| "A Choice of Roads" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Title: Why, why, WHY?
Reviewed By: baka_kitsune(not logged in) On: December 21, 2004 16:05 CST
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Oh, that was a wonderful chapter! You are writing a sequel though, right? I hope you are! It'll probably be either as good as this story or better. Oh, why did you have to end it there out of all places?!?!(don't answer that)
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 09:43 CST
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Woooo! *waves a little flag* Go Kagome! Rack up another bishi! ~~ Okay, okay, a serious review. To be honest, I'm thrilled that you didn't go the sentimental route, and instead chose the more realistic one. I do believe that it's possible to love more than one person in a lifetime (unlike soooo many writers out there,) and I'm happy that you gave both Kagome and Kenshin somebody new. Of course, it's obvious where Kenshin's heart truly lies in the end, and Kagome will surely never forget the pain of losing not one, but two men that she loved. Then again, kitsune seduction does marvels for recovery, I'm sure. *winks* And so I salute you as the first author of a good RK-IY crossover (in English, anyway.) And congratulations on finishing the fic! That's gotta feel great!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 16:18 CST
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OMG...what happened here...I..I just don't know how to react to this...YIKES...can't wait to see Kag side of this cause I mean I like Kaoru most of the time but Kenji hates Kenshin..why he died w/Kag's name on his lips??? oh man...that was great but very very sad...I still refuse to see Reflections...I can't make my self watch it...oh well sorry great chatper but SAD
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Reviewed By: Broken_ Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting.....another chapter after kenshin is dead? i think this story still has a great plot and its only getting better. simply waiting for the end. cant wait to see what you write next.
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Reviewed By: VoidPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story hope there is a sequal
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Title: u rock
Reviewed By: fox3290 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i aboustly(sp?) love u'r story please please please write more. and is kagome ever goin to see Kenshin again and fall ii love cause i think that she should since see had to give up everything for the shikon jewel give her a little piece of heaven with her Kenshin and her little shippo to become a family anyways continue writing cause as i said before u'r story rocks out loud and really loud it is continue please cause if you don't i will bug the crap out of you ok you got that ok you got the ok
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Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 16:46 CST
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AHHH! you have to update! i guess next chapter is the last one, so please make it count. i noticed all throughout this fic that certain elements that appear when Kenshin turns Rurouni (like the laundry and cooking things) were explained by his presense with Kagome. i think that is so sweet! please though, i guess you are going to give Kenshin by giving him Kaoru, but dont let him think of Kaoru as a replacement for Kagome. He should love them both individually. Otherwise, it would be just like the thing with Kikyou and Kagome, only with Kaoru in Kagome's place. (Kaoru is one of my favorite anime characters) Please give Kagome a happy ending as well. I know she will have Shippo, but i think we all know that after having both him and Kenshin, anything else will seem rather bittersweet... UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: baka_kitsune(not logged in) On: December 12, 2004 17:12 CST
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Hi! Okay, that was a good chappie, but a bit dry all the same. A little more detail. Or, you know, the works? Good though!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 15:14 CST
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OK...WTH??? whats up w/that HOw could you just end it there??? AHHH!! you are so EVIL...EVIL I tell you that was AWESOME though...
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 14:44 CST
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Hm...you've got ovaries for ending this chapter the way you did, and that's a good thing. I have a few suspicions about how Kagome and Kenshin could be reunited, but I'll wait patiently for you to continue the story (isn't that magnanimous of me?) The fight scene wasn't as detailed as it could have been, but that fits well with the pace and atmosphere you've set up in the previous chapters. As for the Safari thing...*sighs* I do have Firefox, and that's what I've been using for the ff.net updates, but Firefox seems to be a bit buggy; it randomly switches websites for no reason. I am thisclose to giving up on ff.net altogether. Grr. Anyway, great chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: confusion.
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun, Unable to sign in. [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was confused in this chapter. Kagome said she wanted to tallk to inuyasha, and I thought she was until she proposes to Kenshin while Kenshin is out of hearing range. I couldn't follow the chain of events. Please rewrite it so that I can understand it! Please!
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Reviewed By: user: Kge Hogosha On: December 06, 2004 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mabye your right, a sequal might not work out in the end with tish story. you threw a good curve in this chapter. i don't think anyone saw it coming. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: nani-chan LC On: December 05, 2004 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice, really nice, first kenshin/inuyasha crossover fic ive ever read, and now u got me hooked, lol, real nice, and even inuyasha is in character.
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Reviewed By: Mesuno_kitsune On: December 05, 2004 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting...chapter...Actually, I'm lying....The review response to Somnambulicious made me wanna roll on the ground and laugh... Seme...Kenshin?...somehow he feels like the uke person to me... Have you ever wonder how Yusuke got his name?...yes...*claps her hands evilly* But seriously, if someone made a website with ALL the Inuyasha crossovers I would probably faint! Doesn't that give you an idea *wink* I feel...abnormally happy! And thanks to your fiction I have been moved to create my own Ruroni/Inuyasha fanfiction! Doesn't that make you soooo fuzzy inside? V-V...sometimes I need to lay off the sugar...Well, Bye!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 14:53 CST
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AAAAWWWEEE!!!! that was AWESOME...I liked the way you did that...very very nice...and no beating Kenshin up..YAY!! hehehe:D...THANKS...and Inuyasha was being a jerk for a good reason:D...that was XCELLENT:D
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