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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 06:29 PST
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I laughed so much while reading that!!! That has got to be one of the funniest things ... *sigh* Anywho, still love Nibori and I have to wonder why all of the children of our "friends" seem to be so much more sensible then their adult counterparts. I am also really growing fond of Sesshy - it seems like he honestly wants to help InuYasha. *sigh* Your brilliant ... that is all.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 30, 2004 20:21 PDT
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Another beautiful lemon...er, marshmallow-y fluff? LOL I keep forgetting about the wedding which is probably something that's really important, right? Poor Miroku. Can he survive another few days? I can see him losing all control on the night of the wedding. LOL
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 14:58 PDT
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Sorry I keep on bugging you, especially since I just started reading this fic but...I'm really happy about the way it's going. (Although you make me feel guilty for my erotica heavy writing style lol just kidding, sort of). I'm not begging for a lemon when I say this, but I know when it comes it's going to be fantastic. Keep up the good work, dammit.
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Title: wonderful!
Reviewed By: Brenda (aka babmidnight on ff.net) On: October 30, 2004 12:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, love it, love it!!! Especially the ending where inuyasha says (not quote for quote) "if your going to smell like that I'll have to do something about it" That's funny when you consider the fact that shippou mentioned that his mother used to smell like that and his dad would go take care of it. lol :) If only shippou knew what that smell means. lol how long until Kagome and inuyasha figure out that shippou has inuyasha's fang. :) Can't wait for more. love this lemon. :) and I don't know why they call it lemons either. makes you wonder who came up with it. Brenda
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 08:54 PDT
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*sigh* I'm never going to catch up. I love this story, I really do. You are updating at such a breakneck pace - I'm still stunned by that. I'm only up to where the realize that the well has been buried. Yeah, that lemon chapter, very good by the way, and don't let others tell you how to write - you do this the way you want to and they can all go to heck, or some other hot place, like Miami. I love all of the things that you've come up with. They make me laugh, Monk-in-pain red, sneaky wench, nose tweaking - that whole falling out-of-the-tree was priceless!! Keep up the good work, I'll get caught up one of these days - maybe.
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Title: Stupid Mediaminer
Reviewed By: inzasha On: October 30, 2004 08:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I mean it I love it. But there is something you might want to check into. on fanfiction.net it says your story now has 75 chapters and is says you have the same on mediaminer but when i come to mediaminer it says you only have 70 chapters. try to figure out whats wrong its making me upset. But at least i have it on fanfiction.net well thank you for being such a good writer. And thankyou for spending your time to write this story. With much appreciation, Lauren
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Reviewed By: moon-fan-101 On: October 30, 2004 02:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooohhh...new shade of red! what fun... YAYYAYYAYYAYYAY! SHIPOU'S ALIVE! GO SEXXHOUMARU-SAMA!!! can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: moon-fan-101 On: October 30, 2004 01:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree with the Great Shippouni. if you kill him off, the masses will most definately revolt...
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Reviewed By: koga52 On: October 29, 2004 15:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 29, 2004 15:19 PDT
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Sesshoumaru at a bachelor party?? This I gotta see. I don't know if Miroku would make it to the wedding after the party! He'd probably keep drinking or keep touching the ladies. LOL!
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 14:13 PDT
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May I just say the word association conversation was brilliant. Keep it up! I love this story!
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Reviewed By: spooky tooky On: October 29, 2004 13:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great. I love it.
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell not logged in On: October 29, 2004 13:25 PDT
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A bachelor party? Right up Sessomaru's alley?? The mind boggles. I guess a yokai can change alot in 500 years. I had to laugh when Miroku asked if Kagome had purified anyting with Houjo. And Inuyasha's curiosity about jail was priceless. I've got a bad feeling about this bachelor party. Inuyasha is bound to be offended. I love how he's supposed to be this terrible demon but in truth he's this really nice guy. Oops. I shouldn't have said that. Don't kill me Inuyasha!
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Reviewed By: Shoukamiko On: October 29, 2004 12:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally caught up!I barely started reading your fanfic maybe two weeks ago? I'm not sure I lost track but in any case It's awesome. Miroku no baka! He didn't have to be such an idiot just to distance himself from Sango or whatever. I don't know maybe he was just being the hentai he is, but I'd like to give him the benefit of the doubt. Woo hoo! Count down to Sango and Miroku's wedding. The whole new shade of red is hilarious. I literally squeaked I was so mortified for poor Kagome! Wow this is going to be one hell of a week! ^_^
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 12:41 PDT
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"Did you ever purify anything with him?" that was priceless! Kagome should have castrated Miroku for that one! LOL. that was great!!!! amazing, as always. wow...in over one month you've gotten up sooo many chapters and with kids i might add. this could be a friggin novel with how many pages you have going! damn...once more a round of applause for Sue! great job!
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