"A Choice of Roads" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Title: Cul-de-Sac chpt 1 Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 09:25 CDT Comment/Review: Oh man that was a hell of a beginning...Cul-De- Sac isnt that the finishing blow?? oh well that was great can't wait to see what will happen next:D THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: torrieoreo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 22:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really love how Kagome's companions are so blind to her abilities. She has hit the glass ceiling in the feudal era! *snort* If only she had flashy upgrades like the ones demonstrated by our favorite Tetsusaiga-wielding diva, her friends might take more notice. Or they might not. Please write another chapter soon. I can't wait to see how Kenshin's insanity clashes with insane historical reality next.
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 10:56 CDT Comment/Review: This is looking quite promising. It's the first time I've seen a believably set-up IY-RK crossover. You're doing well with the characterization, and I like what I've seen of the plot thus far. Looking forward to the next update!
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Title: thanks Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: October 09, 2004 02:37 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: cool anyway keep up the very good work ^_^
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Reviewed By: jin&kenshin's gurl kagome On: October 08, 2004 19:41 CDT Comment/Review: i love it!! i hope u update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: October 08, 2004 04:00 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEEE continu please I LOVE your story so please contin please
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Reviewed By: Deviant On: October 06, 2004 02:45 CDT Comment/Review: I admit I have a terrible addiction to random link clicking, but occassionally it surprises me. In other words, I'm intrigued. *chuckles* It's very difficult to find good crossovers, you know, but I found myself enjoying this story so far. There's a very good "beat" to the way things move, and I couldn't help but giggle several times over a line here and there. It feels like you're settling into the story, so I fully expect the minor issues with flow will hammer out as you write it. I'm very much looking forward to where you take it from here. ^__^
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 19:55 CDT Comment/Review: This is really good .. sooo what are the pairings ?! haha update soon !
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