| "A Choice of Roads" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mesuno_kitsune On: November 06, 2004 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
>.< You don't have no idea how mad I am at your skimpy sex scene...if you call it that! :_( WAAAA!!! I waited FOREVER for your update and bam! I get hit with a salami! But, nonetheless, I still love your story and it's veeeeery interesting that you named Kagome's father Kenji... Will Kagome die in this fiction? Cuz I believe if your going with the name thing...yeah...I'm all confused...@-@ Have you ever saw any other good Ruroni/Inu fanfictions? I'm not sure mine is any good...It's called Eyes Of Ice and is on Fanfiction.net...and yes-I am selfishly promoting my story ^_~
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Title: 9
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 17:41 CST
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that was so AWESOME...oh yea...oh man oh man can't wait for everyone's reaction's to that...hehehe..I think Sango will be happy for her especially since he is human and everything...oh man I really liked that...that was so cool...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: hana megami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I really like this so far, I even added you to my favourites( hope you dont mind!) Good Luck with the lottery! I usually don't read crossovers but because Kenshin is one of my favourite Samurai anime/mangas I had to read it! If you need any help with the whole 'your beta's dont know much about kenshin' thing, just e-mail me ^^ I would be more then happy to help out! Well, as you earlier stated, Kagome and Kenshin's personalities mesh pretty well! (I like the whole son/father having the same name thing...it makes you wonder *raises eyebrow*)well anyways! LOVE reading this, keep up the great work!*psst...* update
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am enjoying this fic quite a bit. please update soon. i look foward to your next chapter. Sincerly, Kage Hogosha:)
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Reviewed By: ashn On: November 03, 2004 23:21 CST
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i realy in joy your story and cant wait till hte next chapter
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Title: gr
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your evil, you know that? lol well anyways can't wait to see what happens next please update soon...^_~
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Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: November 01, 2004 01:36 CST
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sorry gamer bad
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Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: November 01, 2004 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi um sorry I can't read all the time that y I don't review but I love your story keep up the good work ^__^
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Reviewed By: mybyrdy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how cruel- to leave all of your fans hanging like this. i am very much enjoying your story, though i have only one slight critique: it feels as though we are kept at a distance from the characters as the story is progressing. a lot of the story is told in narration and not as personal as love stories to be, because, after all, it is a story... but besides that, i really enjoy reading your fic and hope that you cna work within the parameters of ff.net-- my account was deleted already for sexual content above an r rating.. and i find it liberating to write for mm.org, no guidlines, no confines... just raw emotion and unfiltered hentai thoughts. though i found and read your work a little later than the rest, keep up the excellent work and ill see you next update. ~~0.o~~mybyrdy
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 02:00 CST
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oH THIS IS getting GOOD...can't wiat to see what you will have them do now:D...oh man...can't wait to see how every one else will react...Inu-Yasha when he smells Kenshin on her...hehehe...well it was his idea...hehehe...Can't Wait THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 18:26 CDT
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Intimidate?!? Nooo!!! You wrote that kiss so well, I'm dying to see how you'll do with more citrus! Erm...let's see if I can get my brain back on track to write a more thorough review here... *coughcough* Okay. Excellent point about killing youkai/killing humans. Kagome (or, rather, you) put that quite eloquently, methinks. And yes, I'm all in favor of throwing off the angst for more pleasureable activities between those two, although the angst is a wonderful catalyst. The whole "eighteen, lonely, and horny" thing had me chuckling. The way you write it, Kagome and Kenshin were made for each other. Can't wait to see what happens in that meadow...that is, unless you pull a *me* and give them an untimely interruption. *winks* Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very well done. sex scenes are not limited by any means. just one thing. change the rating to"NC17". (^_^)
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Reviewed By: Kano_chan On: October 28, 2004 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooooooo I finished reading your last chap arg I was so anxious to read moreeeee pleaseeee update soon!!!! I asure you that's one of the most intriguin' and wonderful ff I ever read!!! ^_^ GOOD WORK
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter. i love how you made kag and i think that kag and ken make a good pair. They help each other just by thier very presence
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Title: mystical_saiya666
Reviewed By: mystical_saiya666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 11:56 CDT
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I LOVE THIS STORY!!! ^_^ I HOPE KAGS AND KENSHIN GET TOGETHER.
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