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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 16:23 PST
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0o wow!!! i have to agree with Kagome, that was just a bad bad wedding...awsome awsome writting of course. wow. i feel sorry for Kagome for having katosan and his wench there. wow...regardless of her helping kagome, thats just not good. it could have been worse though, Norimitsu could have shown up....that would have been the cherry on the cake. poor shippo....why does he always get to disclouse information at the wrong time. LOL. its perfect. this should soooo be the follow up the the show. no published novel...no short story, no other fanfiction...hell no movie that i've ever seen has been able to toy with my emotions so vividly. i'l be sitting behind my computer saying 'oh no oh no, shippo close your mouth...' and get really strange looks. its great! keep it up. :-)
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 15:14 PST
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I haven't gotten a chance to mention how much I like your...er...brotherly dynamics between Inu and future-Sessy. I've always been a big beleiver that Sessy didn't so much hate Inu-Yasha but hate how he acted, among other complexities, of course. Oh, and of course I'm surprised Jaken is still alive. Always figured he'd either leave Sessy's side out of pure seer frusteration or perform hari-kari on himself in a fit of depression LOL. Like that woulda killed him!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 11:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, all I can really say is this story truly rocks!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 06:48 PST
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When I pictured through this whole event Sesshy with a little way too innocent smile on his face - the phrase, "Blast your immediate but inevitable betrayal!" came to mind (a phrase my friends and I have been playing with... don't really know where it is from) but it really isn't betrayal it should be more like "Blast your immediate but inevitable poking!" ... but that just doesn't have the same ring. In fact that phrase works for a lot of the characters ... there is a lot of "immediate but inevitable poking" going on between the silly group. I love it! *grin* And am I the only one who fell out of her chair laughing when Ayumi said, "its so big"? I just wanted to respond with - "you have no idea. Maybe it is a RennFest thing ... Also (and totally unrelated) - when a friend and I were watching InuYasha the phrase from Wizard of Oz came up and we couldn't stop laughing ... so if you can ever fit "I am going to get you, my little miko, and your little dog boy too!" into a fiction - you will be my hero!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: November 09, 2004 06:19 PST
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Great chapters! Maybe Lei can call Sesshoumaru "Sexxhourmaru" infront of Inuyasha and everyone else so that he knows how Inuyasha feels, hehehe. Ah, the wedding from hell. Don't you just love it when you say "well things can't get any worse".... and then they do! hehehe, a moat-- I'd like to see that--especially if it's filled with biting fish- not too kid friendly one would assume. Keep up the great work!!! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 20:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to tell you I check at least twice a day to see if there are any updates to your story. I think I have become completely obsessed (please excuse my spelling errors, it was never my strong point). I really do love this story, you never fail to keep the reader completly engrossed it the story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: A Karswyll On: November 08, 2004 16:33 PST
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::ahem, clears throat:: In the immoral words of a multi-millionaire fast food corporation... "I'm loving it." May your muse keep torturing you and let the words continue to flow. No writer blocks you hear? ::knock wood::
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 16:04 PST
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Okay, onece more, sorry, I'll stop bugging you. The bachelor party was brilliant, i nearly bloodied my upper lip, trying not to crack up like a mad woman. Although...sounds like they ended up a bit of a skanky strip joint. Come now, couldn't old Sessy have sprung for a Gentlman's Club (prettier girls and all)?
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 15:50 PST
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Iggy's Hentai Thought of the day: So...if Sessy shows up at the bachalorette party...will he be wearing all of his clothing? ::::blush:::: Oh god, I'm so sorry, that was evil!
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Reviewed By: Morly On: November 08, 2004 15:23 PST
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Finally Inuyasha gets the chance to tell Sess to bend over, I wonder how he feels.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 15:23 PST
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*sigh* I'm reminded of my own Inu-gang in the modern times yarns...fantastic. Miroku discovers pornograpgy, can't wait for that. I didn't have the balls to go there in my own stories, but I *did* have him flirt with Kagome's mother. LOL. Keep up the wackiness, no more ansty stuff for a good long while. "Purifying the Jewel". heh. Brilliant. Only Miroku could turn that into a euphanism for sex.
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: November 08, 2004 11:45 PST
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The whole Inu's experience level thing: maybe he fooled around with a slumming demoness or something when he was younger, but in the manga and anime, when Kikyo kisses him, she says something like: "I longed to do this when I was alive." Bitch. I just love her. She's like an unholy cross between Florence Nightingale and the Vampire Lestat.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 08, 2004 11:16 PST
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So I'm guessing tomorrow is the wedding day? What? No bachelor or bachelorette parties again?? I guess they all learned from the first time, huh? LOL. So, is that Norimitsu who was scratching up the furniture and growling at Sesshoumaru's pic? Interesting... He finally shows up. Why do I have this odd feeling that the wedding is not going to go as planned? Something's itching at the back of my mind. Norimtisu's going to crash the party, right? We need some action here!!! LOL
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Reviewed By: ErinBerin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 09:25 PST
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Haha, Miroku in the background on a cell phone. He sure is fitting in this time nicely. For some reason I keep picturing him as a Secret Service agent though. And InuYasha running a company, is the world ready for that?
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Reviewed By: efi On: November 08, 2004 06:25 PST
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I don't understand, how is posible to purify the jewel with a wish so petty as someone to stop talking, and beside why the jewel gave Inuyasha a wish if Kagome was the one to carry it. I mean if all that needed the jewell was a silly wish then Kykio o whoever was the guardian before could had whished for a peach or anything and bye bye problem, beside that it was a good chapter, won't Sess ever be nice to Inu? Will Inu say thanks to Sess any time soon? and that's all, bye :)
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