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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: November 10, 2004 17:21 PST
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Okay, I have been slacking off on the reviews, but what a couple of great chapters. So Sango should be around 6 months pregnant now, right? Hope everything goes alright for her. Norimitsu has been oddly quite, when do we find out what kind of bug he has up his...well, you know where. Did Inuyasha ever get that scroll from Sesshomaru?
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: November 10, 2004 16:38 PST
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hehehehehehe. Awwwww- it's a boy! :) I likes the name! So are they going to keep having babies until one of em' is finally a girl just because Inuyasha is so stubborn? hehe--- cute cute cute-- can't wait for more! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: GranolaBar - not signed in On: November 10, 2004 16:33 PST
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The baby is here! The 9 months went by pretty fast. I can't wait for the next update!
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: kolohe (not signed in) On: November 10, 2004 16:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey again. loved the chapter as usual... i dunno about the chapter title, though... seems like a pretty BIG blessing to me. ;) note to inuyasha... hey, there's still NEXT time...
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 10, 2004 15:56 PST
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YAY! A boy!! I feel bad for InuYasha, though. He really wanted a girl. And of course, Shippou is already tired of having a brother. A sister would be a good idea too! LOL And Sesshoumaru with twin girls?!? Wow...talk about having your hands full. LOL
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 15:44 PST
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Wow...I'm almost caught up! Until tomorrow that is...*sighs* Slow down girly! LOL. Keep up the good work, dammit and...um, thanks for the acknowlegment???
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 10, 2004 14:48 PST
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So sweet. Thanks for the nice chapters. This story has been great the whole way through!
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Title: Chapter 91
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 14:16 PST
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Ah, a sweet baby boy. Guess they'll have to try again for a girl, look out for those full-moon nights!! LOL! Hey, how old is Nibori?? He seems to be a 'grown-up', but I know youkai age differently.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 10, 2004 12:21 PST
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All these babies are popping out left and right!! Well, will soon be popping out left and right. LOL. So I'm curious to know if these flashbacks of Sesshoumaru's have anything to do with what happens in the near future. A lot of them are actually scaring me, like the one where Kagome dies and Sesshoumaru doesn't use Tenseiga to bring her back. Don't scare me. It's not a good thing! Then I cry and get all sad and upset!! LOL.
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Title: Chapter 90
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 09:23 PST
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Yeah! Babies for everyone!! Don't you think Miroku would have said 'We're pregnant"? After all, he very much wanted children too. Okay - I think I get that Myouga could travel to the modern world, clearly Sesshoumaru used him to get the ball rolling to correct the mistakes made in the past. How did Myouga do that? Myouga had to have knowledge of the original time line before the jewel was purified, before the original time-slip closed. He must have had a means to time travel, and for whatever reason has remained in the past. What of Sesshoumaru's Uncle, Norimitsu? He knows of Miroku working for Sesshoumaru, and by now probably also knows that InuYasha and Kagome are there as well, the wedding was well covered for the youkai crowd. What would be in it for him at this point?? Does Norimitsu have any memories of the original time-line?? Do any of them, other than Sesshoumaru? You have my undivided attention. I can't wait for the next update, and thankfully, you never seem to keep me waiting.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: November 10, 2004 07:17 PST
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damn that attacking wall paper! good thing Inuyasha killed it before it could cause any harm! hehehe Cute, funny chapter, loved it! Poor Inuyasha, he always seems to be the joke when every Sesshoumaru, Miroku, and he are together. So what color did they decide to do the room since they cannot seem to agree on the sex of the baby? I also loved Inuyasha telling Kagome that she better not take that long when in labor-- hahahaha-- oh Inuyasha, I think you just signed your death contract. hehehehe Well- Keep up the great work and I'm sure you'll be hearing more from me soon. Take care!!! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: TamokoLily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 05:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want you to know, that I've been reading all 90 chapters of this story since mid-last week. That. . .was a lot of reading. Lol While I didn't have time to comment on every chapter individually as I went along, just know that I think this is an amazing piece of work and one of the best Inuyasha fanfictions that I've ever had the pleasure to read, (and I read lots of them!) It was awesome, awesome, awesome! I'm looking forward to what's coming! ^^; Maybe I'll go back and write some comments.. I doubt it'd matter too much but eh. . .*wanders off* (Btw, I gave you 10's on everything- I'm new to this system but I hope 10 is the best- that's what I meant!) Take care!
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Reviewed By: The site won't ALLOW me to have a name On: November 09, 2004 21:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find myself greatly enjoying your fanfics. Your writing style is very engaging, and I cannot wait to read more. Your fics are such epics that I leave each one fully satiated and satisfied. Thank you. I also just read your bio here on MM.ORG. You were raised in central Indiana? Me too! Where abouts do you come from? Close to Indy at all? Noblesville was my old stomping ground. I hardly recognize the place anymore, though. I'm just excited to meet another Hoosier from the central parts. Also, could you maybe post the name of your children's book on your bio? I'd be interested, especially since I KNOW you can write well. Anyway, thank you for such a high quality, heart-pounding fanfic! -Emily
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Reviewed By: rowan_lynn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 20:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an amazing author. I have read your other stories (and ashamed I haven't reviewed them). It takes a very creative author to tell the story of Kagome and Inuyasha coming together but you have managed to tell at least three different versions that fit these characters well. Thank you for writing such incredible stories!
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: November 09, 2004 18:15 PST
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L M F A O!!!!!!!I am still sputtering and laughing. What a great chapter! Thank you for all the great entertainment that you provide us. It never ceases to amaze me how you can turn such quality work out on a daily basis. Definitely keeps me coming back for more. There is no way that I can possibly guess which direction this story will take next. Conquer on O'Great Authoress! cynbad146
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