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Title: Ch. 4 incomplete?
Reviewed By: lady_lyciel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2011 03:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I'm here again! I finished reading the fic, but I got a little confused... the status says it's complete, but the chapter seems like is cut right in the midle of it.. looks like there was some error to the site and it hide the last part of the chapter. There's no comment of yours at the end of the fourth chapter, and it finishes with a scene with Rin and Kohane on it, followed by these: "Converting /tmp/phpYd7IN7 to /dev/stdout" It made me really confused... I don't know if this is really the last chapter, but as you said beforehand you'd explain everything by the next chapters, I think there's more to it? But still don't really know if there's some problem with this chapter here... XD I'm just saying this due to that strange message at the end of it and because a friend of mine went trough the same on another fiction site (the site cut her fic right before the end). Thought this could be a problem on the site script... well, anyways...! If that's really the end of the chapter, I must stay still and hope you come to update it soon *O* I really want to know what happened to all of them, and will be patient to expect for the rest of the revelations! And it saddens me deeply knowing that Rin denied so badly having female children, poor little girls!!! And I'm really curious about all these past events that grew them apart and asked for forgiveness, it must have been really rough! Well, PLEASE update it soon!!! You're a great writer, and this is an amazing fic! Can't wait to see the rest of it *_* Congrats on such an amazing story! Just love SessRin!!! |
Reviewed By: lady_lyciel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2011 20:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm back right on the sequel of In a Different Light! I was so excited to finish reading the fic, that I saved the final chapters in my computer and read all of it till today. I just couldn't stand waiting any longer to find out the end! And in fact it is a magnificent fic! Really well writen, and with a great plot, as well as a great work on the characters. I was so excited with the end of In a Different Light with Rin bearing two of Sess' childs that I had to come here and find out how everything turned! And I really loved the fact that Rin is almost about to give birth to them! So exciting!!! And I'm REALLY glad Sess gave up on feeling the same pain Rin was feeling, because this time, I think he wouldn't really be able to bear!!! Hahaha I thought I'd have more trouble understanding the english, but I went through it quite well, and just a few words were not of my knowledge... but I still could figure them out from the general context... The same happens to this sequel, and I think that'll be just as amazing as the previous one... and well, I'm kinda concerned about the tittle, it sugests so many bad things that scary me!! What'll happen to Sess' family so that the name of the fic is house divided? I hope everything works out fine! And poor Sess!!! His cildren are not even out of Rin's womb and they're already disobeying their father!!! Omg! I really wanna see what kind of father Sess will be, really!!! Will he be a good father? Will he follow his father's way? Will he fight against his own children (and I really don't expect so!! XD)? Well, I think I can just get this answer from reading, and so that's what I'll do now! Once again, great fic! I'm really happy to have come find your profile, needed to read more of great authors! See you next! |
Title: Loved it!
Reviewed By: misato_1471 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2010 15:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved it! I had such a wonderful time reading in a different light. I really hope you add more chapters to this story! I'd really like to see Lord Sesshoumaru in action! I loved the fight scene with him in a different light. I know it's been a while since you last visited this site but please Do update! I'm sure you'll get more hits if you add more chapters. ^_^ I know I'll be reading. Do update!
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Title: continue
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2009 13:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you going to continue this fic......please finish it, please, please
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Title: PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: Jonique918 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 16:19 EDT
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY! I'm begging you! You don't understand how much I loved In A Different Light, and A House Devided was turning into such an amazing story. You left everyone on such a cliffhanger, please try to come back to this one. You are a extremely talented writter, and I love all of your fanfics.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 11:24 EDT
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Now that I've read it again I'm more curious than ever to read about what Sess's darker side has done to Rin and why she thinks it hates her.
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Title: Will you come back to this one?
Reviewed By: Jonique918 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 22:35 EDT
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Now that you have started writting again, I was wondering if you had planned on getting back to this story. You left us with quite a cliffhanger! 'In a Different Light' is my all-time favorite fanfic. As weird as this sounds I have read the entire thing at least 20 times! I absoulutly love it. 'A House Divided' seemed like it was going to be really good until you dissapeared. I thought that it would never be updated, but now that you are back I feel like there is hope! Please come back to it!!!!
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Title: uuupppddaaaaattteeee
Reviewed By: angelofscreams96 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 13:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absoluetly love this story and i really hope that you'll pick it back up and continue wrting it so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update!!! You're such a good writer when it comes to Sesshomaru and Rin and it's actually quite difficult to find someone who is capable of portraying such a relationship as successfully as you do and I'd really really really love it if you updated. so please please please update.
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Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 07:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh please, don't tell me you've abandoned this. it really gets interesting now, so similar to what real life could be... please come back and finish the story, alright? you got me waiting here, darrling :)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 00:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
Update? Soon?
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: freefallingtowardthesky [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 02:39 EST
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whooo. you're certainly going for depth with this one, aren't you? brava! it's nice to find a story so well put together.
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Title: A House Divided
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 20:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there: This is an awesome story! I hope you start writing again. I have read on Lucient's site that you really don't write anymore and that kinda made me sad. I hope you start writing again and finish this story. Please take care of you!
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Title: Nice beginning
Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 02:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a nice beginning to a whole new tale. I sense some 'issues' between Sesshomaru and Rin, and after all they went through to be together I hope that they can put aside old heartache and be happy together. It is horrible what the Christian's are doing to their race and I fear it is only just begun. I do hope that you continue this fic. It would be a shame to toss your ideas aside forever, leaving this story unfinished. All good stories deserve an ending.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 03:38 EDT
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I'm really hoping for an update by the end of this year. When you start a story off so well and the fact that it's a sequel to one of the best on the site it's hard for readers to believe it will be abandoned.
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Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 14:30 EDT
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I love your story. Please keep it up. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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