't let any stupid little kids with attitudes flame you and bring you down. If you've noticed 75% of the writers on here can't even spell. LOL. But I just really wanted to compliment you before I go to bed. I've barely slept in the last week, and it's all your fault! (Well, I suppose it's mine, but whatever...)
| Title: holy s***
Reviewed By: chibitenshi On: September 24, 2005 21:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg.... i couldn't stop reading this fic.... I put aside all of my homework and stuff, just to read it.... ITS AMAZING!!!! how did u do it?!
| Title: Wow..?
Reviewed By: Sutasei On: September 22, 2005 11:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been around the net for a long, long time now. And I always read Fan Fictions. And.. wow? I mean, your work is origional. And the way you bring the characters to life through words.. It's amazing. I currently read Metamorphisis. Loved it. I'm working on reading Chronicles. So far I'm still in awe. The whole ear thing is adorable. But anyway, I guess I really wanted to ask you a question. Well, In one of your chapters [I forget which.] Kagome is rubbing InuYasha's ears and he ends up falling asleep with his head on her lap. Would it be alright if I drew a picture of that scene? I thought that was really cute. I planned on putting it up on my deviant art site. I will credit you and link back to your stories for the idea. That way you'll have more reviews. :D Right!? Okay! Lol. Anyway, Thanks for letting us viewers read your stories. They're amazing. =) Don't stop writing, please. You're really good. Thanks again! -StacEy Email: Sutasei@hotmail.com
| Reviewed By: sedelia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 22:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story, I was literally on the computer for three days straight, just because I couldn't stop. I really love it, thanks for writing it.
| Title: Chapter 34
Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 19:46 PDT
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Action! Action! Action! Action!...I will admit...I somehow landed into this story...YET again (so much for writing on my own...) and just had to tell you how in awe I am at the action sequences. You really honed your skillz on this one! And of course...Sari's favorite...I LOVE FLUFF!! *Huggles Sueric's fluffy romances* These early kisses in the last few chapters...*fans self* yesh...goes back to reading...hee hee hee
| Title: Best f***ing story ever...EVER!!!
Reviewed By: InuKomando On: September 05, 2005 20:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are single handedly the best writer of fanfics Ive ever had the pleasure of finding ever!!! The way you give the characters these rich personalitys is beyond me! I worship you and your fics. Hale Sue!!! Ok, back to "Chron"... The whole gang got through the well, AWSOME!!! Looks like 'Purifying-The-Jewel' red is the the new forte. Miroku is starting to rub of onto Inuyasha...and Baywatch? hilarious... wonder what Sango thought of Haselhof? Hehe...this is the only story ive read were so much detail was put in... Sesshoumaru is nice? Katosan helped save Shippo? Norimitsu is a panzy? Have i gone CRAZY?! Yes... keep wrinting your best, i have a long way to go before i catch up...! Im Out... -InuKomando P.s. Does fluffy collect teath? LOL
| Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 08:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh i loved this fanfiction.Inuyasha is so adorable with the way he treats the kids.Awww...i just loved this fic and i have to say u are one the best fanfic writers i have ever read.keep up the good work.oh this is a story i will read over and over again for sure!
| Reviewed By: RodTheBladeStar(nsi) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 17:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One thing to say, okay, a LOT of things to say: One: Dang, this is a LONG fic; I've been working at it for a week, and I'm barely halfway through. Two: What about the nose-tweak? Is Inuyasha starting to think of everyone's second-fave kitsune (I think Kyuubi and Kurama are sorta tied in first, call me crazy) as a son, rather than just an annoying little brat? I'm intrigued by this little display of 'dissapproving love'... Three: WTH did you mean by Katosan knowing Inuyasha wasn't in the future? I'm beginning to get suspicious of old dog-ears' fate in this plot! This doesn't end like 'Romeo and Juliet,' does it? Four: Holy crap. I've never seen a fic this good! It's so long, (having the attention span of a gnat) I would probably have given up on this many chapters ago, but it's so good, it's addictive! (like poor Inu's ears!) Five: YOU ARE EVIL!!! Poor dog-ears can't get a moment alone with Kagome, can he? Poor guy, and they were SO CLOSE, too! >pouts<
50/50 (perfect!)
| Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Bladecutter1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 16:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think those people who threaten you should walk off and die. There, I said my fair share. I love your writing. ^.^
| Title: Chronicles
Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 21:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic was absolutely amazing! I love the way you keep everyone in character and the situations you come up with are pure genius. I think you hit the nail on the head with the whole Sesshoumaru plot to help InuYasha. Sesshoumaru is not evil and I think your fanfic demonstrates that. No one will ever be able to explain how you could bring every character from feudal Japan into the future to live in Kagome's time without making it AU. You just have so much talent! One of my favorite things was that InuYasha could read Kagome's diary and thus the reader could see her feelings and Inu's response to her feelings towards him. You make the story realistic too, there is no sugar coating, and this fanfic shows that life is not just a bowl of strawberries, it's hard and sometimes cruel but in the same breath, it can be beautiful and worthwhile.
| Reviewed By: blacksoulreaver13 On: July 20, 2005 23:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! You're absolutely wonderful, how do you do it? You're stories are so amazing. How come Sango is always the one with birthing problems though? Kagome could have problems to, but whatever. Alright well you're any awesome writer, so um....yah......
| Title: Truly Amazing!
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 04:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I already previously rated the entire chronicles fiction on fanficiton.net I'd just liek to add my review of A Chronicle's Christmas and Inyuasha's birthday, which were not available for viewing on fanfiction.net. Both of the little side-stories to Chronicles were just as beautiful as the actual Chronicles story was. It was nice to read even more about Inuyasha, Kagome, and their new family. ^^ As usual, I love your unique descriptive style and I can't wait to read more of your work! Please keep up the great work and continue writing in the future!
| Reviewed By: yuki_chan_89 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 13:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So wow. You have patience AND skills. After finally finishing reading this fic, I'm over-whelmed by contentment, is that strange? It just ended so perfectly. And, between you and me, half-way through it, I actually (without realizing) started tweaking people noses. -laughs- oh well. I found that SO CUTE! -grins- that was a really good idea. So, umm, thank you. You did a wonderful job, I'm going to read the updated purity right now. -grisn again- I can't get enough of your writing! Chao chao!
| Title: inyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr1956 On: July 03, 2005 20:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first read this particular story of yours in May. I loved it then, and I loved it the last 3 more times I read it as well. It does remind me of the little one I only got to see and hold for a week, and she has been gone from us since. She will be 5 this month and theres not a day goes by that I do not think of her. The choice was not mine, but my daughters. But I stand by it no matter what, as I told her I would. And to think, people gave you such grief over the subject as a surogate, that you wrote about it in one of your stories is appalling. To those who dont like what you write...GO READ SOMETHING ELSE...NOONES STOPPING YOU! I love your stories. And I have no doubt you're probably sick of me saying it, I dunno. But you are a very talented writer and your hard work, to me, should not go unappreciated. Because I too, sit at my puter for hours sometimes reading your stories. Cant help but get pulled in. As for all those flamers with nada better to do? Let em stick a torch up their backside, let em sit on that flame for a while. I learned long ago, I cant please everyone, so I dont even try anymore, I am what I am. Well, thanks for letting me ramble.
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