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Title: that was great
Reviewed By: omg2834 On: October 31, 2004 09:42 CST
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WOW!that story's hot. i cant belive that was your first fan fic. keep up tha good work!
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Reviewed By: DarkAngel25 On: October 26, 2004 19:43 CDT
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One word, WOW! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: DarkAngel25 On: October 26, 2004 19:43 CDT
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One word, WOW! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: DarkAngel25 On: October 26, 2004 19:43 CDT
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One word, WOW! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG..that was FANTASTIC... loved it...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
someone roll down the windows, its gettin hot in here! lol. that was awsome, such great detail and character depositions. definatly so much more then a lemon. WONDERFUL job, completly wonderful! :-)
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Title: Wow! Great!
Reviewed By: bigbluemonkey555 On: October 21, 2004 22:37 CDT
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Great fic! wow for a first time good job. Hmm is it me or am i like the only guy who reads these? hmm ironic i suppose but whatever... but yeah great fic (write more)
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is not a lemon-it's LEMONADE b/c of its sweetness. I can see why the picture inspired you so much! The intensity and love is all there between Kagome and Inu. It's a moving one-shot with honeyed-sweet lemonade and sunripe lemons. Delicious-
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Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: October 20, 2004 21:09 CDT
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Is it hot in here, or is it just me? Yup. That was HOT! If you're thinking of continuing it, then definitly do it!
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woooo that was hot.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Coca *not signed in* On: October 20, 2004 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! A very nicely done fic, and thoroughly enjoyable. ^_^ You did a great job, especially for your first fic, keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 17:44 CDT
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yay! very good. read it at the yahoo group thingy. i like it a lot
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was amazing I can't wait for you to write more this was so great and for a first time so awsome. Oh and I'm joining the group of people puting you on my favorite author list. So I can't wait for more. KEEP WRITING PLEASE!!!
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Title: Fantastic
Reviewed By: ErehwonDreamer3013 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great!! One thing though, the David was not done by Boticelli. It was done by Michaelanglo (sp?). But anyway, aside from the art quibble, this story was fantastic!! Please give us more like it!!!
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon On: October 20, 2004 12:30 CDT
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*amused* Ah, I see Cat(Bailey) has corrupted yet another poor, innocent soul, LOL! I can just see her, sitting in her room and pulling a picture off the wall to reveal a spot covered in little tally marks, then cackling and placing yet another mark on the wall, proof of her her many triumphs. I'm sure there is a mark there for me as well. ^_~ Anyway, you did a really, really good job with this story! It played out well and still kept the characters very believable. I enjoyed reading it very much, and I hope you continue!
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