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Reviewed By: tessie On: October 22, 2004 07:27 PDT
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cool, ten or 15 chapters. i've been away, so. not sure how many i have had to catch up on. i liked this chapter. it was so sweet! and cute. wonder what the sword will look like now? tessie
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Reviewed By: bloodykitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 07:19 PDT
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I had to read both versions, so you get a review from FF.net, and here. Great chapter, but I wonder what will happen now that the Jewel is purified....
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Reviewed By: rogueyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 23:24 PDT
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I absolutely LOVE your Fiction!! The characters are right on!! Also, I just want to say that I support your decision to choose when and if you are going to put in a lemon chapter...Way to go!! Again, congrats on a wonderful fic!!!
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 21, 2004 22:41 PDT
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*gasp* NOOOOOOOOOOO! It can't be! Ack! I hate it when things like this happen where there's two different sides to one story! I'm never gonna be able to wait patiently now. *grumble* Me and my love for angsty fics. LOL
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 22:19 PDT
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oh great. NOW how am I going to get any sleep. Groan.
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Reviewed By: D.NineAsher On: October 21, 2004 21:13 PDT
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OMG! THAT one HURT! You SO write angst better than anyone I've read, LOL! It hurts, but I hafta' love it all the same. Wonderful chapter - these are the ones I live for! Thanks! Dev
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Title: BTW
Reviewed By: Kagome_chan_17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 18:26 PDT
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btw, this is great, if the Aya (even though it was completely disgusting) kiss had never happened then there may not be a chance for an amazing make up and complete confession. The pain they suffer now will make them cherish their happy moments and maybe by nearly loosing her, InuYasha will open his eyes.... HERE THAT DOG BOY!!!!
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Title: Stubborn Mutt
Reviewed By: Kagome_chan_17 -not signed in [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 18:20 PDT
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Okay InuYasha, I love you dearly but Kouga along with every one else is right... You should listen, I understand your reason but you are being risky and even if not at least talk to Kagome... She's really hurting, but then again I guess your neck is to... Gomen ne.... Guess you'll have to add another youkai to list of those who need tetsusaiga up their butt... tee hee.... Do us all a favor and if you ever get up and actually get her to listen to you, tell the girl how you feel.... bakayasha....
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Reviewed By: Sharpieg On: October 21, 2004 18:17 PDT
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Wow... Inuyasha is gonna have some 'splaining to do... but at least it wasn't totally his fault... silly cat... serves her right, getting vaporized.. at least I'm assuming she got purified.. hehe Now Inuyasha just needs to get himself together, go get the girl, and do the mate dance! (Don't worry... not pushing for the lemon, but I can't stand to see a girl unprotected.. hehe) Great story!!! I'm addicted!! Time to go watch Outlook check my email every minute......
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 17:06 PDT
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This one will wait until your right another chapter before letting lose her wrath! *warning growl* ... Nah, though I don't really want our beloved characters to feel pain ... it does make for a good story! And plus "make-up's" can be fun! ;)
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Reviewed By: Gaudy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 16:01 PDT
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I'm at the edge of my seat. Every chance I get I check my e-mail to see if you updated. I so can't wait for the next chapter. How will Inuyasha explain this? Or how will Kagome realize what really was happening? I'm just very grateful you update so fast! I don't know how you do it. Write so fast and always be able to deliever an amazing chapter.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: October 21, 2004 14:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, I heard what Kag muttered lol, she's really starting to get antcy on the subject isn't she? I guess I can't blame her but still, I also heard Kouga this chap, you guys read along this, don't you? You've got less brain then I thought, which isn't saying much cause I thought it was a video of a monkey that slams the gold-disk-things together (you know what it looks like), lol but seriously, love the fic, hope Kagome gets her wish soon, maybe she should grab back that stone she gave him. ;)-Kitsu
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Title: Chronicles
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 14:52 PDT
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By inference, the fang isn't for Inu, It's for Kagome, so is it how you'll solve the life term problem AND hiding her humanity from Youkai? Am I close? As you can tell, I've been thinking, and I really shouldn't do that. This last chapter makes me so GLAD that I'm not a teenager any more. If there's a wrong way to say it, do it, think it, or want it, that's what teenagers do. Poor kids, I'd cuddle them both if I didn't want to tweak their noses REPEATEDLY! Idiots! How long is it gonna take Kagome to remember how long it took him to recover after he broke the rosery going after Shippo? Grumble, grumble, grumble, grumble. I am just SO glad that I'm not young anymore. I just don't the the energy. Great Chapter Sue, as you can tell, it got a he** of a rise out of me.
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Title: You Go Girl!
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 14:47 PDT
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I'm so happy Kagome took care of that lynx thingie. Grrrr...How dare she. She should go back and kick Inuyasha's butt and demand he either mate with her or leave her because limbo is no way to live. Just my opinion. lol
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Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 14:33 PDT
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Inuyasha let that lynx kiss him? Oh, she's so dead the next time he sees her, I don't even think he'll wait to hear what she has to say before he Wind Scars her in oblivion. Of course that's after he recovers from nearly being purified by Kagome, again. Maybe he'll learn his leason and just take Kagome, that'd end a lot of arguements.
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