| "A Choice of Roads" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 14:14 CST
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where did Inuyahsa and Kenshin go??? update more soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: WingedFox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 11:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you wrote this it rocks. The plot is original and well writion. Hope you update soon, P.S. My spelling sucks.
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 10:51 CST
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DUN...DUN...DUNNNNN! Nice cliffhanger there! Will Inuyasha be retracting his "permission" for Kagome to "fuck the assassin?" Is he attempting to beat the red-haired bishi senseless? OR MAYBE, just maybe, Kenshin's been cheating on Kagome with Inuyasha! Gasp! How dare he! *bursts into uncontrollable giggles* Okay, okay, I'll be serious now. I loved how you described the "zen of clothes-washing." I've wanted to write something along the same lines for a while now, with Kagome sweeping the shrine steps (heh...as a "housewife," I understand completely the zen to be found in these everyday, monotonous tasks. Too well, sometimes.) So Miroku and Sango have been gettin' their groove on, and Shippou's the only one who doesn't have a problem with Kagome and Kenshin's relationship, eh? I'm curious to see how this turns out. Which is a good thing. *shakes head* Sorry for the, ah, disjointed review here. I'm supposed to be working on "Paradox," but...*shrugs* Keep up the good work! (And on a side note, I agree with you completely about KagomeXanybody pairings. You've now set the bar for KagomeXKenshin. Now I'm just sitting back and waiting for a decent IYxFruits Basket crossover. Le sigh.)
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Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: November 21, 2004 03:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks I will and do enjoy your story and that was a cool chapter
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Reviewed By: User Kage Hogosha On: November 10, 2004 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the great work. are you going to do a sequal. if so here's a challenge: if you watch yu-yu hakusho, add it to the sequal. (^_~) Ja ne Sincerly, Kage Hogosha:)
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Minday On: November 09, 2004 22:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! i love your story so muchhhhhh!!! you have to, you HAVE to update please. Make Inu Yasha die too....... hehe
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious (not logged in) On: November 07, 2004 17:05 CST
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Well, I won't lie to you and say that I wouldn't have preferred something more graphic ('cause we all KNOW that would be a lie!) But, as you said, the sex scene was artsy, and you did a beautiful job of capturing the real mood of that very first time in all its trepidation and fumbling and brand-spanking-newness. Kagome's nervous little "speech" there at the beginning...oh, lord, been there, done that. All in all, very realistic and very well done.
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Reviewed By: Mesuno_kitsune On: November 06, 2004 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
>.< You don't have no idea how mad I am at your skimpy sex scene...if you call it that! :_( WAAAA!!! I waited FOREVER for your update and bam! I get hit with a salami! But, nonetheless, I still love your story and it's veeeeery interesting that you named Kagome's father Kenji... Will Kagome die in this fiction? Cuz I believe if your going with the name thing...yeah...I'm all confused...@-@ Have you ever saw any other good Ruroni/Inu fanfictions? I'm not sure mine is any good...It's called Eyes Of Ice and is on Fanfiction.net...and yes-I am selfishly promoting my story ^_~
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Title: 9
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 17:41 CST
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that was so AWESOME...oh yea...oh man oh man can't wait for everyone's reaction's to that...hehehe..I think Sango will be happy for her especially since he is human and everything...oh man I really liked that...that was so cool...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: hana megami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I really like this so far, I even added you to my favourites( hope you dont mind!) Good Luck with the lottery! I usually don't read crossovers but because Kenshin is one of my favourite Samurai anime/mangas I had to read it! If you need any help with the whole 'your beta's dont know much about kenshin' thing, just e-mail me ^^ I would be more then happy to help out! Well, as you earlier stated, Kagome and Kenshin's personalities mesh pretty well! (I like the whole son/father having the same name thing...it makes you wonder *raises eyebrow*)well anyways! LOVE reading this, keep up the great work!*psst...* update
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am enjoying this fic quite a bit. please update soon. i look foward to your next chapter. Sincerly, Kage Hogosha:)
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Reviewed By: ashn On: November 03, 2004 23:21 CST
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i realy in joy your story and cant wait till hte next chapter
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Title: gr
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your evil, you know that? lol well anyways can't wait to see what happens next please update soon...^_~
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Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: November 01, 2004 01:36 CST
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sorry gamer bad
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Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: November 01, 2004 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi um sorry I can't read all the time that y I don't review but I love your story keep up the good work ^__^
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