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"A House Divided" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ]
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 Reviewed By: A Flower-sama  On: October 21, 2004 06:50 EDT
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An update! Yes! I love how you tied in links to the past there, it was great! Now there's a new problem on the horizon, so I can't wait to see what kind of plot will unfold from this!
 Title: Me want read reviews!
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 19, 2004 22:49 EDT
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 Reviewed By: Jasi  On: October 19, 2004 16:56 EDT
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Oh. I left that other review before I knew there was a second chapter.
 Reviewed By: Jasi  On: October 19, 2004 16:53 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
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Hey, I havent spoken to you in a while but my screename is Sum623 and we have talked a couple of times. As you know I am a huge fan of In a Different Light and I have recommended it to many of my friends. The first chapter of the sequel wasn't exactly what I anticipated. I also thought that you should have left the title the way it was before. As for the all those things that Rin has been saying while she is in labor...why did you make her do that? I think that is very ooc for her. I cant stand how people make it seem that all women in labor diss thier husbands. It doesn't work like that. And I was also dissapointed to hear that the next chapter is going to jump forward a couple of years. Every fanfic does that. I have only read one that hasn't and it was amazing. I think that fanfic authors skip detailing the whole raising thier infants stage because they dont know how to keep thier characters in character. But I know how amazing you are at that. All in all I think that it was an ok chapter. Just not what I thought it would be. If you ever get some time Instant Message me at Sum623 or email me at Sum623@aol.com.
 Title: jennifer_luvs_fluffy
Reviewed By: jennifer_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 19, 2004 16:05 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Iam kinda confused......i know who the people are from in a different light....and reading Jolly Old St. Nicholas's review...it would seem that the girl who is dying is sesshomarus and rins daughter??? Well.....it was a good chapter and i can't wait for the other one.....just to read it because ur work is great and also to help me not be so confused:S:S:S I thought Rin and Sesshomaru would have strong pups?? and how old r they....and is their any more pups??? Meh...ill just wait and read.....i kinda like the suspence!! ----------------Jennifer
 Title: Zowie!
Reviewed By: Jolly Old St. Nicholas  On: October 19, 2004 01:42 EDT
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My previous ratings still stand ^_^ So, we've finally met one of the twins, and she's mated to the hanyou son of the Lord of the Northern Lands. Not only that, but he seems to be rather slow-witted. Seeing as how Sorano spent the entire chapter unconscious, we didn't really get to see much of her. But, given the ending of the prologue and her choice in mate, I assume she was the one who kicked Sess. It was really imaginative, and Kiyoshi seems like a really sweet guy. I hope they both pull through . . .
 Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 19, 2004 00:29 EDT
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i can't wait for the next chapter!!! DON'T DIE!!! but yeah, this was a good chapter. i love how you ended it. it's evilicious ~_* i can't wait to see what happens with kiyoshi and sorano and maybe something about their past....
 Reviewed By: Binah [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 19, 2004 00:15 EDT
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So very happy to see a new chapter!!! I was a bit confused about what was going on for awhile but then I picked up on Kimi and the whole kidnapping thing from the last story. I hope Rin and Sesshomaru's child doesn't die, we just met her and she sounds so nice.
 Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 18, 2004 23:57 EDT
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wow omg damn please update soon
 Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 18, 2004 22:12 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Great chapter!!
 Title: human in training
Reviewed By: an emily  On: October 16, 2004 21:15 EDT
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Yeah, looks like a good start. Yay!
 Reviewed By: lynx9 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 12, 2004 15:27 EDT
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Overall Rating: 9 of 10
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yeah yeah. So now that you've won you can get back to updating. NOW!!!!! please ^^;;
 Reviewed By: lynx9 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 12, 2004 11:50 EDT
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Overall Rating: 9 of 10
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FINALLY DAMN IT!!!
 Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 11, 2004 20:55 EDT
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this is great can't wait until you update
 Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 11, 2004 14:42 EDT
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i love it so far. i like when sesshoumaru is portrayed, as you say, in a different light. i thought this chapter was hilariously cute. i can't wait for more!!! in the mean time i think i will go back and re-read the first one...i have a tendency to forget things...and it's so good it's fun to re-read!!
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