| "Herbie's Drive Through Nerma" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Title: great
Reviewed By: garaa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic. this is the first Herbie-Ranma x-over i have seen(hence the 10 for originality). i am a herbie fan so enjoy some other fics!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jonakhensu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was quite entertaining. Neeko should make an appearence in any sequels. She's a great character, and should be developed more.
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Reviewed By: Guardiangirl624 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 20:41 CDT
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hahahahahahahahahahaha!A Code Lyoko/Ranma 1/2 crossover! That will be good!
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Taro M.D [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 19:59 CDT
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This has to be the most original story in the Ranma genre and it doesn't need to have romance or hentai scenes in it. I loved the Herbie films so i would be curious how the lovebug would fit in with th Ranmaverse. Now I see pretty well that he can cause a few surprises, keep up the good work and write the next one quickly... we might even get to see his love interest here ^_^
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Reviewed By: Classic Cowboy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 16:14 CDT
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great stuff! keep it coming, loved the happy/herbi scene
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Reviewed By: Nihaoranma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic can be summarized in one word: AMAZING! THe grammar isn't the best in the world, but the story is WOW!!! The best non-anime crossover I've ever read, and I like your taste in pairings. Not My favorite, but I like the Nabiki-Mousse combo.
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Reviewed By: CCDustyV On: April 17, 2005 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nicely done, just finished reading all the way through, and was a bit surprised at how well you meshed everything. great stuff, keep up the excellent work and put up more soon!
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Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell just froze over, Shampoo learned to use personal pronouns! Great chapter, now put me in it!
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Reviewed By: Otakufanatic [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 00:30 CDT
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Four thumbs up if I had extra hands. Fell off the computer chair laughing my head off. Reading this chapter really makes my day thank for a great read.
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Title: Good work, keep it up
Reviewed By: Neon Ronin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 22:59 CST
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This has been a rather enjoyable chronicle so far; of all the character insertions I've seen in fanfics, I've never seen Herbie in one before, so it's been fun reading this. I do have one slight problem, though... is Neeko a deliberate misspelling of Neko? I've never seen the Japanese word for cat spelled in English with two e's before. That's about my only real gripe, and it is nice seeing Genma getting some small modicum of sanity back. Keep up the good work; if you'd be kind enough to glance at my work-in-progress in the Ranma category I would appreciate it.
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Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was by far the best chapter to date. The way you put Neeko in was genius. I can't wait for the next chapter and is Panyhose going to show up?
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Reviewed By: Jarkota On: February 10, 2005 22:10 CST
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Pretty good. Nice action scene, nice plot development. 8/10
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Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finished all the chapters! I can't wait to read more and see how Ranma and Akane get along with their doubles. I also can't wait to see how Nodoka and Genma get along. By the way, when is Happosia going to appear?
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: Chibihalo On: February 04, 2005 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good chapter I enjoyed the reactions Kana had to seeing how Ukyo reacted to Ranma and Akane being in love. I also enjoyed seeing their first meeting with each other and the plane scene. Plus you brought a nice little end to the chapter. Another good chapter.
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Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 11:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe what you did to Ryouga! Bad author, bad! Still, its a great story and I can't wait to read more. I like what you did with Nodoka's sword, very poetic. Is Ryouga going to make another appearace, or is this the last time I'll see my favorite character? Maybe he will get lost going to D-Block and end up outside?
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Chibihalo On: January 24, 2005 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fine chapter. I liked how you referenced a prior Herbie movie. The fight was well written and you handled the trust issues between the villagers and Genma very well. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Jarkota On: January 23, 2005 23:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice use of action and dramatic effect, man. And, as always, that wheelie is a classic.
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Reviewed By: Jarkota On: November 22, 2004 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad. I would have liked some action this time around, but I can sense that you're building up to something.
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Chibihalo On: November 14, 2004 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a nice little set up chapter. The differences between the Nerima crew and their doubles come across nicely.
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Reviewed By: General Mayhem On: November 11, 2004 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad. Kind of low on action, but that's to be expected from a setup chapter. Nice work, as usual.
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Reviewed By: Jarkota On: November 08, 2004 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, though I would have been a tad more original in the race scene, and I believe you were a bit too harsh on one certain character. (Why can no-one see fit to give the Blue-Haired One a break?)
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Title: Chapter Ten
Reviewed By: Chibihalo On: November 08, 2004 01:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
An interesting chapter. I liked how you handled the race recreating the tunnel scene from one of the early Herbie movies. I also liked how you handled the whole Shampoo situation too. A lot of people think that Cologne makes Shampoo go after Ranma because of the kiss. They don't realize that she could just be following Amazon laws as well as trying to get a strong person like Ranma in the tribe. Not many seem to go with the school of thought that Shampoo could be doing a lot of what she does on her own and not because of the Kiss of Marriage or the Kiss of Death. Another fine chapter. It'll be interesting to see how the next one goes.
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Title: Chapters Eight and Nine
Reviewed By: Chibihalo On: November 02, 2004 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall these were very enjoyable chapters but I did notice a couple of spelling mistakes. In chapter eight beated should either be beat or beaten depending on what the sentence was supposed to say. In chapter nine you misspelled either ether. But other than that the chapters went very well and you brought up a problem that will be interesting to see how it becomes resolved.
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Reviewed By: Jarkota On: October 28, 2004 15:16 CDT
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Just keeps getting better and better. This race should be.....interesting.
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Reviewed By: Jarkota On: October 21, 2004 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good. You've captured Herbie perfectly, and the fight scenes are reminiscent of some old ECW tapes I've seen as well as current WWE matches. I'd like to see more like this.
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Title: Chapter Seven
Reviewed By: Chibihalo On: October 19, 2004 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a cute chapter. You handled the warm and fuzziness of it quite well. I liked your explination for Mousse being legally blind. It'll be interesting to see how things develop.
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Title: Chapter Six
Reviewed By: Chibihalo On: October 18, 2004 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute chapter. The fight was interesting and you kept Herbie in character throughout the whole thing. I like the subplot you introduced with the Amazons.
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Title: Chapter Five
Reviewed By: Chibihalo On: October 13, 2004 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting chapter. I enjoyed the little scene where Herbie was thinking about the whole situation.
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Reviewed By: SlplessWitch On: October 13, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, good job on this chapter as well. Good ol' Herbie. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the awesome work.
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Reviewed By: SlplessWitch On: October 11, 2004 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, you have an awesome fic going and Herbie is spiffy. I have to say, this is really crazy though, heh, but nicely written so good job. Keep up the great work.
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