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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 17:28 PST
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People are giving you grief for plotting around Miroku and Sango? bah! Silly humans! Another fantastic chapter! I can't wait until we find out what caused Sesshy's change of heart.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 02, 2004 16:45 PST
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I must say, everytime you write a lemon it's like it's not even raunchy or too much sex. I loved it. Absolutely loved it. How you compared it to the ocean...beautiful. I could never write like that. You are just so awesome. Teach me oh great master of imagination! LOL. That sounded so corny, but I don't care. And I'm not that big on Sango/Miroku lemons either. But that one was just breath-taking. And I'm not brown-nosing or anything. I just really love the way you write. Ok, getting back to Ch. 79...this is definitely something new for Kagome and Inu. School for Shippou? In modern time? I can see it a little, being that he loves crayons and toys and books and stuff. And what's this "thing" Kagome is gonna do for Inu? Now I'm really curious. LOL
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Title: Just a few rambling questions...
Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 16:31 PST
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It's just coming to me now as I re-scan through chapters past. Sesshoumaru gave Inuyasha a warning about Shippo... and that when the jewel was purified he felt the shift, did he mean some of the past had been changed? So, if he is still trying to correct a wrong, then am I near boiling on Inuyasha dying or getting seriously hurt? Near freezing is probably more like it, but still... and another point was about Inuyasha and Kagome's very emotional talk over her being mortal, didn't Sesshoumaru tell his son, she is so powerful now that she can control her life-span? or that now she has mated with Inuyasha that their soul-bonding would mean lengthy lives??? I have so many questions, and I know you'll answer them all with more updates and chapters... we still yet to find out about the missing diary pages also... lol, did I forget to mention before how much I love this fic?? ^.^
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Reviewed By: ShoukaMiko On: November 02, 2004 15:56 PST
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Looks like Sesshy has some 'spailin' to do. What was up with that whole changing destiny thing he talked about a couple chapters back? Ha,ha, gotta love the warm fuzzies from this chapter. Shippo kit you rock!
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Reviewed By: Efi On: November 02, 2004 15:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I finally catched up with you girl it took me a week to read all your Inuyasha's Fanfic they really hooked me up, I'm really curious about Sess motives, can't wait the next chapter, I just can see little Shippo saying 'Hi Uncle Sess'.
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 15:23 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well it's been a while since I've given a review! That isn't to say I haven't been reading!!! No way! Just haven't had a lot on online time; my laptop's hard drive needs replacing so I can only get online when my Dad's PC is free for use and that's not often. Back on track to reviewing; I adore how this has been drawing out, and I especially love the attention focussing around Inuyasha and his pack. Kagome and Shippo joining his main family and now Miroku and Sango have finally purified their own jewel! Thank goodness, I honestly thought the poor monk-turned exterminator was going to die from sexual tension! Sesshoumaru of the future, is my absolute favourite "Make Inuyasha's life a living hell practitioner" I adore his meddling and even his younger self has been arrogantly mouthy about his so-called worthless half-bread brothers skills not to mention praising both Inu and Kagome. Shippo's adoption is far by my favourite thing he has done so far, though I have a funny feeling Sess has his motives in check, the scary thought is where is Inuyasha of the future??? Sesshoumaru's constant warnings and riddles may only suggest that the hanyou dies at some point in the past.... he has already let something slip, and that intrigues my interest! I can't stop reading this and I always look forward to your updates.
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: November 02, 2004 14:43 PST
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I like that you include everyone in your story but focus mainly on Inuyasha and Kagome. You have kept it true to the manga and anime, in that although the plot revolves around Kagome and Inuyasha, the other characters are important to the story too. I've been following this story since its beginning and I am still thoroughly enjoying it. I look forward to each update. Thanks, and please continue to write like you want to write and don't listen to anyone else. 'If it ain't broke, don't fix it!' :-)
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 13:47 PST
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Read more still love it. The angst, though...it's killllliiinggg me. It is good to see (read?) Kagome and Inu being affectionate. Good bloody show.
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Reviewed By: ShoukaMiko On: November 02, 2004 11:59 PST
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Yay! Miroku and Sango finally got together!*wipes tear from eye* LOL! That's about the reaction I thought Inuyasha would have. I wonder what "daddy" is gonna do next.:P How did no one else catch that?
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 11:20 PST
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i think i missed the part where Kagome went postal on Ayamakita but good for her....the wench deserves it. as for Sesshy and his wonderful intervention methods, i know there is so much more you have yet to disclose and it worries me. anyway, as always, great job.
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell -nli On: November 02, 2004 06:46 PST
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Sweet lemon. I guess Inuyasha can tease Miroku now about purifying stuff with Sango. Thank you for your dedication to this fiction! I really appreciate the frequent updates!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: November 02, 2004 06:43 PST
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hehehehe. Yey! Shippou called Inuyasha, father! I've been waiting for that. It was great. Can't wait to see the reaction, te hehe. Keep up the great work, Sue! Love your story as always! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 04:42 PST
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Shippo called Inuyasha father? Oh boy is he ever going to some explaining to do. Of course once he tells Inuyasha, Sesshamoru may have some explaining to do. Or maybe Inuyasha would just thank him, after all he did him a favor he didn't ask for, didn't he? Good chapter though, so full of emotion, I love your writing, keep up the good work, just don't over work yourself.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 17:55 PST
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I can't tell you what I loved most there is just to many to choose from. I will say that the bacholer party was the funniest chapter yet. I've been meaning to review before now but I didn't want to review until I read ALL the updates. And you update fast girl! Not a bad thing. It's very good actually. I also love the way you took the chacters and helped them mature into what you wanted instead of having them do OOC things just because you could. I applaud your beautiful plot and twists very InuYasha-like. The vocabulary usage is also impressive, and I'm not just talking about the japanese terms. I'm just guessing but from the way you write I can whole heartedly assume you have seen all the shows and/or read the managas correct? The original characters are an asset to the story as well. I'm still in the dark about what it is Sesshomaru was trying to prevent I know it has to be something awful if he is working so hard to correct it. I have no clue why his uncle would want them both dead, and now of all times. It's a sad thing that InuYasha wasn't treated with the respect he is rightfully owed. He was born into nobility either way you look at it. His mother was a princess and his father was the king of all inu youkai. I think the house was a great idea for Kagome now when she gets mad at InuYasha she can say she going to her other house! But I suppose that the need time slip means no real alone time. And 10 daughters!Poor Koga. I'd say more but the there is no more room.Goodjob! |
Reviewed By: Meghan On: November 01, 2004 12:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love your story, you have such original ideas. When are you gonna update Chronicles on mediaminer.org? Hurry up and finish this story so you can write another one
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