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Reviewed By: saphira_draco [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 23:52 CST
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Title: BOOHOO!!!!!
Reviewed By: saphira_draco [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Neonlite17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 18:44 CST
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I just *adore* your story. It was a refreshing well written read. I was disappointed to realize i'd come to as much as you have done to this point, which means I was *very* into it. I can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Miko No Tears and Aya not logged in On: December 06, 2004 14:36 CST
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Buitterfly has Minions? Yes Please! i love this and this last chapter is on fire! i cant wait to see what happens next! Yuki was intense and fabulous! Kyou has his own brand of insensity that i love seeing and he was displaying well this chapter as well. You have such a way with words and that is awesomne, you can say so much in a few words, and do it well. you, my friend, are a creative genius!
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Reviewed By: Runic (still too lazy to log in XD) On: December 03, 2004 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huzzah, an update! *squees* Ooh, and I was responded to, I feel honoured, hehe! =3 I really like the newest chapter! I liked how it ended with the Butterfly coming back to her and everything; how neat! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya not logged in On: December 02, 2004 15:41 CST
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fantabulous! i was confused at teh beginning, but now, i get it, i think, hehe. honestly this is an awesome fic. very deep. it shows that there is more to Tohru and the boys then most would guess by just watching the show (and that is all i have seen for FB other then other fanfics). im impressed and cant wait for more! i love the Butterfly, its so cool, and helping Tohru so much!
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Reviewed By: just me On: December 02, 2004 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's great and i hope there will be a next chapter soon. lots of hugs and kisses from panthera.
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Reviewed By: Runic (too lazy to log in) On: November 29, 2004 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so certain that I had posted a review earlier at chapter eight...hmm, must have slipped my mind! ^^; But anyways, I love the new chapter! I was so pleased to see that you have updated. I hope that everything's alright IRL! Aeiiee, I cannot wait to see how the pair react to Tohru's ultimatum! Exciting! XD Hehe, I've added this to my internet explorer favourites list so I can check back constantly for updates. *squees* "How dare he interrupt my only boy-free thinking time? How dare he look so very, very good doing it?" Much giggles to that! heehee!
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Title: **Weeps**
Reviewed By: Hinoki_Mizuno [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its been so long since youve updated! DONT YOU LOVE ME ANYMORE!?!?!?! **weeps in her corner**
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Reviewed By: NikeShuu On: November 02, 2004 22:30 CST
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The scene where Yuki was comforting Tohru in Chapter 7 is really sweet. It seems they have a common ground where Akito is concerned. Poor Tohru, having to remember all of that trauma (even if most of it is left to the imagnination).
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Title: WHAA
Reviewed By: Hinoki_Mizuno [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 13:52 CST
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more more more more i love this story heck i love you! YAY i cant wait for the next chapter to come!
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Reviewed By: NikeShuu On: October 23, 2004 20:27 CDT
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I like the spin you're putting on Tohru--making her less innocent and dense than she usually portrayed--in this story. That little butterfly is sure corrupting the poor little flower's mind. On the other hand, it does make for some interesting little plot devices... Anyway, your story seems interesting, to say the least. And bonus points for writing in the present tense--it's difficult. Can't wait for the next chapter to be posted.
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Title: Midget tosser suppremo!
Reviewed By: Yecoto On: October 22, 2004 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish my schizophrenic voices were as helpful as the butterfly! Mine just tell me to kill people... and pick my nose in public. I like watching walls. Walls are fun. mmm... walls.
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