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| "The Butterfly Effect" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Reviewed By: hana megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anny!! Another earth-shattering fic! Bravo! And the baby Shinta *rubs chin* hmm...another perfectly twisted ending that leaves us with our tiny mental asses hanging off the edge of their tiny mental seats? One can only wonder... Amazing use of the Kyoko alias; Everyone is in character; and your subtle use of feminism makes me thow my fist in the air (as, I am sure it does so for the rest of us girls reading this!) Wonderful to see more of your talents!! We must keep in touch (i.e- in case you decide on writing any more spectacular fics!!) ^ ^ - fluffybunny917@hotmail.com hope you find time between this and that cactus of yours to e-mail me! Thankies! -Hana
| Reviewed By: NikeShuu On: February 28, 2005 20:40 CST
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Wow, where to start. The bonding thing between Tohru, Yuki, and Kyo was rather interesting. It sounds very intense for the whole trio (especially our beloved heroine). Describing the boys' actions as far as being protective of Tohru and Shinta is kind of sweet--in a weird sort of way. What threw me for a loop was what you had happen with Akane and Shinta; it sounds like you're cooking up another plot device there. (On a side note, Akane's interaction with Maki was kind of funny.) And it seems that more of the Sohmas are coming out of the woodwork as well. Momiji was the last person I expected to see popping up so soon. I have a feeling that things are only going to intensify with his presence. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
| Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 17:57 CST
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I'm glad you're still updating. I would have comented on the last chapter updating too, but my computer's internet brokded. It's fixded now, so, update again soon pweeze.
| Reviewed By: Kae Noel On: February 27, 2005 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah, that makes much more sense beuatfully done by the way ^_^
| Reviewed By: Butterfly_Lover On: February 24, 2005 19:38 CST
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The best fic ever I absolutely love it and find no criticisms in my heart. I love butterfly and the fact that it bonds Tohru to Akito (who is a bastard even if she is a woman) ^-^ I agree Nikeshuu in the fact that Hatori is underapreciated. Also the fact t thrghaYuki and Kyou have for each other they manage to share her and even ve a child with her ^-^. Shinta is a beatuful name how did you come up with it? I know this i gng to sound weird but I wish I had Butterfly in my head. She would be so awesome even though I have a perverted swithch already on in my head 24/7. But that is beside the point. Although I never write long reviews... I felt obliged to on this fic. Believe me this fic is worth a thousand words. I hope you find time to email me. My email address is xo_chocolate_kisses_xo@yahoo.com And I would offer to beta parts of the story but I probably wouldn't be any good at it. Again this story is magnificent and I can not wait for it to be updated again. SO HURRY IT UP!! *Rushes her to finish the story.* Also I think you should let it go past what is it 28 chapters. As good a writer as you are I am positive that you could find quite a few more twists and hope you do. Love the story and hope you email me... and update soon. PS. A Thousand points to me this is the longest review I have ever writen. LOL ^-^ Hope to see more work written by you. You are one of the most serious writers I have ever read stories for. But then again I mostly read hentai.
| Reviewed By: NikeShuu On: February 12, 2005 22:24 CST
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Well, that went much better than I had thought it would. Glad everybody made it through in one piece (more or less). I liked the twist you had about Cat not being a real part of the Zodiac even though he's one of the cursed spirits. The thing about a link and Hatori's true form are definitely interesting. Felt sorry for the poor guy, though, when they were in his mind. Hatori is somewhat underappreciated in some fanfictions; I'm glad you're playing him up in this one.
| Reviewed By: USuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 15:48 CST
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"A street lamp gutters... Soon it will be morning" Cats
| Reviewed By: NikeShuu On: February 03, 2005 22:29 CST
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Well, the thing with everybody hopping into bed together was, to say the least, unexpected. I can just imagine what Hatori's expression was at the suggestion that he join the trio. The only thing I have to complain about is the fact that you ended with such an ominous cliffhanger. It makes me want to scream! *Ahem* Anyway, it was interesting to learn what all occurred when Akito "gifted" Tohru with Butterfly. Too bad her revelation seems to have triggered such a bad reaction. It begs the question of what could possibly happen next, and I have a feeling that I'll be waiting with baited breath.
| Title: Without K-chan!!
Reviewed By: AnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Involved" review, that's a new way of putting it. K-chan will be happy to know that you've read AB books. We thought it was more the patterns of speech (i.e. swearing, lol) that was Anita-esque. We... er... I was aware of Anita's prudery when claiming that Butterfly sounded like Anita. Other than that... lost my train of thought. Also, the present tense wasn't so distracting as it was just unexpected. I haven't personally read any works that were written in present tense, but it kind of caught me off-guard. I can see why you did it that way, though, and you used it to its very best. Ah, yes, I remember what I was getting at earlier: Butterfly is like Anita attitude-wise, and not moral-wise... if that makes any sense. I can hear K-chan simplifying this for me now: It's just in the way she talks!! Wonderful chapter, I'm still hooked, and I hope more comes soon!! ~~AnimeFan
| Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 18:54 CST
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Updation (is that a word, well it is now.) update again soon. Yeah, I got over that whole PG-13 thing a while ago cuz I really luv the hentai things. ^^; oops, did I say that out loud. Oh well, this has been Kuramas Gurl, thank you, goodbye.
| Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya (not logged in) On: February 03, 2005 16:20 CST
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Marvolous! im sorry i have been so busy. but now that i have caught up...hhmm, this story keeps taking twists that i would never expect. Shinta, the women at the restaraunt, Hatori. i love it! i missed it too, while i was busy (real life sucks sometimes) i love what you have done for Torhu and the guys, i love shinta's name (i'm an RK fan) i especially loved what has happened with Hatori. He's a little OOC but still very well written. cant wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: other_hitomi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 13:50 CST
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I thought I'd reviewed this already, but since I clearly haven't--it's wonderful, I love it, more, more, more! (please). It's stunning at how obvious a solution to the triangle this is, and how I never thought of it myself. I really hope everything works out ok. Really well written--I can always tell who's talking, and whether it's the butterfly or Tohru, and I can't think of anything else concrete to say. I'll review again when I do.
| Title: A-f*cking-MAZING!!!
Reviewed By: AnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 03:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AnimeFan and Celeast reviewing as one. ((This is going to go nowhere fast...)) [[You don't mean that...]] Anyway, I made K-chan read a Furuba fic!! ^_^ ... And all in one night!!! ((contemplates how she can use this power to help mankind)) [[My turn]] It was interesting. I like it. [[does the Jack-Sparrow beg]] Write more please!! ((God, I'm glad I'm the one typing this... K-chan types so slow... OFF TOPIC!!)) Speaking as another author, when I started reading, the present-tense form kinda threw me. [[nod]] K-chan even went so far as to say "CDs I bring" instead of "CDs I brought". [[me]] It got to me... ((ahem...)) We're running out of "characters" to use in this review, and it seems like we're being... [[XP]] We're just gonna use it all up. ((...)) [[It's not THAT bad...]] ((I'll let K-chan finish this... YOU CAN'T BLAME ANIMEFAN FOR WHATEVER HAPPENS NEXT!! damn beta...)) I'm insulted *sigh* I'm a slow typer oh well OFF topic again. We love your, story you should write more. [[just a small side note that is totally off topic]] We both think that Butterfly could possibly be Anita Blake [[are we right?? Have you ever heard of it??]] ((just like to say that I'm TYPING after that 'herd' fiasco... *looks at K-chan expectantly*)) How now, brown cow? ((cue insane laughter at the inside joke)) We wanna find out what happens next. So we're going to ask you to write more again. ((Please don't be like me & get writer's block!!)) We're stunned that you have an outline. We're in awe | Reviewed By: NikeShuu On: January 27, 2005 17:37 CST
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Aw, Shinta sounds so cute! Too bad the ending had such an ominous tone. I guess it's pretty realistic, though, considering that most joys are tempered by something. It's nice to know what was going on with some of the other characters while the trio was away, but you make me wonder what kinds of twists the plot is about to take with Hatori surfacing. Whatever it is, I get the feeling that it can't end well.
| Reviewed By: Runic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[Chap 16] Awww, baby boy!
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