| "The Butterfly Effect" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Evilshoeelf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loves Butterfly, she's the perfect 'animal' for Tohru to have. The snarkyness is great and I like the way you handle the relationships between the three of them. Hope that you can write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Moonsharmony [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 20:43 CDT
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Urgh... so not fair! That's a horrible place to stop! *sigh* Anyway I love your story line and how different it is from most other plot lines that I've read. And the fact that you actually spell and punctuate things correctly makes it easy for me to actually enjoy the story instead of grimacing and flinching at every "shuld" and every other word people seem to find it impossible to spell or, at least spell check. Anyway, I hope you update your story someday. I'll definitely enjoy reading it and would like to see how it ends.
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Title: Harem
Reviewed By: KirstenSg1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know, it seems to us that this is turning into a Tohru/Every Good Sohma story. We like it. Evil Grin. Hope you update soon. Heres a cookie.
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Reviewed By: Klove0511 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 16:41 CST
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This story is absolutely amazing. One thing that does bother me a little is when you seem to randomly switch tenses. It'll be going along in past tense and then suddenly it switches to present. It's odd.... But yeah...This story is incredible. Took me three sittings to finish it thus far, but it was worth it. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters of this story. O and the guy is Momiji, right? Yes? I hope so!!!!! I love Momiji.
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Title: dammit! (continued)
Reviewed By: inkheart [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I got cut off in the last one- here's the finished piece--- (*bows at your feet*) Oh, Thank you Goddess of Successful Plot Lines! Thank you on Behalf of Everything Good and Holy in FanFiction for Having Your Story Actually Make Sense!!! *ahem* Your story (I'll admit) scared me in the beginning at how very long it was but I soon recovered and went on to write this review. So again thank you and your writing skills and I hope we shall meet again in the near future so that we may exchange a good story and a review again! I bid you adieu Fair Authoress of Making Sense! (*coughAndMakingOutcough*)(tee-hee-hee!!)
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Title: dammit!
Reviewed By: inkheart [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dammit!!! It is well passed the time for an update and I am so pissed cause this story has me on the edge of my seat and I have no patience at all. Please- FOR THE LOVE OF GOD- update as soon as you possibly can cause I've been rereading this story for the past year and you still haven't updated yet! Grrrrrr.... goddammit.. friggin piece of crap..stupidness.. *breathes* Okay, I think my rant is over. The quotes at the beginning of each chapter are what I like(not the most) about your stories because they have the same meanings as the titles and they're not just somerandom quote you thought you'd just stick there for what knows the reason. I loved the concept of Tohru being able to pick BOTH -let me say that again- B.O.T.H. - of the boys except for all the crappy fics where one or the other is left broken hearted. Another plus with this story is that you make Tohru part of their curse (also a God but who's counting?) BUT (big but here) you actually achieve the hardest thing ever achieved by a single authoress- IT MADE SENSE!!! Others would just say "Screw the rules!" and leave us to ponder what just hapened as they don't explain how Tohru could ever come to be like the othersbut you weren't like them, no, you are my goddess! (*bows at your feet*) Oh, Thank you Goddess of Successful Plot Lines! Thank you on Behalf of Everything Good and Holy in FanFiction for Having Your Story Actually Make Sense!!! *ahem* Your story (I'll admit) scared me in the beginning at how very long it w |
Reviewed By: Tonzura_Koite11 On: July 26, 2005 15:25 CDT
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WOW! I only watched the series this weekend, but I immediately fell in love with the characters, and I am so happy that I found your story. It's fantastic! I would love for you to continue it!
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Reviewed By: mmc On: May 22, 2005 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a totally different story! I am very impressed! I think you should continue writting I am very interested in the turn out.
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Reviewed By: dark night angel On: April 16, 2005 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story soooooo much i almost worship you for it... yeah...i don't have a life so ill worship you to fill in my time. just kidding! i really enjoy your other stories as well, and i cant wait until you post new chappies for them. please please please post soon!!! is it just me or does any one else get the feeling that tohru might become the new family god??? great writing technique and the originality is awsome! Keep up the great work! -DarkNightAngel
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Reviewed By: Sakurakessho [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 23:46 CDT
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Wow...its been such a long time since you updated! Please update soon. I realise that you have a life and all but i need more of butterfly's smart-ass-ness. I just can't get enough...its sorta like a drug. You have an amazing story. You shouldn't let it go to waste.
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 00:31 CDT
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Oh! Please tell me you'll be updating soon? I can't live without more of Butterfly's amazaingly sharp wit and enticingly lewd suggestions! lol And we'll just ignore my secret crush on Hatori. *ahem* Well done indeed! Ah, so lame! I know I have words that would more adequatedly praise your work, but I'm too numb from all the awesome plot bunnies.
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 00:16 CDT
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It was pure luck that I found this fan fic and I am soooooooo gald I did! Excellent job! This is by far the best Fruits Basket fan fic I've read yet. Butterfly's comments are absloutely hilarious. She is my idol. :o) Oh, and Shigure's Highschool Girls song? I almost died. LOL You are a genius. Please update soon because I have to know how this story ends!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! *gasping for air* I have been plastered all over the monitor since I stumbled across this jem of yours! But, as much as I wanted to keep clipping along through the chapters (soo goooood!), I absolutely HAD to praise you for this one! I keep going over the same line over and over again! So damn funny! Tohru: 'On no!' Butterfly: 'Oh YES!' Priceless! The cause of my oxygen deprivation! Laughing so hard it hurts! And completely feeling Tohru's, er...pain...? (God, that I could feel that kind of pain! lol) Well then...moving along to the next chapter...Gah! I never thought angst could be so damn funny!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an amazing story! I've read enough about you talking about your story at LJ and I thought I'd give it a good read. I really love this! It's most definitely the best composed well-written Fruits Basket fan fic I have ever read. I look forward to your updates.
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Reviewed By: ESMI On: March 08, 2005 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uhm this is my first time doing a review in Mida Miner lol i usually go to fanfiction.com and its kinda confussing well the point is that i want you to update soon.
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