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| "Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 1095 ] | | Pages (73): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Kagome093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 21:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
men always acosiate themselves w/ thier swords LOL that was freakin HALARIOUS
| Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 07:39 PDT
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oh, and as ALWAYS, i'm so glad our widdle Inu got an intensive dose of Kagometherapy...much needed, and, as a avid reader of your works, ALWAYS a joy to see unfold...just wanted to say that!
| Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 07:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! um...wowzers! if there was a Nobel prize for fanfictions, i could SO see you get multiple awards! this is a MAJOR page-turner...err...scroller/mouse clicker (lol!)! the diary, the journal, the introspections, the EARS (tweakers!), Sexxshoumaru and the "big brother gene" maturing over the centuries (yokatta!), Shippou (sniff...he got a family! me sho happy!!!!!!!), wow, Sango and Miroku...NEVA saw THAT coming! Kagura...whoa! and it's just too much to comment on...but, u go, gurl! u, once again, ROX ME SOX!
| Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 13:30 PDT
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That's just MEAN!!!! I cant belive you did that!!! Poor Shippou! :Crys loudly: Question will Inuyasha stay human forever?? Because the fact that you must make him Hanyou again becaus e I know the type of writer you are. Plus I read all seven Purity.
| Reviewed By: Indi_t On: April 25, 2007 08:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
64 fricking chapters...and FINALLY a lemon....i have never been so happy in my life...I LOVES IT!!!
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 16:50 PDT
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I just finished chapter 82 and a question poped in my head is the scroll the last pages in InuYasha's mother diary?
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 20:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, I've finally made it to chapter 79, and I am so happy!!! Shippou is finally gonna tell InuYasha and Kagome the truth. Th ewait was killing me, I can't see how they didnt know, there were so many clues, so many slips, and then there was Gramps!!! But oh well I am just glad that they will finally know the truth. I'm so glad that Shippou will finally get the family he deserves!!! (Notice how many times i said finally in this reveiw, weird huh?!)
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 17:38 PDT
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You never cease to surprize me. At the end of chapter 54 with InuYasha and Kagome kissing i was expecting Songo and Miroku to show up as usual and accidentialy spy on InuYasha and Kagome and the "BOOM!!!" the one the only mysteriously evil, not so good guy, Katosan shows up and then the chapter ends!! Well just stopped to review and now im off to finish reading your super-duper story!! Have ya self a great day, ya'hear meh!
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 12:28 PDT
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Ahhhh! How could you jut do that, I trusted you!!! Oh boy I freaked out when you said that Katosan was the one at the shrine. This can't be good, he must have known that InuYasha was on the other side of the well looking for him...So that means that InuYasha couldn't defeat him in the past....Oh no this is terrible, I'm so glad you finished Chronicles or the wait and the suspence would have killed me, lol. Have a great day@!!!
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 17:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so great! I've finally made it to chapter 31, and I am all the way in tears. The 'Monk-In-Pain-Red' is genius pure genius, it had me dying laughing the first time I read it, and the part where Kagome wanted InuYasha to reach for her, and he reached for ramen, i had to just read it over and over again. My parents came up to see what was wrong with me the way i kept laughing..I love your work, and hope you continue writting for along long time. Hope ya have a great day@!!! \(^ ^)/ `
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 10:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a amazing writter. This story is so funny and InuYasha's blinking thing is hilarious. Keep up the good work, and hope ya have a nice day! \(^ ^)/ *
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 16:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I love all of your fics, I've read all of the purity's all the way down to 'Purity 7: Avouchment' and descided to check out your other work. 'Chronicles is a killer I almost died laughing in the first five chapters. You are a master-minded genius!!! I just had to stop and tell you how wonderful you are. I hope you continue writting for a very long time!!
| Title: *chapter 86*
Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 04:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading chapter 86, and I just HAD to say that WOW! You make the most beautiful lemons ever! I've read many, but the one you write are just.... beautiful. I just had to say that. Nearly touched me to tears... *continues reading*
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 14:04 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know that I've ever reviewed this fic here or on AFF, but I just had to say that it is wonderful that you put the blinks in this story. They had always fascinated me too and I had wanted to use them, but now...you beat me to it. ^_^ So, I've never tried. Anyway, that's a cool inclusion. ^_^ Snowfall
| Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 03:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The great Sueric strikes again! I've been reading all the purities and since i caught up to avouchement, i started looking at your other fics. Chronicles is, quite simply, one of the best works i've evr read. every chapter containeda moment that made me fall off my chair laughing, or nearly start sobbing with the angst, or make me so happy that my grin could cut my head off. It's wonderful how you can come up with such original, creative stories while still remaining true to the charachters we all know and love- or in Norimitsu's case, hate. There's very little in written works that makes me throw the book at a wall, but i was looking for something heavy when Norimitsu killed Shippo, and when SesshoMaru was shot, i swear, if i hadn't had enough self-control to read on i wouldn't have a computer to write this on. Maybe because i'm not a great writer myself, but i love how you can write in a way that really makes you care about the charachters. My only nitpick, in the end, is some of the reviewers. Demanding lemons, or flaming over a part of the story that bugs you, or picking over apparent plot holes, really annoys me. Sueric has a perfectly balanced number of lemons (not prudish, but not bunnies) and they're beautifully written as an act of love rather than smut. If you don't like the story, read something else. And there are no plot holes- it all makes sense in the end. i love rereading a story to see how it all falls into place. Thanks for brightening my day! :):):):):):):):)
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