| "A Choice of Roads" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 15:14 CST
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OK...WTH??? whats up w/that HOw could you just end it there??? AHHH!! you are so EVIL...EVIL I tell you that was AWESOME though...
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 14:44 CST
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Hm...you've got ovaries for ending this chapter the way you did, and that's a good thing. I have a few suspicions about how Kagome and Kenshin could be reunited, but I'll wait patiently for you to continue the story (isn't that magnanimous of me?) The fight scene wasn't as detailed as it could have been, but that fits well with the pace and atmosphere you've set up in the previous chapters. As for the Safari thing...*sighs* I do have Firefox, and that's what I've been using for the ff.net updates, but Firefox seems to be a bit buggy; it randomly switches websites for no reason. I am thisclose to giving up on ff.net altogether. Grr. Anyway, great chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: confusion.
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun, Unable to sign in. [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was confused in this chapter. Kagome said she wanted to tallk to inuyasha, and I thought she was until she proposes to Kenshin while Kenshin is out of hearing range. I couldn't follow the chain of events. Please rewrite it so that I can understand it! Please!
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Reviewed By: user: Kge Hogosha On: December 06, 2004 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mabye your right, a sequal might not work out in the end with tish story. you threw a good curve in this chapter. i don't think anyone saw it coming. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: nani-chan LC On: December 05, 2004 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice, really nice, first kenshin/inuyasha crossover fic ive ever read, and now u got me hooked, lol, real nice, and even inuyasha is in character.
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Reviewed By: Mesuno_kitsune On: December 05, 2004 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting...chapter...Actually, I'm lying....The review response to Somnambulicious made me wanna roll on the ground and laugh... Seme...Kenshin?...somehow he feels like the uke person to me... Have you ever wonder how Yusuke got his name?...yes...*claps her hands evilly* But seriously, if someone made a website with ALL the Inuyasha crossovers I would probably faint! Doesn't that give you an idea *wink* I feel...abnormally happy! And thanks to your fiction I have been moved to create my own Ruroni/Inuyasha fanfiction! Doesn't that make you soooo fuzzy inside? V-V...sometimes I need to lay off the sugar...Well, Bye!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 14:53 CST
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AAAAWWWEEE!!!! that was AWESOME...I liked the way you did that...very very nice...and no beating Kenshin up..YAY!! hehehe:D...THANKS...and Inuyasha was being a jerk for a good reason:D...that was XCELLENT:D
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 14:34 CST
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well, that clears things up, but im still pissed at them 4 treaten kags like a lil kid. hmph. ne im not as mad as b4 at them. i sure hope she shows them up! luv the update -^_^- cant wait 4 the next!
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 11:20 CST
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Wonderful! You've managed to keep Inuyasha in character with the whole "I'm an asshole, but it's for her own good" thing. Soooo much better than the "Inuyasha is just an asshole, period" fics. But I have to admit that you've got me worried for Kenshin and Kagome now. A proposal of marriage BEFORE the Big Honking Naraku Fight Scene leaves me a bit wary (is that the theme from "Jaws" I hear in the background?) As for the IY-Fruits Basket thing...*evil grin* Yes, I'm notorious for putting alternate-pairing fics in people's heads. As a matter of fact, I've got a friend working on one right now (hooray gift fics!!!) And I'm all about Kagome-Shigure. I do *so* love those slightly evil bishis! They're just so darn smexy. (Speaking of which...I can't picture Inuyasha as anything other than the seme. *grin* I had this same discussion with someone a while back about what a Hiei-Sesshoumaru pairing would be like. We figured they'd kill each other before they ever settled on who had penetration rights. But the pillow talk would be hilarious to write.) So...review? Check. OTP? Check. Displayed my own hentai-ness for all the world to see? Check. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 16:30 CST
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gee, Sango and Miroku are not being very understanding, are they? and Inuyasha is a total bastard, even though he is usually like that. anyway, I like your story R rated or not (I am glad the sex scene was not graphic, those disgust me). Please update soon. ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 18:08 CST
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i luv this fic... but sango miroku n inu r pissin me off... n ive always hated kikyo. cant wait 2 find out wat happens next!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 04:33 CST
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OH OH...that doesn't sound to promising...GULP...I mean Kenshin is fast you gotta give him that but he doesn't heal as fast as Inu...Hope they don't get too messy...wonder what's gonna happen next...and if she does tell him I can't wait to see his reaction:D...and its great to see you again hope everything goes OK
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Reviewed By: kona On: November 29, 2004 23:43 CST
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O have one word to describe this story ummm....... really um is that word. I'm not insane, though I lose my saintiy once in awhile. I love when you add the sentence in the begginning. I hope you understanded that. Ummmmmmm.... yea.
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Reviewed By: Broken_ Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this story is very well writen and its actually very original. no kagome turning demon or inuyasha being and undercreative jerk and instintly regreating going to kikyo(mabye a little but its more dark and not so shallow).also the situation with the other group members is a first because you have taken out the usually sisterly and brotherly aspect of miroku and sango and went much deeper into the situation.i have to say this is one of the best crossovers ive read, i hope you continue with it.
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Reviewed By: torrieoreo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 15:22 CST
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I'm so glad you're doing better, and that you've resumed work on A Choice of Roads. It's one of my very favorite crossovers. I can hardly wait to see why the group is concerned with the Kenshin/Kagome pairing. Hopefully Inuyasha isn't trying to thrash Kenshin--it's Inu's own fault for suggesting the intimate relationship (like a total insensitive pig, nonetheless.) Thanks!
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