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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 01, 2004 12:34 PST
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What? No wedding night? LOL I'm sure you'll do that in the next chapter...right? Oh so now I get what Totosai was talkiing about when he said "son". I was hoping for a REAL son, but I guess they're gonna wait on that, unfortunately. *snickers* Poor Miroku. Although he did have it coming. The lecher.... LOL
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell -aka notzathros On: October 31, 2004 18:58 PST
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Sorry, reread the last few chapters and had to review again. Where's Kiarra? Seems like she'd like to be at the party. Is her absence also part of the great unspoken tragedy? I must admit, I've reread the chapter "Healing" many times. Something about the argument Kagome and Inuyasha have about her mortality is absolutely haunting. I get chills when I read the part where she challenges Inuyasha, asking how can one hunman lifetime be enough and he responds "How can it not be?" I also like the part where he tells her to stop worrying about the things they can not control. Good Inuyasha. Smart Inuyasha. Wish I could be as smart.
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Reviewed By: bloomz baby On: October 31, 2004 17:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol ohmibuddha! this has got to be my favourite chapter yet! ooooh InuYasha and Kagome have a son! I'm dying to know what Sesshy was talking about! poor stripper and lap dance lady... lol poor Sango and Kagome!!! Post more soon! I'd normally review on the fanfiction boards but everytime i go to the chapter it says chapter does not existcan't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 31, 2004 12:53 PST
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Miroku was actually scared of the lap dancer?? LOL. That's new. You would think he would've fainted from loving the attention so much! LOL
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Reviewed By: serene On: October 31, 2004 12:46 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first saw this fic on ffnet. You've really done a great job on this. This fic is both funny and dramatic. Great combination really. Love it. Can't wait until you update.
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Title: oops
Reviewed By: inuyashasfavegirl On: October 31, 2004 12:04 PST
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oops......after the other 1...i meant oh,and also ^_^;
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Title: oh,and
Reviewed By: inuyashasfavegirl On: October 31, 2004 12:03 PST
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od,and also...since after that 'the jewel get purified' thing.....doesnt kagome get pregnaut?
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: inuyashasfavegirl On: October 31, 2004 11:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahahahahahahahaha.......omg...lol...i cant...hahhahahahahaha....stop...hahahahahahaha...laughing....hahahahahahah ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahaha......keep..hahah ahahahahahahaha....updating...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.... *rolling on the floor laughing my ass off to death*
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 31, 2004 11:40 PST
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That was great! Loved the bachlor/bachlorette parties, hahaha. You played them off very nicely!hmm, son? What is this son's name? haha. Can't wait to see what else happens! Keep up the great work, Sue, I enjoyed every minute of it! Happy Halloween and take care! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: peachykeen(notsignedin) On: October 31, 2004 10:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL totosai at a strip bar bahhahaha...hilarious! now im wondering if something is going to happen to inuyasha cuz of the last part sesshomaru said at the end of that chapter....guess ill have to read to find out, awesome work! :o)
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell aka notzathros On: October 31, 2004 09:36 PST
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Wel, the bachelor and bachellorette parties went about as well as I expected. Groan. What did Sessoumaru mean when he said Inuyasha never cared when he should have. What happened in the past that everyone is so desperate to fix? Aaaargh, I'm dying of curiosity! Another thing, everyone else is alive and well in the 20th century. Where's Inuyasha, Shippo and Myoga? In speculation, I'd guess that if Kagome doesn't find some way to extend her life, Inuyasha won't live for long after she's gone. I don't think he'd suicide or anything, I think he'd just do terribly dangerous things until he finally ran out of luck. That being said, it still doesn't explain where Shippo and Myoga are. Hmmm... the mystery of the great unspoken tragedy deepens. BTW - Didn't get to review the previous chapter - great lemon!!! I love the way changes in her scent can stop Inuyasha in his tracks. As always, thanks for taking the time to write this beautiful piece of fiction!
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: October 31, 2004 09:14 PST
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Well, I have been behind in my reading, but what a great couple of chapters! I like Sango and Miroku being able to come back to the modern era with Inuyasha and Kagome. Kinda felt bad for Miroku, you had to know he would go into lecher-overdrive in the 20th century. The whole bacholer party thing was hilarous. Nice touch with Inuyasha's crest, when is he gonna find out about it? Can't wait to find out what's on the missing pages in the diary. What could be on there that would be worth all this trouble? What was future Sesshomaru's whole hissy fit about, and could it be? Is Kagome expecting? If so, her mom's gonna be pissed off. When do we get to see Miroku and Sango's wedding? As always, thanks for the story.
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Title: oh yeah...
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: October 31, 2004 08:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Also, WTF DID SESSHOUMARU MEAN!?-Kitsu
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Title: \/_\/
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: October 31, 2004 08:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can I have a minute to tear Nibori apart? Inuyasha is more loyal than anyone and would never do anything like that, how the hell did you expect him to like that!? And ESPECIALLY the "Entertainer" gotten for the bachelorette party, if I was him I wouldn't give anyone enough time to do anything, let alone let him get away. *sigh* Sorry, I just think that was a cruel joke that could've meant someones demise, but I guess it WAS funny! lol! Anyway, what's happening after this?
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Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 08:17 PST
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Miroku had a lap dance and managed not to touch the girls ass! Now there's something for you. I'm not surprised that Inuyasha didn't enjoy it Nobori, he loves Kagome more than naything and probably felt like he was mistreating her just by being there. As for the stripper man the Inuyasha threatened, I could see this comeing back to bite him in the ass. Good chapter in all, really enjoy your work.
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