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| "Come Here Boy" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Inu_Goddess On: January 25, 2005 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! ^_^ That was the best Inuyasha and Kagome mating fic I have ever read!! I got my mate to read it and he was amazed! He even had a nose bleed but he says it's from the dry heat or something. Ohh well, it's still so remarkable! I really don;t know if I would suspect Inuyasha of really calling her a bitch like that, bit it does fit. He is a guy dog and well girl dog.. ^^' I will have to find time (2 AM) and read more of your work! This had a lot of wonderful detail in it. It just seemed off that Inu would go from bitch to koi. But I guess when you fight your demon insticts it all a mix. I will recommend this to a lot of my friends! I made Raven Sin a reader of this anime and she hasn't even seen it! ^-^! She's also talented in making lemons. But this takes the cake! Wow! I really can't express the amouth of awe this fic deserves! And it's 2:30! Have you seen/heard of Vampire Princess Miyu? I think you would like it and make a wonderful fic for that as well. Since I'm running out of characters, I will leave you with my addy! PoofyBra@hotmail.com I'm not really on it that much, but I rather not let everyone see and have the one I use a lot. It gets weird spam and all that enough as it is. Well, anyways you've got talent! If I wasn't uber tired, I would have e-mailed you a review. But some authors like to have theirs counted up and shown. And the more you have, more others will read the fic. Ja ne! Good job! The characters were almost real!
| Title: A Very Sweet Lemon
Reviewed By: myanime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As soon as I finished reading this I thought to myself, 'Damn, why can't I write with this much detail and length'...just kidding, what I actually thought was that this was a very well done one-shot lemon with great expression of emotions and beautiful graphic details that are some of the best I have ever read. The reason I only gave a nine on the originality was, even though your style of this lemon was quite unique, there have been what seems hundreds, but is probally only about twenty or thirty, of these kinds of lemons with Kagome feeling that she really wants him, she goes off, he follows, and they mate. During which she he pleasures her first and then she suddenly feels like a nymphomaniac and etc, etc. Yet the way you made thier marks was very original, I have only seen a handful of other stories that have used this style of marking and not the traditonal, or just the other, way of having just a small mark on the shoulder or above the breast. The marking made your story a little more original and made me think that it was done more creative. I have greatly enjoyed reading this story and hope you will write more lemons, maybe featuring other characters, in the future. But please, if you do, try to keep the classic pairings and couples. What I mean is please do not pair up Kagome with Sess or Sango with Inuyasha or anything like that. Those lemons just make me feel uncomfortable reading since I am so used to reading traditonal pairings. Keep up the good work... -Myanime
| Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 01:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! That was hot & spicy!!!!!
| Title: Vive le lusty beast!
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 20:15 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a beautifully conceived piece of work. Reading it, it doesn't have the feeling of a lemon one-shot; it feels like I'm reading a chapter that's been removed from a much longer work. It's hard to establish that feeling, and whether you did it intentionally or not, that's how I read it--the citrus occurrence felt natural, like there was significant background for it. Poor InuYasha and Kagome seem to be plagued with ecchi dreams of late, ne? I love how you handled the mating mark. Loved it. I don't think InuYasha could ever, ever hurt Kagome voluntarily like that, so whenever a marking involves no pain, it rings so much truer for me. And having it over their hearts, how sweet =) Congratulations, you've taken what I and many others find difficult territory to write in and made it beautiful and fresh. Please continue to share your word weavings with all of us.
| Reviewed By: Lonely_Cutter On: January 14, 2005 03:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What more can I say, other than that was fucking awesome!!!!! I love InuYasha and Kagome pairings!!! I think your story was great, please write more.
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was intense...and embarrassingly stimulating. *cheesy grin* Way to go! Whoohoo! Woof!
| Title: yummy!
Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 02:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Amazing! First ever lemon? Bravo. Loved it -- from the build up to the 'climax'! The last line was the best: "...he tightened his arms around the most precious creature to him in the world - his mate, his life, his Kagome." Well done. :) Joy
| Title: Woweeee
Reviewed By: Cutie Pie Hentai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 18:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Mix one part sweet, two parts spice, and a dash of aggression, heat to boiling and voila! "Come Here Boy" Hot. Steamy. Just enough fluff and emotions. Loved the "Say my name bitch." You got the mix of youkai domination and sentimentality just right. And the erotic visual of watching where they joined- ohhh, I might just try that! Also nice imagery of the auras and the description of the tantric stimuli. Very, very, very well done!
| Title: I LiKeY yOuR StOrY!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashasgirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That was a great story...I loved it! I usually don't leave comments, specially on one shots but this one was well done. You described and defined everything very good and it kept me interested throughout the whole thing. Keep up the good work, hope to see more from you
| Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 01:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, baby!! Is it hot in here or what!! LOVED IT!! Keep up the great work, and I can't wait to read what you've got in store next!
| Reviewed By: laptawenzell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 19:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! That was fantastic!! Thanks for sharing!
| Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry, but I had to review again, LOVED IT!
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
absolutly amazing work, as i had a feeling it would be ;-) you have such a beautiful flow to your words that it is inspiring, to say the least. absolutly wonderul grasp of the charcter motivations as well as depictions. you nailed them on the head! you have a great writting talent! again, absolutly awsome flow you developed and a great story line. keep it up :-)
| Title: Amazing!!
Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there!! :-) I just read your fic, and all I can say is, OH MY GOD!! That was amazing!!! I have to say, you had my heart beating so fast in my chest, it was wonderful!! You had such great elements, and your writing, my dear, is FABULOUS, so please, give yourself more credit! :-) You have exceptional imagery, and like we were talking about, it can be hard sometimes writing lemons, but man, you made it seem so easy! It all just flowed so beautifuly! I really hope that you will consider writing more stories, 'cause you've got me hooked! Well done!! I just can't say it enough! I think I better go back for seconds!! Lady P.
| Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 12:03 CST
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I can't even describe how wonderful your fic is! Its so wonderful to read a clearly thought out, grammatically correct, fun to read fanfic. I especially liked the twist at the end, the placement of Inuyasha's mating mark. Very well done. The only thing I would suggest is not subsituting any Japanese words for English ones. Terms, yes, such as youkai, youki, attacks, etc, but words like love, and mushy nicknames I feel for me, personally, having learned Japanese, are better left in our own native language. But this is just my personal opinion! As for your comment in the beginning, I definitely think you are of the caliber of other great writers out there. Keep up the great work, and I'll be looking forward to reading more of your great work in the future!
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