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Reviewed By: kj2003 On: October 09, 2004 01:36 EDT
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oh way cool lol i love your stories they just get better the more you write them i can see the maturity and improving skill as you write them, i loved in a different light and how it truly focused on sess's and rins relationship and how they bonded but in the sequel just from this first chapter i can tell that it will be more in depth and i hope that you continue to show sess's point of view on how things are going and his insights along with rin's but i like seeing his views on emotions and growing feelings in stories showing his true character which i am sure you will continue to develope. well until next time ja ne
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Title: Me want read reviews!
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 15:39 EDT
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: October 07, 2004 06:28 EDT
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Hi, This New Fan, responding to your latest fic A House Divided. I try to give you a review on AFF.net, but for the past several days the site is refusing to take the reviews so I will give you my review here. I just love it. I cannot believe that someone (especially his own pups) had defied the Great Sesshoumaru. Priceless. Update really soon I can not wait what Rin will tell Sess when she is ready to give birth to her twins. New Fan Jess
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Title: OMGOMGOMG
Reviewed By: jennifer_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 19:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES MY WISH HAS COME TRUE!!I like this fanfic already and can't wait for more updates!! And i already have read "The Girl" and it was great...i loved how rin played the dominant one kind of....but i dont know if i reviewed it....>.<
But yes this chapter was VERY good lol.... -------------------JEN
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Reviewed By: Romina On: October 06, 2004 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Since I read "In A Different Light" I've been wanting to read this one. You're a really great writer!!! Please update soon, your story is really good!!!
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Reviewed By: Jolly Old St. Nicholas On: October 06, 2004 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, defying their father at such an early age, huh? Sounds as if the twins are going to be a real hand full. With everything you set up in the end of "In a Different Light," I wonder what kind of world the twins will be forced to live in. Will they be of help to their father, or will they hinder him in some way? Your title is "A House Divided;" I wonder who or what will cause this schizm . . . Well, great job, as always, and it seems your off to a great start. Update as soon as humanly possible ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 17:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!The sequal!I hope you update soon!!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 15:58 EDT
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As always, you don't disappoint. I'll be reading "The Girl"-and yes, I've been guilty of making Sesshoumaru utterly male (which doesn't truly relfect bishounen as portrayed in manga and manwha,huh)-please continue-great job! Dying to know the little ones' names and how they look- later, bad kittie
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Reviewed By: A Flower-sama On: October 06, 2004 06:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Gods, I've been waiting so~o long for this story, and trust me, I wasn't disapointed. There isn't much I can say about this chapter yet, it seemed very fluffy and kawaii thought! ;o) I can't wait for the next one, your works are so wonderful!
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Title: Binah
Reviewed By: Binah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 02:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start! I love all of your work and I'm sure that I will become just as addicted this sequel as I was "In a Different Light."
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