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Reviewed By: Momo (fsfreis@yahoo.com.br) On: April 19, 2005 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,have you been deleted again from that dammed FFNet? Those bastards really don't know how to keep a excellent writer like you there!>.> Well, you can also post your stories in: www.e-fiction.org. It's a excellent site and I am sure that would be great if you post your fictions there!:) And I am anxious for the chapter 5! Good luck for u!
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Reviewed By: Animeluver1368 loged out On: April 10, 2005 13:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read "In a Different Light" but decided to post a review here instead. I have not ever read a Rin/Sessh fanfic before, but I was more than impressed by your story. You make sure to put enough details to make the reader seem as though they are in the story. You have enough lemons, but it is not porn without a plot. I do not think there was any spelling mistakes, which is a major plus for me. The characters are not OOC without a resonable cause. You even go so far as to do research to make the story more interesing. All in all you have serious talent in writing. As long as you continue to update, you can also continue to expect more or my reviews. And I do hope you update soon for the sake of my sanity. ^_^
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: jennifer_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 12:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOMGOMG your killing me here, ur my favorite writer on this and u havent updated since january!!!!!!! thats a long time for a big fan whos read all of ur stories to wait!!!!! cant wait for the new chapter ------Jennifer
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Reviewed By: fruitcake On: February 12, 2005 20:26 EST
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yes, i know, im reviewing again. but pleaseseee update! you NEED to continue this story. what about sorano?? ugh. pretty please? update?
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: January 26, 2005 22:55 EST
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this is great please update
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 21:33 EST
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OMG!! That was a wonderful chapter. I love how you tell us some things but then leave others out to be revealed at a later time. I love everything about the mating mark too. Just....I'm speechless! I can't wait for more. This was so awesome!!! You bring me into their world and I just don't want to leave! ^____^
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Reviewed By: Dragoninuyokai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 19:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! ^^ I liked it! Sesshomarus kids sound so cute! Much angustey stuf, but it was all good! I cant think of anything that would possibaley improve this storey in any way shape or form.
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Reviewed By: pinkdancinghippo On: December 02, 2004 23:25 EST
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Okay, so normally I am in love with your stories but I find my self with a big HUH? at the end of this chapter. I really have no idea what is going on. Did Rin die? Was it a dream or a vision or something? Is it one of those future tense with glimpses of the past sort of things? Or, perhaps I have forgotten how to read all together, eh? Anways, I hope I understand the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on still) On: November 26, 2004 12:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm back!!!! I'm not disappointed at all, it was very wel written as usual! And I can't wait to find out what happened Sess, Rin, and their daughter! Update soon please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 18:51 EST
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i love this chapter and how it gave a glimpse into their past. i like how you showed that they had a small problem...it's nice to know it's a realistic happy ending. but yeah, i'm confused by sorano. i can't wait for more so i can learn more about her and kohana. this is a great chapter and a great start of the sequel!!!! ^_^
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Title: =)
Reviewed By: jennifer_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 16:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as usual....a little confusing but i'll take your word and wait to see what happens...but i have one question, is Rin and Sesshomaru still madly in love?? because from readiong it dosent seem like it? -----------------Jen cant wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: November 25, 2004 11:17 EST
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OMG!!!!! I had no idea you started writing again!!!!! I'm so upset with myself for missing the first few chapters!!!!! I can't read them right now, but I'm letting you know that I will be back!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 17:55 EST
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Sorry I hadn't reviewed sooner.Had some problems with the damned computer.Excuse my French.I really love the start of this story.It's excellent!
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Reviewed By: Dragoninuyokai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 21:24 EST
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AAAAA DAMN YOU! CONTINU SOON I BEG OF YOU I LOVE THE STOREY! It has great plot and a wonderfull styel! I wish you hadent left as a cliffe. I have some questions. 1) Who are Sess and Rins two kids? 2)Why did you focuse on the hawk hanyous? 3) Why were they in the snow? Thats it thank you and UPDATE SOON!
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Title: huzzah
Reviewed By: asiancherries [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 22:31 EST
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i can't believe i didn't write a review earlier. shame on me. i've been scrolling through fan fics to recommend to a friend of mine, and of course i came to yours. and then i thought, wouldn't it be nice to write a nice review, because you've loved everything she's written (Things Never Meant to Be, Bitter Blood, The Girl, etc.) so i thinks to myself, i thinks, you should tell her this is good stuff too. and...maybe she'll update sooner. :) so, in conclusion: i love your approach to this fic, very adventursome. it holds great promise. can't wait for more. wow, this is a long review.
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