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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic and the first Fruits Baskets fic that I've read, I think. I hope that you will update soon. I never would have read this if my friend didn't convince me to stop being so selfconscieous about above rating pg13. Update soon, cuz I really like it. did I just repeat myslef? Ah, oh well. I absouletely love the fun little romance scenes, probly cuz I'm a big ol sucker for romance. ^_^ well, this has been Kuramas Gurl, thank you, goodbye.
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Title: Awesome T_T
Reviewed By: Neonlite17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 16:09 CST
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I enjoyed reading this chapter very much, as with all chapters. I can't wait to see more from you, and I'm always around should you need help. I've missed the clue list, I hope I didnt accidently erase it ^^ But I understand being busy as well. I enjoy helping you, and hope I'm of enough help that you'll continue to use me for it
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Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 12:00 CST
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this is a great story, i only started reading it today and i already love it! keep it up please!
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Reviewed By: Runic (still lazy) On: January 16, 2005 23:39 CST
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[Chap 15] Yuki and Tohru kicked some major bum in the face of those party jerks! Booya! XD And the fact that Yuki ended up getting business all the while was excellent. =D I'm so glad that the marriage deal was worked out! When Yuki had asked her at the beginning of the last chapter, I was thinking "O_O Yuki!!! What the heck are you doing, breaking the relationship momentum here?" [lol, I had written this on the review of that chapter, but mm.org was having errors or something, so it didn't go through a few days ago ;-;] I was so glad to hear the reason, and was glad that both Yuki and Kyou were greatly effected by the situation. *nods* And aiieee, pregnancy! *squees* I hope you'll update soon!
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Title: onigiri_kitty
Reviewed By: onigiri_kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay my favorite story has updated! Yay! I seriously want to draw for this! It's such a cute story! :D I can't wait for more *scenes coming up for pretty pictures* This rocks ^^ Italics
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Reviewed By: Runic (too lazy to log in, as always) On: January 12, 2005 23:52 CST
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[Chap 12] Ohh, so beautiful when Tohru was willing to accept all of Kyou no matter what.
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Reviewed By: NikeShuu On: January 11, 2005 14:11 CST
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Well, you've certainly created some rather...different characters to help out in the Akachou. Akane strikes me as particularly interesting, but I think Maki could be, too. They're very reflective of Takaya-sensei's work and would probably fit right into the Furuba world. It's nice to see that Tohru doesn't feel she's as the boys see her, and that she feels she's being a little selfish; it makes her seem more human that way. Can't wait to see what you've got planned in upcoming chapters.
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: kisasa On: January 10, 2005 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It's so fun, and I've been waiting for every chapter! XD! Great job! I've been inspired to draw some scenes too! And I agree that Neko-san is a good artist! X)! Can't wait for more! Bold
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Reviewed By: Neonlite17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 19:40 CST
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Yay! An update!
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Reviewed By: empressariyana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 23:44 CST
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This certainly an interesting story but honestly, I am actually getting tired of Akito being portrayed in this manner. She has problems that are much more ingrained than what Tohru has seen. I feel sorry that Akito is so misunderstood. She is a lot more three dimensional then she is given credit for. And yes I am using she to refer to Akito. Don't get me wrong your story is interesting and well written but the portrayal of Akito in this story bothers me. Good luck with your future chapters.
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Title: Thornwitch
Reviewed By: Thornwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 13:54 CST
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Alas, I have finally been forced to create a user profile...But I wanted to give a big pervy butterfly minion cheer to you and the existance of the next 16 chapters. I loved the bit with Rat wanting to keep Toru in a nest. I admit that I was sort of expeting a drunken newyears threesome, but I suppose you can't have everything. Oh, and I see the curse being solved a la "Prince Lindworm" although I'm not sure if thats a Grimm's story or not. Its sort of kinky if you think about it. Like older versions of Sleeping Beauty...
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Reviewed By: Neonlite17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 23:53 CST
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I was, as always, happy to see an update, and this chapter was so fun and free of angst. (Thank you for that! Seems like a lot of people are angsting up their stories right now.) I think you keep them very in character. Your story is without question my favorite right now, and I realize it can't go on forever, even if I wouldn't mind ^_^ I'm going to attempt some fanart for it , I just hope I can do the character interactions some justice.
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: December 12, 2004 09:17 CST
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You know, that was great. I sort of suspect tat to break the curse in the Manga, there might be some kind of beauty and the beast thing with Kyo's demon form, but tht might just be my overheated, Grimm's fairytale raised mind talking. Great, great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Neonlite17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 18:58 CST
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This chapter was definately not a disappointment ^^ Although I must admit that my prediction was that they would swallow their pride a little more and share her the first time XD But this really played into the intimacy of both relationships. I look forward, as always, to seeing what happens next!
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Reviewed By: saphira_draco [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 23:53 CST
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right more plz?
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