| "A Choice of Roads" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
| Pages (6): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 > » ] |
Reviewed By: mybyrdy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how cruel- to leave all of your fans hanging like this. i am very much enjoying your story, though i have only one slight critique: it feels as though we are kept at a distance from the characters as the story is progressing. a lot of the story is told in narration and not as personal as love stories to be, because, after all, it is a story... but besides that, i really enjoy reading your fic and hope that you cna work within the parameters of ff.net-- my account was deleted already for sexual content above an r rating.. and i find it liberating to write for mm.org, no guidlines, no confines... just raw emotion and unfiltered hentai thoughts. though i found and read your work a little later than the rest, keep up the excellent work and ill see you next update. ~~0.o~~mybyrdy
|
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 02:00 CST
Comment/Review:
oH THIS IS getting GOOD...can't wiat to see what you will have them do now:D...oh man...can't wait to see how every one else will react...Inu-Yasha when he smells Kenshin on her...hehehe...well it was his idea...hehehe...Can't Wait THANKS:D
|
Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 18:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Intimidate?!? Nooo!!! You wrote that kiss so well, I'm dying to see how you'll do with more citrus! Erm...let's see if I can get my brain back on track to write a more thorough review here... *coughcough* Okay. Excellent point about killing youkai/killing humans. Kagome (or, rather, you) put that quite eloquently, methinks. And yes, I'm all in favor of throwing off the angst for more pleasureable activities between those two, although the angst is a wonderful catalyst. The whole "eighteen, lonely, and horny" thing had me chuckling. The way you write it, Kagome and Kenshin were made for each other. Can't wait to see what happens in that meadow...that is, unless you pull a *me* and give them an untimely interruption. *winks* Keep up the great work!
|
Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very well done. sex scenes are not limited by any means. just one thing. change the rating to"NC17". (^_^)
|
Reviewed By: Kano_chan On: October 28, 2004 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooooooo I finished reading your last chap arg I was so anxious to read moreeeee pleaseeee update soon!!!! I asure you that's one of the most intriguin' and wonderful ff I ever read!!! ^_^ GOOD WORK
|
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter. i love how you made kag and i think that kag and ken make a good pair. They help each other just by thier very presence
|
Title: mystical_saiya666
Reviewed By: mystical_saiya666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 11:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! ^_^ I HOPE KAGS AND KENSHIN GET TOGETHER.
|
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 01:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was AWESOME I really enjoyed this chapter...But man oh man Poor Kagome..that really sucked w/what happened w/her mom...Her dad's name was Kenji cool...Kenshin's son is named Kenji...well thats AWESOME I liked it can't wait for the next part:D THANKS:D
|
Reviewed By: Somnambulicious (not signed in) On: October 23, 2004 12:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooh, lots of yummy angst in this chapter! Great job on explaining Kagome's past, as well as Kenshin's. You drew some interesting parallels between their lives. I fogive you for the shortness of the last chapter...but it's a good thing to leave your readers wanting more, ne? I can't wait to see what surprises you have in store for us next time!
|
Title: O__O ::In awe::
Reviewed By: KitsuneArasi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O__O ::Bows down and worships:: THANK YOU!!!! This is on my favorites list for a reason, you know. I love everything about this story and I am truly grateful that you wrote this. It's very hard to find alternate pairings like this one AND for it to be interesting and well-written! Your story is exquisite, so please do update soon...I would be honored to help you if ever you need it! ^___^ ::Hugs:: Congratultions on an excellent work! Ja ne! Kitsune
|
Title: This is what I get for not coming to Mediaminer for anything but a few fanfics in several months. I miss good new stuff.
Reviewed By: Silver Neko (lazy) On: October 19, 2004 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ohh! I love it! I'm not exactly the best with RK because I haven't seen it in its entirety, nor have I seen it at all for like a year, but . . . yeah.---- You know, I haven't really seen . . . hell, any good IY/RK fanfics. (Primarily because of the reason given in the title) This one, although short, comes very near the top of the list I've seen of -any- fics ^^; Again because of the reason in the title.---- I suppose Cannon had to leave some enigmatic characters, ne? And it's rather ironic and almost fitting that the main character be the foremost in them. Of course, I'm just speaking randomly so I believe I shall shut up. ---- I liked the drunken rant! XD And the quotes at the beginning. How -did- they drive a bus on the sidewalk? T.T I need to write a fanfic of my own now because I feel ashamed for not doing so . . . or something.
|
Title: awsome
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a truely unique fan fic and will be satying with this story till the end please update soon, i can't wait to see the rest... ^_~
|
Reviewed By: Mysterylady_Tx (Erika) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 21:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was another XCELLENT chapter...but what the hell crawled up Inu-Yasha's a$$??? Oh man I can't believe it...YIKES...she's lucky someone is there that knows at least most of her....Someone she doesn't have to pretend w/I like the idea of training w/Shippo around...cause I think its cool for him to learn something...not always just run and hide...that was another XCELLENT chapter and thanks for answering my questions...can't wait to see what will happen next...cause Darn if you didn't leave it in an interesting place:D....THANKS:D
|
Title: Yes!
Reviewed By: Umi Youko On: October 17, 2004 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn this is funny! Way to go on the go home ond come back and 'fuck' the assassin line. Finaly someone tells her. Just my opinion, "You deserve shit Kagome, SHIT!"
|
Reviewed By: Samoliver On: October 17, 2004 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it and I hope that you update again very soon!!!!!
|
| Pages (6): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 > » ] |
