| "Herbie's Drive Through Nerma" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Title: great
Reviewed By: garaa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic. this is the first Herbie-Ranma x-over i have seen(hence the 10 for originality). i am a herbie fan so enjoy some other fics!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jonakhensu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was quite entertaining. Neeko should make an appearence in any sequels. She's a great character, and should be developed more.
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Reviewed By: Guardiangirl624 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 20:41 CDT
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hahahahahahahahahahaha!A Code Lyoko/Ranma 1/2 crossover! That will be good!
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Taro M.D [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 19:59 CDT
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This has to be the most original story in the Ranma genre and it doesn't need to have romance or hentai scenes in it. I loved the Herbie films so i would be curious how the lovebug would fit in with th Ranmaverse. Now I see pretty well that he can cause a few surprises, keep up the good work and write the next one quickly... we might even get to see his love interest here ^_^
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Reviewed By: Classic Cowboy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 16:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
great stuff! keep it coming, loved the happy/herbi scene
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Reviewed By: Nihaoranma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic can be summarized in one word: AMAZING! THe grammar isn't the best in the world, but the story is WOW!!! The best non-anime crossover I've ever read, and I like your taste in pairings. Not My favorite, but I like the Nabiki-Mousse combo.
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Reviewed By: CCDustyV On: April 17, 2005 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nicely done, just finished reading all the way through, and was a bit surprised at how well you meshed everything. great stuff, keep up the excellent work and put up more soon!
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Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell just froze over, Shampoo learned to use personal pronouns! Great chapter, now put me in it!
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Reviewed By: Otakufanatic [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 00:30 CDT
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Four thumbs up if I had extra hands. Fell off the computer chair laughing my head off. Reading this chapter really makes my day thank for a great read.
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Title: Good work, keep it up
Reviewed By: Neon Ronin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 22:59 CST
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This has been a rather enjoyable chronicle so far; of all the character insertions I've seen in fanfics, I've never seen Herbie in one before, so it's been fun reading this. I do have one slight problem, though... is Neeko a deliberate misspelling of Neko? I've never seen the Japanese word for cat spelled in English with two e's before. That's about my only real gripe, and it is nice seeing Genma getting some small modicum of sanity back. Keep up the good work; if you'd be kind enough to glance at my work-in-progress in the Ranma category I would appreciate it.
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Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was by far the best chapter to date. The way you put Neeko in was genius. I can't wait for the next chapter and is Panyhose going to show up?
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Reviewed By: Jarkota On: February 10, 2005 22:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Pretty good. Nice action scene, nice plot development. 8/10
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Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finished all the chapters! I can't wait to read more and see how Ranma and Akane get along with their doubles. I also can't wait to see how Nodoka and Genma get along. By the way, when is Happosia going to appear?
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: Chibihalo On: February 04, 2005 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good chapter I enjoyed the reactions Kana had to seeing how Ukyo reacted to Ranma and Akane being in love. I also enjoyed seeing their first meeting with each other and the plane scene. Plus you brought a nice little end to the chapter. Another good chapter.
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Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 11:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe what you did to Ryouga! Bad author, bad! Still, its a great story and I can't wait to read more. I like what you did with Nodoka's sword, very poetic. Is Ryouga going to make another appearace, or is this the last time I'll see my favorite character? Maybe he will get lost going to D-Block and end up outside?
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