| "A Choice of Roads" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 09:27 CDT
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Another great (if short!) chapter. Inuyasha's speech there was rather...unexpected, but I have my suspicions about his reasons (which I'm sure you'll explain in time.) And Kenshin with daisies in his hair? Priceless. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: VB On: October 13, 2004 13:26 CDT
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I love your story and I agree there aren't that many Kenshn/IY stories out there and even less good ones. So do continue yours and maybe one day when I get home (college sucks) I could re-read some episodes of Kenshin so I could do their characters and write one until then I leave the stories to you and wish you good luck
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 10:37 CDT
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*preens* Thanks for the compliment! Anyhow, you're continuing to surprise me. So, Kagome could kick ass all along, eh? With the way you explained it, I didn't have to suspend belief to accept that. Kudos to you. And the whole poor treatment-penance thing...that was beautiful and poignant, a touch I've never seen anyone else add before. Looking forward to your next update!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 09:53 CDT
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Oh man...that was great I loved this chapter...I like the way you described her the fight....LOL...godhood...yea its nice seeing Kagome laughing so she's been there for a while then 3 yrs...man can't wait to see the rest of this..THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 09:41 CDT
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LOL...oh man poor Kenshin is really losing it now...he must think I'm gonna wake up now, just wait any second now I'm gonna wake up.
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 09:37 CDT
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LOL>..yep...so battosai is becoming kenish in front of our eyes...so are his eyes gonna change to that purplish colour that he has??? oh man cant wait this sounds really great:D
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Title: chpt 2
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 09:31 CDT
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LOL...that was great...hehehehe...can't wait to see how Kenshin will react to that bit of new...LOL...THANKS:D
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Title: Cul-de-Sac chpt 1
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 09:25 CDT
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Oh man that was a hell of a beginning...Cul-De- Sac isnt that the finishing blow?? oh well that was great can't wait to see what will happen next:D THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: torrieoreo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love how Kagome's companions are so blind to her abilities. She has hit the glass ceiling in the feudal era! *snort* If only she had flashy upgrades like the ones demonstrated by our favorite Tetsusaiga-wielding diva, her friends might take more notice. Or they might not. Please write another chapter soon. I can't wait to see how Kenshin's insanity clashes with insane historical reality next.
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 10:56 CDT
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This is looking quite promising. It's the first time I've seen a believably set-up IY-RK crossover. You're doing well with the characterization, and I like what I've seen of the plot thus far. Looking forward to the next update!
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Title: thanks
Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: October 09, 2004 02:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool anyway keep up the very good work ^_^
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Reviewed By: jin&kenshin's gurl kagome On: October 08, 2004 19:41 CDT
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i love it!! i hope u update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: October 08, 2004 04:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEEE continu please I LOVE your story so please contin please
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Reviewed By: Deviant On: October 06, 2004 02:45 CDT
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I admit I have a terrible addiction to random link clicking, but occassionally it surprises me. In other words, I'm intrigued. *chuckles* It's very difficult to find good crossovers, you know, but I found myself enjoying this story so far. There's a very good "beat" to the way things move, and I couldn't help but giggle several times over a line here and there. It feels like you're settling into the story, so I fully expect the minor issues with flow will hammer out as you write it. I'm very much looking forward to where you take it from here. ^__^
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 19:55 CDT
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This is really good .. sooo what are the pairings ?! haha update soon !
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