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| "Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 1095 ] | | Pages (73): [ « ‹ 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 › » ] | Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 14:53 PST
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Well, well, I always thought Sessy had a thing for kitty cats...heh. Too bad cats aren't nearly as loyal as dogs or wolves. Love the mating rituals for hanyou in Inu's mum's diary (what an awkward sentence, sorry!). One thing, though, am i the only one who thinks Inu-Yasha has had some bit of experience w/girls before Kagome (I mean other than that bitch Kikyo)?
| Reviewed By: laptawenzell - nli On: November 05, 2004 13:47 PST
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Nothing too wierd about adults liking Inuyasha. I too am a 40+ fan. We watch the Japanese imports together. My son learned to read from the subtitles - we called it the Hooked on Manga reading program. Thanks for another great chapter! Poor Kagome and Inuyasha, they almost made it to Totosai's. Sigh. If you've had kids, you've been in the same boat.
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 05, 2004 13:13 PST
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Catching a frisbee with his mouth?? It reminds me of that episode--which has escaped my mind at the moment--when he caught the stick that Kagome told him to "Fetch!" LOL. Poor Shippou had to learn the hard way about animals at the zoo. And one more thing...all of a sudden everyone is able to go through the well? Is that a good or bad thing?
| Title: Chronicles
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 13:07 PST
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Gomen, Sesshoumaru-Sama. I did not mean to infer you killed someone. I was only thinking about what you told Katosan. "I will not help, nor will I hinder" Well, it's not an exact quote, but the meaning is clear. You're doing the Switzerland thingy. Back to the fic. So, Katosan found Ms. Kitty, and is going to help her. Heh, heh, getting soft in your old age. snicker, snicker. Poor Inu can't win for losing. When he first gets Kagome, he keeps losing her to school, and now he finally get Shippo, and he's losing him to school. Life is so unfair, but remember, for what your losing, what you've gained makes it all worth it. Again with the empty box, and the rolled up, sealed scroll, and the missing pages of Izayoi's diary. Now there's Myouga, and the secret of the well. I feel like this fic was based on the board game "Clue". It was the butler, in the dining room, with the candlestick!!!!lol Oh how I love this fic. Maybe if I'm nice, Suric will let me keep a copy of it somewhere. Maybe if I beg?
| Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 04:34 PST
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Oh no, poor Shippo nuat'vw felt horrible seeing the zoo. Souta really should've known better than to take the kitsune there, he should be punished in some way. It is only fair.
| Reviewed By: Brenda (aka babmidnight) On: November 04, 2004 22:40 PST
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I loved this chapter. Love how inuyasha and Kagome or slowly getting more playful if you get what I mean. I like how they are not all of a sudden into doing all the different kind of teasers and stuff. Some of that stuff can be overdone and when that happens you almost want the clean verison. :) really glad you didn't over do it. Now to get rid of my headache. Brenda
| Title: grrrr
Reviewed By: beccajo On: November 04, 2004 20:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i've been reading this fic for quite soom time now and i'm sorry i haven't reviewed earlier (actually i tried on fanfiction.net but it never lets me) well the story it excellent i must say but ur driving me crazy with the constant cliff hangers. Now i love cliffs at the end of like a scarey storey or theoretical thing so that u can take ur mind away and imagine on ur own i like that's an awsome thing to do; bringing the possitive qualities from books to other such things but with now leaving me on dispense when i know something is coming and soon but i can't just flip the page it's going to be there..it's frusterating but truly i think it's awesome the way u update dayly (well not really on here anymore but..) i'm just wanting to put a possitive review to a story that i adore. plue i love the added commentary at the end with the "character's comments" and the daily thoughts quite original and entertaining. sorry i wrote so much but i need to make up for 81 chapters of keeping quiet.
| Title: hey.
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: November 04, 2004 19:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"And it honestly scares me that you write Totosai so well... are you really senile yourself? ;)" Carrot, you should know by now, she rights ALL the characters so well, besides, it doesn't take senile to write senile, it takes genius to write genius, but in simple place, the brain has either not grown or deteriorated, the first one can be wrote by but a child or adult if you can get into it, and the second just takes a very good author. But hey, they ARE rare, so you should be proud, I've seen 'senile' potrayed as 'nuthouse' before and I'm pretty sure that isn't the meaning.-Kitsu
| Reviewed By: tinkerbell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 17:55 PST
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I had to sign in for this one. I really loved this chapter, even though it left me with more questions than it answered. It was nice to see Inuyasha and Kagome play house. Thanks for letting us read a little bit of Inuyasha's journal. What the heck is future Sesshomaru keeping from Inuyasha, and why does he keep looking in a box to make sure it's empty? What does the well have to do with all this? Why was Myoga ignoring Inuyasha? Will Shippou ever be allowed to go to school? What's Norimistu been up to all this time? I like the interludes where the lovebirds spend time in the modern era. Please update soon, I have to know what it is the future Sesshy is keeping to himself. Try as I might, I just can't figure it out. By the way, he never opened that scroll Katosan gave him in the past? Will we get to see what's on it? Will we ever find the last pages of Inuyasha's mother's diary? Will I ever stop asking so many questions? (probably not)
| Title: im just thinking....
Reviewed By: inuyashasfavegirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 17:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wonder if any1 like...kagome,sesshomaru,or lei can talk to inuyasha about babies and sex(XD)...and inuyasha might have an idea about having a baby....so does kaogme XD...like the title says...im just thinking....lol...update soonn!PLZ!!!!
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 13:56 PST
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One more thing...Inu-Yasha...purified and human??! Yeek! Say it ain't so!
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 13:29 PST
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I love how hyper affectionate Inu-Yasha has turned out at times. It's perfect and I'm glad to know that I'm not the only one who thought of such things. Oh and the Sango and Miroku stuff is fucking brilliant! I love it.
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 04, 2004 11:10 PST
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Again...wow. I'm always blown away. Yea, so what's with this box? Is it empty because whatever is supposed to be in it hasn't happened in the past yet? And what's in the scroll?! Too many questions that need to be answered! The anticipation is killing me!!
| Reviewed By: Aitu--- not signed in On: November 04, 2004 10:27 PST
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ouuu, Seeeeeeeeeecreeeeeeeeets! Sesshoumaru!(whispered Conan O' Brien style, please say that you've seen it because it makes things So much funnier!) Hmm, spill it Sexxhoumaru! Nope, I still haven't forgotten his little nick name--- speaking of-- hahahaha Looks's like there's going to be a new addition to the family! woohoo! Must. Know. Secrets! If. Not. Will. Die. ! Does that sort of persuasion work on ya, Sue? Yea.. I didn't think so. =( But hmm, great chapter! I loved it, loved it, loved it! You sure know how to write em! Can't wait for the next chapter! Take care! ---Aitu
| Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 08:23 PST
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A comment about something in the end-notes of chapter 81... There's nothing odd about adults liking anime. I'm in my 40s and belong to adult Inuyasha online 'clubs' where I get to share my hobby with other adults who like Inuyasha and anime. I have all the Inuyasha Viz DVDs released to date and I've got the subs downloaded or bought from Japan up to episode 141. I have the manga up to v. 33 in Japanese (I use the online translation sites to 'read' them) and the Viz manga up to v. 18. I have other anime and manga titles that I collect too, such as all the Cowboy Bebop episodes and movie, the Tri-gun series, Blue Gender, and some that were only released in Japan. The Viz version of Inuyasha manga and the anime on Cartoon Network is watered down and translated with slight changes from the Japanese version, which has frequent use of foul language and has more dialogue showing the unspoken love between Inuyasha and Kagome. Viz targeted young teenage boys as an audience for Inuyasha originally and that is why they made changes to the story from the original Japanese. In Japan, Inuyasha is aimed at teenagers and adults, not adolescent boys. I know this because I have the Japanese subs and manga translations and I follow news about Inuyasha from Japan. The Viz version might be for American teenagers but the real Japanese translations are definitely for adults as well. So I don't see it as odd that Sueric likes it and I love her Inuyasha stories, especially, 'Chronicles'. :-)
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