| "Come Here Boy" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: ToastyKoasty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely yummy! Had that touch to make your heart melt and blood boil at the same time. Well done!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 21:14 CDT
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this was really touching, and very believable. I was so ahppy I managed to find a hentai one-shot where the characters weren't compleately OOC. Thank you so much for sharing, and please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great one shot! keep up the good work : )
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Reviewed By: keke [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best lemon I've ever read! So romantic and tasteful.
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Title: *sniff,sniff*so prettyful
Reviewed By: tempestflame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cries*this fic was so beautiful!!i loved it!!the story was very well done.you are one seriously talented writer.i may just have to add you to my favorites!!i'm not a very good writer or else,my story idea's suck.i'm actually alittle new,so if you could check out my fic,The Symphony od Dark Angels,i'd really appreciate it.i mean,you're a really great writer!!tell ya what,have one of my special cookies!they protect writers and artists from the sting of flames!!consider it a gift from a newbie to an expert!!
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 23:29 CST
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AMAZING!!!! I loved it please add more chaters!!!
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Title: come here boy
Reviewed By: firestar712 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fic was awsome the best in a while u should write more lemons omg it was great and im normally quite. de best.
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 16:50 CDT
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that was so beautiful. :) *smiles tearily* it's not like the other mating stories of inu and kag...this one has more passion...more love. beautiful job. :)
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE THAT WAS AWESOME!!! that was the best lemon i've read in a while.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover8 On: July 11, 2005 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it.
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Reviewed By: Blackat On: July 03, 2005 10:36 CDT
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Holy shit that was awsome the way you put so much detail it fucking rocked please write more noif you'll excuse me i need to take care of some thing. (Okay i just feeding my dog get your head out of the DAMN gutter)
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Reviewed By: momcitrus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 00:01 CDT
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What? Did you say someone left you criticism? No way- this was perfectly romantic, or wasn't that what you were aiming for?...just one question, tho. If he was trying to DELAY his finish, why on earth would he SPEED UP? Just a-wonderin' if it works differently where ya'll come from....
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Reviewed By: Sara R. On: May 23, 2005 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved the story. I think it's one the better one outs there. It was so sweet and cute:)
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Title: Come Here Boy
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 14:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MY GOD!! Hold on, I need to take a long cold shower...Okay. Now that I am all cooled down, I deem it right to say...THAT WAS BEAUTIFIL! I loved it alot. I loved the description of the whole setting, and of course what Inuyasha looked like as an older young man. The lemon was wonderful; I could feel what they felt, it seeemd like. Their connection was strong and I loved the idea of the marking. The amount of emotion and hard work that was put into this one shot was incredible. It's hard to write a one shot that draws attention to people-but it seems that you have absolutley no trouble in that department. I wish you good luck. Once again, great one shot!
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