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Reviewed By: InTheShadows(not logged in) On: March 17, 2005 14:16 CST
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Great story so far! Update soon! I am curious to see what happens next!! -InTheShadows.
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Reviewed By: Jet_black [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 00:41 CST
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UUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDAAAAAAATTTTTTTEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please? does saying please work now adays? idk i never say it o.o;; whatever UPDATE ANYWAY YOU'RE GOING ON MY FAVS LIST!!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 20:39 CST
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Mukuro actuall has robotic body parts.. [she once poured acid on her body.] So what you think is covering her eye actually is her eye. UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 17:43 CST
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I forgive you for the wait...*gets hit over the head with a mallet* X.x *magically recovers* Ahem, anywhoz, it was well worth the wait and I'm not gonna be picky about your grammer or anything because this is a really good story. I liked how you didn't rush the whole Hiei/Oc romance because I've seen stories where in the first five chapters the OC already befriends him and stuff. It's annoying but Vera's a good OC placed miles above other OCs that I've had the imense displeasure of reading about. Well done! ~Ja ne
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 09:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Take your time it's your story. Just relax. ^_^ Don't spend too much time on updating you also have your life if you are going to spend all your life span trying to write a story than man does that suck. I just hope you appreciate what you are doing in life or it's worth notin' to anyone. Oh yeah I liked the story very much.
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Reviewed By: hiei jagan jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 12:49 CST
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Hey it's alright we can wait. If someone can't wait you should just make them wait. You deserve some time off you know. You can't always listen to what other people tell you ya know, lad.You spent your time updating and all they do is read and review, but sorry for that. If I offended you than I'm sorry. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 12:57 CST
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YOU'RE ALIVEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! *glomps you*
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 19:23 CST
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UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 23:34 CST
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One word: UPDATE...soon! (hehe, that was two words) JUST DO IT!! *flails arms around*
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Title: My Character
Reviewed By: Cloaked in Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 17:15 CST
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Gotta say thatt was a good chapter.I dont fell like sharpening any weapons right now but this is my character. ~~~~~ NAME- Shadow AGE- 121 HAIR-thick midback brown hair with dark gray highlights HEIGHT-4'11 BIRTHDAY-Dec 10th AFRAID OF(you don't have to include this if you don't want to)-her friends dying in front of her eyes while she cannot do a thing to help them. PERSONALITY-Anti-social and very distant DEMON (yes or no) if no what are they-yes wolf demon WEAPONS-katana,sythe,daggers SPECIALTIES-Can blend in with the shadows so she is undetected. SEX (male or female)-female CLOTHES-Always wears black.Shoes, cargo pants and armbamds.Around her neck is a black chocker knecklace with a silver cross.The last thing is her bandana. CLAWS (yes or no)-yes WINGS (yes or no) if yes what kind-no TAIL (yes or no) if yes what kind-yes...a wolf tail EARS (of course yes, but what type are they)- yes they are wolf ears NAILS (nail polish, long, short)-not to short but long enough to slash a throat. TEETH (are they sharp or regular)-sharp OTHERS (anything that you'd like to add about there life or something else)-Was born a raised in a demon tribe in Makai.The village was attacked one day and she was forced to watch her friends and family be murdered and slaughtered in front of her eyes.Ever since then she has been distant so she does not have to feel that pain again.
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Reviewed By: Life of Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name- Darkfire Age- 15 Hair- black, sticking out bangs and silver-gray hair that sticks out to the left Height- little less than 5' Birthday- 8/11/90 Afraid of(you don't have to include this if you don't want to)- slaying my friends on a mad slaughter Personality- kind, but cruel if consumed by the wolf within Demon (yes or no) if no what are they- fox, fire, wolf, and darkness Weapons- a katana, a wakazachi, and a tanto Specialties- can form anything from fire or darkness, or both Sex (male or female)- female Clothes- jeans and a t-shirt, sometimes a sweatshirt or hooddie Claws (yes or no)- yes Wings (yes or no) if yes what kind- no Tail (yes or no) if yes what kind- yes, a black wolf tail Ears (of course yes, but what type are they)- human Nails (nail polish, long, short)- long, claw-like (InuYasha nails) Teeth (are they sharp or regular)- only sharp canines Others (anything that you'd like to add about there life or something else)- extremely protective --hope this is what you were looking for. if not, sorry i wasted your time.--
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Title: OC
Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 19:40 CST
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Name:Inoriko, a.k.a. Nori Age: 15 Hair: Light purple with navy blue bangs, kept in a long braid down to waist Height: 5'2 D.O.B: 10/31 Afraid of: Opening herself up to people and her powers getting out of control Personality: Quiet, timid, serious, insecure about herself, usually apathetic and kind of a loner Demon: half human and half unknown demon Specialties: Read other people's thoughts and can force people to do things Gender: Female Clothes: Pink buttoned up shirt, black brimmed glasses, black denim jeans, studded belt, black pumas and silver bracelets on both wrists Claws: no Wings: no Tail: no Ears: normal ears Nails: about a centimeter long, painted black with silver tips Teeth: her canine teeth are like short fangs Other: Made her human mother kill her demonic father then made her commit suicide afterwards when she was VERY little, she remembers it a lot in nightmares. Doesn't like to talk about it and she often uses her powers without meaning to. Tries not to harm those she loves, but she never forgives herself if she hurts a friend. Never really opens up, but sometimes cries a random moments. After her parents death, she was raised by an abusive foster family, but she ran away from them and now lives on her own.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I personally think that was one of your best chapters yet, keep up the good work! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 18:40 CST
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i may do an OC...but not right now cuz i have to go... remind me though or i'll forget thanx to my dory memory!!! ^_~ :P UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animefreak11 *too lazy* On: December 06, 2004 20:55 CST
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hehehe really?? aww! *blush*tacklehug* !!! ^_^ thats what some other people think... i do like writing, just not writing for english class... and my mum tells me... i should invest 200% in what i really like... -_- talk about some help... :P lol anyway... gr8 chapter!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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