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Reviewed By: xXInuyasha_luvaXx On: November 12, 2004 23:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Thanx 4 the birthday wish SexyYasha! ^_^ cute name LOL like cute little Sexxhoumaru! now for the other sexy dudes....lol anyway! GREAT chapter! love love love it! I've been lookin and i cant find a single author of inu fanfics whose as good as you! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 15:50 PST
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Wow...finally coming to the end of it all. I'm so excited! Can't bloody well wait! I'm sure the ending will far exceed my expectations!
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Reviewed By: Prsnr24601-FFICsimon On: November 12, 2004 13:30 PST
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It's been a while since I have reviewed, although I have been keeping up with the story. It has progressed into one of the best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. A lot of drama has occured, much of which was obvious to the avid critical reader, yet all was solved morre brilantly than I could have imagined. I still have a few unanswered common questions. However that is not what I am truly waiting for. I believe I can describe it in this metor I came up with, mainly for your story: life is like a folktale. You can change the story, however the plot remains eternal. In other words you cannot change the true path of your destiny. All you can do is alter the course in how you get there, and find a way to lead the end result to or against your favor.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 12, 2004 10:36 PST
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Ooooo final battle! I wonder what Norimitsu does for a living in the modern world. I guess he's rich and stuff being that he could probably kill people just to get what he wants. Hehe. So Kagome's gonna go after InuYasha. Someone's going to get hurt. I know it. My spidey sense is tingly. LOL
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: November 12, 2004 10:12 PST
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wow, wow, wow. Powerfull chapter! Cuteness in it too! I just love the handy dandy updates sent by e-mail--hence the almost neverness of me logging in, hahaha. Just put Sue as a favorite author and, POOF! Everything she writes gets sent to your e-mail. It's magic, really. Glad it's not over yet-- gotta have some sword up ass shoving time! Well, I'll be waiting for more, as always, keep up the AMAZING work! hehe ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 06:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Those last two chapters had some very powerful images and emotions. I can only hope and pray our favorite hanyou, doesn't lose himself to his anger. Man, is he going to angry when he finds that Kagome has followed him. But he should know better by now that she isn't one to just stand by and let him take all the risks. I really can not wait for the next chapter, this story is so beautiful. I have loved it from the beginning. It's writers like you that make me want to be a better writer, in the hopes of elicting the emotions like you have. I think that is one of greatest gift a writer could ask for. I will be checking tomorrow for your update.
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Reviewed By: xXInuyasha_luvaXx On: November 12, 2004 00:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
!!! This is such a super good fanfic! I always love how one thing just flows to the next...but the journal thing is cunfuzling me...Did Izayoi just not want those last pages to be found? Cuz of what she wrote? And why didn't Sesshy look at the scroll before...we all know he would want to read it! ....And it's 1:25 in the morning....YAY! IT'S MY BIRTHDAY! IM SO HAPPY!! UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!
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Reviewed By: Sozoteki On: November 11, 2004 13:50 PST
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That's it! Norimitsu is really due for a major ass kicking. That BASTERD! In my humble oppinion, Inuyasha should find something even bigger and more painful than just Tetsusaiga to shove up his ass....... ...Wow, you know your into a story too much when. You do realize of course that your writing is so good that I find myself getting the storyline of the actual anime/manga and that of "Chronicles" confused at times. **sigh** I quess I'll just have to live with it. Oh poor me, eh? **giggles** Keep up the excellent work! :D
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 11, 2004 13:48 PST
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Oh. My. God. Those scrolls explain A LOT. How dare he use his mother like that! And I thought Katosan was bad! I had no idea. I would have never guessed that was what was written on the last pages. I'm surprised she would actually confess that to InuYasha. Oh no...does this mean that InuYasha could actually break down and...cry? NO!! Kagome better make this all better. LOL
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Title: Kitsu read with a grimace that last part.
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: November 11, 2004 10:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe, guess BloodyKitsune's gonna live up to his name. Kag isn't the only one who's going to be mad about that one. Anyway how are you Sueric? Any recent problems?-Kitsu
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Reviewed By: tessie On: November 11, 2004 07:55 PST
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whoa, this was a hard chapter to read. what a bastard. i feel for Katosan. he not only had to impart this info, but watch. how very sad. poor inuyasha. i feel so bad for him. but kagome and the pup will make it better. tessie
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 22:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can this story get any better? I simply love it! But I can already see the beginings of another plot twist. Poor InuYasha and Kagome can never have peace for long. I hope you update soon! This story is like a good book, you hope it never ends.
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Title: *snicker*
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: November 10, 2004 21:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Give it up Yash, like it or not, it's a boy and you can just shut it and try again, after all, this worked out well, didn't it? Oh yeah, how can they find out those last two pages if they're in the future now? Wait, the papers Katosan gave Sexxhoumaru must be the last two pages, it WOULD have been easy for him to snag them from Norimitsu after all, wouldn't it? That explains the pages, but why the hell is Katosan Fluffy's delivery boy anyway? Oh, and how much has he changed since he threatened to defile Kagome? After all, his past actions are a very clearly startling contrast to his future demeanor.-Kitsu
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Reviewed By: Maerlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 20:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's funny that Inuyasha says he had no say in the baby's sex when it's the male that determines what gender the baby will be. So Inuyasha says he wanted a girl but his body had other plans. Confound that cursed Y chromosome! ;o) Or maybe his X chromosomes are just weak swimmers...hehehe :)
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Title: Been away for too long!
Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 20:07 PST
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Sorry for not reviewing before now. Been busy with work, lot of catching up reading your fic and somes others, crying a lot when Inuyasha was caught in the well, but was ok after that because I had the next chapter to read. ^.^ And all of that with "morning sickness"! Why do they call it that? It's all day long this queasy feeling. I'm all the way with Kagome. But at least her ordeal is finish now that she had "her" boy. There you go InuYasha, always trust your mate, she knows more than you on these things! ~.^ When Norimitsu will appear, will the two brothers help each other now? With their "bonding" at the birth of each of their child(s)? And I like your new fic Metamorphosis, great beginnings.
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