| "Come Here Boy" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 18:18 CDT
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this is hot! (fans self) i know, i've already given you a response to this, but hey! if a girl can't get a story out of her head, she may as well review it, ne? i love lemons. they are the greatest! and this was awesome citrus! and i totally loved the whole scene with inu and kag together! ja ~hanyou-elf
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_sweetie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 16:22 CDT
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If that was your first fanfic, then I can't wait to see more! It was sweet, romantic, and wild all at once! Great job. I'm also adding you to favorite authors!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: 1ily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This was your first fanfic? Amazing. I loved it. It is one of the best one shots I have ever read on here. Please do continue to write. I'm gonna add you to my favorite authors. :) Hope ya don't mind.
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: October 19, 2004 13:54 CDT
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That was really lovely. Its so hard to find a good one shot lemon with heart (and brain) and I always like Inu's demon side.
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was your first story? somehow i find that hard to believe,because that was totally amazing! it was very very well writen and HOT! i need to go find a boyfriend now. ^_~ i really loved the whole kagome being subnissive thing,that was hot to ^_~ i really do hope you keep writing! i'll read whatever inuyasha storys you wright! ^_^ much love Dark Angel Of Love
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Reviewed By: Shi-shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the classiest erotic stories I've read in a while. Now just try taking it to another level and keep the story going where the others react to their mating. But if you keep it right there cool I'd still think it's a keeper. =)
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job, especially for a first fic! I think you're very eloquent with expressing your thoughts, and I wish you much luck in the realm of fanfics! Though I must confess, I'm not a huge fan of the 'one shot lemon' You did well, and it is quite tastefully done. Kudos to you, and best of luck with your other endeavors! Let me know if I can be of assisstence in the future! God Bless, ~Sue~
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. That was amazing. Wow. Such a wonderful and sweet and romantic story.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 09:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very steamy. I really liked it. For this being your first fanfic it was really, really good. You did a very wonderful job. I hope that you will start working on another peice of writing.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 04:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
You write really well and I enjoyed your story very much. I hope to read more from you soon. This was beautiful. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Petri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done. It seems to be written with enthusiasm, but you also seem to be using the same words repeatedly. Anyway, very nice. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW! That was very well written and very hot, and I'm blushing so badly right now that I'm probably as red as Inuyasha's hoari! I've never red a lemon before, but was thinking about adding one in my story 'Hidden Beneath a Smile,' but I have no experiance in that area so I thought if I read a few it wouldn't be so difficult to write... This is going to be a bit more difficult then I thought it would be... I don't know if I'll be able to write one without going completely red in the face let alone reading anymore lemon fics to get an idea on how to write... ~Zonza
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: luna chick [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not only do you express yourself with maturity, but you have a gift for storytelling. The way you play with words is extraordinary, and you have mastered the show do not tell technique. Most one shots are a hungry explosion of passion with a few empty love words, but in your story, tehre waws more...much more. I could see their love and feel their turmoil. It was believable, and it made me feel warm and mushy in side. Keep up the incredible work. Luna Chick
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