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| "Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 1095 ] | | Pages (73): [ « ‹ 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 › » ] | Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 07:31 PST
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Oh yeah, food for thought...that kid? You know - the one going around trying to sabotage the good penname's of authors all around the internet? Especially as he targets Inu websites - you wanna know what I really think? I think he'll get his just desserts when he realizes how many sites...how many fics...and how many authors he will have to flame in the same manner as he did you. Let's do the tally, shall we? Over 34 thousand Inu fics on ff.net, over 8200 on mm.org, gazillions between aff.net, animespiral, kougafangirls, single spark, and the list is never ending. lol. Yep, I'd say carpal tunnel or something like that.
| Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 06:58 PST
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Final thoughts, eh? I just realized about 6 chapters ago that they existed. lmao. Score one for Sueric and 0 for me. Later, Jazz
| Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 23:53 PST
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holy fucking shit. (excuse my language) 80 damn chapters! ::rubs her sore eyes:: wow. and I actually READ them all! When I noticed this story a little while ago, I wasn't sure if I'd like it, it didn't look incredibly interesting or coherent) but I'm glad I took the time to read it. My only complaint with your writing is that you keep spelling one particular word wrong. "Canape" is a food. "Canopy" is an over hanging of cloth or tree branches. And how the hell do you update so often with 2 kids to raise? I'm a preschool teacher and my students make me so exhausted I barely want to move by 6:30 much less write! Anyway, I'm enjoying the story and I hope you update again soon.
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 20:53 PST
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i'm starting to believe i'm following completly where you are heading with this. ::grins:: if so, then my predictions since about chapter 50 are on key. ....Sesshy is really not a bad guy, i'm getting to learn this quickly. good name for a chapter, sessh saves the day. woo-hoo. so now what about the illusive bad guys...where are they all hiding now? they really are about to get their (or his) ass handed to them. go sue, amazing as always.
| Title: Ineffable
Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 17:23 PST
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So I finally caught up with your story, and after deciding that I could not come up with the right words, I decided to let a thesaurus do it for me. acceptable, ace, admirable, agreeable, bad, bully, capital, choice, commendable, congenial, crack, deluxe, excellent, exceptional, favorable, first-class, first-rate, gnarly, gratifying, great, honorable, marvelous, neato, nice, pleasing, positive, precious, prime, rad, recherché, reputable, satisfactory, satisfying, select, shipshape, sound, spanking, splendid, sterling, stupendous, super, superb, supereminent, superexcellent, superior, tip-top, valuable, welcome, wonderful, worthyabsorbing, affecting, arresting, august, awe-inspiring, consequential, cool, deep, dramatic, effective, eloquent, excited, exciting, extraordinary, fab, far out, forcible, grand, impassioned, important, imposing, inspiring, intense, lavish, luxurious, majestic, massive, momentous, monumental, moving, noble, notable, penetrating, profound, real cool, remarkable, rousing, splendid, stately, stirring, striking, sumptuous, superb, thrilling, touching, towering, vital, well-done So. Good work. :)
| Reviewed By: GranolaBar - Not signed in On: November 03, 2004 16:11 PST
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Awww. It's one big happy family now! Can't wait to see what's instore for them though!
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 15:38 PST
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Hmmm...sneaky wench needs to win some, eh? Good show, you make me ignore all my other internet activities! I'll be reading this story for weeks. LOL
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 03, 2004 14:47 PST
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HAHA! InuYasha's gotta tell him one day about sex and babies. LOL Please tell me you'll write a chapter about that! I would love to see InuYasha sputter every word that comes out of his mouth! LOL
| Title: Chronicles
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 09:51 PST
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I probably about to tie myself into knots, but here goes. I have the same question Angelstars has. Where is Inu and Kag in the future? Where is Shippo? When Sess was thinking about "it all started with the Kitsune", it sounded like some kind of bizarre domino effect with him losing everybody who was family. Horrible thought. Is he trying to encourage Kag and Inu to move to the future permanantly to avoid a, future to them, past to him, disaster which involves his uncle and Miss Kitty taking out the Inu tachi? I'm giving myself nightmares here. I'd say tied up in knots fits. Poor Sess, he seems very frustrated, and not very happy. With teeth like his, biting his tongue could be a very bad thing. lol
| Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 08:45 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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:nods: True, True, I knew my questions would get answered in future chapters. I remember now, Totosai kind of let something slip about "Someone being dead" then made up the excuse it was Myouga... so now you've brought back that into the story, I am even more convinced that something went wrong in the past and maybe not only Inuyasha, but Inu-tachi also... now I only pray Inuyasha takes Sesshoumaru's warnings seriously! He has too!! I adored the family bonding, lol, I could imagine Shippo practising Sankon Tetsusou; reminds me of the great attack Inuysaha once "attempted" to teach Shippo "Kagaga no Tusubaba!" lol, could you just see them both doing that?! Lol. I look forward to more chapters and special moments between Inuyasha and family!
| Reviewed By: Rinicat...(nsi as her other self...) On: November 02, 2004 22:57 PST
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Grumbles....ff.net is being pigheaded....almost like Inuyasha...won't let me read...sniffs. Anyway...Inuyasha adopted Shippo...that's so sweet. But still, where's Big Bad and Ugly....what's his nuts...oh yeah...Norimitsu... I mean word will get around that Inuyasha has adopted Shippo and with Sesshomaru's approval...how the heck is he going to react to that? I mean he hates, them both for Inuyasha's mother and their father...what's he going to do now that a Fox has been adopted into the family?
| Reviewed By: Rinicat...(nsi as her other self...) On: November 02, 2004 22:56 PST
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Grumbles....ff.net is being pigheaded....almost like Inuyasha...won't let me read...sniffs. Anyway...Inuyasha adopted Shippo...that's so sweet. But still, where's Big Bad and Ugly....what's his nuts...oh yeah...Norimitsu... I mean word will get around that Inuyasha has adopted Shippo and with Sesshomaru's approval...how the heck is he going to react to that? I mean he hates, them both for Inuyasha's mother and their father...what's he going to do now that a Fox has been adopted into the family?
| Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 20:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm inhaling deep breaths right now, taking a short break, since I've read straight through without reviewing once...I feel incredibly compelled to let you know, in spite of the many reviews you've already received, how wonderful, sweet, and incredibly romantic Chronicles is. I'm loving every moment of this! By the way, I know that you don't think that your fics are all that special, as have been mentioned in some of your reviewer responses, however, we readers appreciate the time and efforts you take to bring to life the characters and the sensations and reasons behind all that they do. Luv, Jazz
| Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 19:42 PST
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Yay. Shippo has a father-i mean, papa. Awesome. I was waiting for that. I personally love Sango and Miroku, and they do often get overlooked. It was nice to see some time dedicated to them. By the way, at least up till now, the chapters aren't showing up at ffnet. I just came here, cuz thats how desperate I am to read this. That or i have no life. And watching presidential stuff got boring. It makes more sense to tune in around 11. Excellent job, as usual, and i pity you with your sons situation. (though i have brothers, so i feel a similar pain)
| Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Kagomesjewel(not signed in) On: November 02, 2004 18:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what Kagome will do for Inuyasha that will be so special... ::insert hentai chuckle::
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