| "A Choice of Roads" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: hana megami (n.s.i.) On: January 11, 2005 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It cut off my last review! vv:: I think you did an excellant job Ana! You really had me chewing my nails waiting for this conclusion!(I'm inspired to read all of your stories now!) Your 'expect the unexpected' style of writing is simply marvelous! Good Luck with that totalitarian cactus thing! (I hope I remembered everything I wrote the first time >.
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Reviewed By: hana megami (n.s.i) On: January 11, 2005 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(I'm not sure if I'm signed in or no >.
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Title: Speechless
Reviewed By: Whispers [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am literally struck dumb with this fic. You have written this so eloquently that I cannot help but want more. This is a very beautiful story. Very well written.
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Reviewed By: Broken_ Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
best ending. i did not see that coming at all, that was simply geniuse. i hope you write a sequal and im adding you to my favorites if you dont mind. i have to agree with Somnambulicious, i like how you went with the more realistic route instead of the whole peaches and cream with her family. its sad but true, keep writing. hope to see more work from you.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: lilbunnyfufu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 22:26 CST
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That last part there really threw me off my chair. Honestly now i did not see that comming until it smacked me in the face. Now this better continue. It doesnt matter how, as more chapters or as a sequel it needs to continue! I shall threaten you with a thousand years of pain of you don't!
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Reviewed By: fanfic fanaticim a poet and i didnt know it [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleeze write a sequel, pleeze pleeze!?
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 19:35 CST
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interesting...I liked it cause it was unexpected...I guess I can see a mix of both of them in Kurama...NICE...THANKS:D that was a GREAT story:D
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Title: Why, why, WHY?
Reviewed By: baka_kitsune(not logged in) On: December 21, 2004 16:05 CST
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Oh, that was a wonderful chapter! You are writing a sequel though, right? I hope you are! It'll probably be either as good as this story or better. Oh, why did you have to end it there out of all places?!?!(don't answer that)
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 09:43 CST
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Woooo! *waves a little flag* Go Kagome! Rack up another bishi! ~~ Okay, okay, a serious review. To be honest, I'm thrilled that you didn't go the sentimental route, and instead chose the more realistic one. I do believe that it's possible to love more than one person in a lifetime (unlike soooo many writers out there,) and I'm happy that you gave both Kagome and Kenshin somebody new. Of course, it's obvious where Kenshin's heart truly lies in the end, and Kagome will surely never forget the pain of losing not one, but two men that she loved. Then again, kitsune seduction does marvels for recovery, I'm sure. *winks* And so I salute you as the first author of a good RK-IY crossover (in English, anyway.) And congratulations on finishing the fic! That's gotta feel great!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 16:18 CST
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OMG...what happened here...I..I just don't know how to react to this...YIKES...can't wait to see Kag side of this cause I mean I like Kaoru most of the time but Kenji hates Kenshin..why he died w/Kag's name on his lips??? oh man...that was great but very very sad...I still refuse to see Reflections...I can't make my self watch it...oh well sorry great chatper but SAD
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Reviewed By: Broken_ Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting.....another chapter after kenshin is dead? i think this story still has a great plot and its only getting better. simply waiting for the end. cant wait to see what you write next.
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Reviewed By: VoidPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story hope there is a sequal
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Title: u rock
Reviewed By: fox3290 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i aboustly(sp?) love u'r story please please please write more. and is kagome ever goin to see Kenshin again and fall ii love cause i think that she should since see had to give up everything for the shikon jewel give her a little piece of heaven with her Kenshin and her little shippo to become a family anyways continue writing cause as i said before u'r story rocks out loud and really loud it is continue please cause if you don't i will bug the crap out of you ok you got that ok you got the ok
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Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 16:46 CST
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AHHH! you have to update! i guess next chapter is the last one, so please make it count. i noticed all throughout this fic that certain elements that appear when Kenshin turns Rurouni (like the laundry and cooking things) were explained by his presense with Kagome. i think that is so sweet! please though, i guess you are going to give Kenshin by giving him Kaoru, but dont let him think of Kaoru as a replacement for Kagome. He should love them both individually. Otherwise, it would be just like the thing with Kikyou and Kagome, only with Kaoru in Kagome's place. (Kaoru is one of my favorite anime characters) Please give Kagome a happy ending as well. I know she will have Shippo, but i think we all know that after having both him and Kenshin, anything else will seem rather bittersweet... UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: baka_kitsune(not logged in) On: December 12, 2004 17:12 CST
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Hi! Okay, that was a good chappie, but a bit dry all the same. A little more detail. Or, you know, the works? Good though!
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