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Title: Amazing!!
Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there!! :-) I just read your fic, and all I can say is, OH MY GOD!! That was amazing!!! I have to say, you had my heart beating so fast in my chest, it was wonderful!! You had such great elements, and your writing, my dear, is FABULOUS, so please, give yourself more credit! :-) You have exceptional imagery, and like we were talking about, it can be hard sometimes writing lemons, but man, you made it seem so easy! It all just flowed so beautifuly! I really hope that you will consider writing more stories, 'cause you've got me hooked! Well done!! I just can't say it enough! I think I better go back for seconds!! Lady P.
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Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 12:03 CST
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I can't even describe how wonderful your fic is! Its so wonderful to read a clearly thought out, grammatically correct, fun to read fanfic. I especially liked the twist at the end, the placement of Inuyasha's mating mark. Very well done. The only thing I would suggest is not subsituting any Japanese words for English ones. Terms, yes, such as youkai, youki, attacks, etc, but words like love, and mushy nicknames I feel for me, personally, having learned Japanese, are better left in our own native language. But this is just my personal opinion! As for your comment in the beginning, I definitely think you are of the caliber of other great writers out there. Keep up the great work, and I'll be looking forward to reading more of your great work in the future!
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Title: that was great
Reviewed By: omg2834 On: October 31, 2004 09:42 CST
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WOW!that story's hot. i cant belive that was your first fan fic. keep up tha good work!
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Reviewed By: DarkAngel25 On: October 26, 2004 19:43 CDT
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One word, WOW! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: DarkAngel25 On: October 26, 2004 19:43 CDT
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One word, WOW! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: DarkAngel25 On: October 26, 2004 19:43 CDT
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One word, WOW! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG..that was FANTASTIC... loved it...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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someone roll down the windows, its gettin hot in here! lol. that was awsome, such great detail and character depositions. definatly so much more then a lemon. WONDERFUL job, completly wonderful! :-)
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Title: Wow! Great!
Reviewed By: bigbluemonkey555 On: October 21, 2004 22:37 CDT
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Great fic! wow for a first time good job. Hmm is it me or am i like the only guy who reads these? hmm ironic i suppose but whatever... but yeah great fic (write more)
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is not a lemon-it's LEMONADE b/c of its sweetness. I can see why the picture inspired you so much! The intensity and love is all there between Kagome and Inu. It's a moving one-shot with honeyed-sweet lemonade and sunripe lemons. Delicious-
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Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: October 20, 2004 21:09 CDT
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Is it hot in here, or is it just me? Yup. That was HOT! If you're thinking of continuing it, then definitly do it!
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woooo that was hot.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Coca *not signed in* On: October 20, 2004 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! A very nicely done fic, and thoroughly enjoyable. ^_^ You did a great job, especially for your first fic, keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 17:44 CDT
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yay! very good. read it at the yahoo group thingy. i like it a lot
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was amazing I can't wait for you to write more this was so great and for a first time so awsome. Oh and I'm joining the group of people puting you on my favorite author list. So I can't wait for more. KEEP WRITING PLEASE!!!
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