| "You Darkness..." Reviews/Comments [ 133 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 14:41 CST
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Oh my. They are linked? That is cool. What a better way for the gap between brothers to be bridged then by Kagome. Great piece of work. Hope you update soon. Later.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I can't wait till they get the bastards that attacked Kagome. What's up with Sesshomaru? Why did Kagome's wounds appear on his body? And why exactly bonds them? Is that going to be explained later? I look forward to the rest of the story. Though I prefer your Sesshomaru/Kagome stories better but this is a really original and its great!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 20:17 CST
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'Where are those tissues.' That was very emotional. You did very well. Hope you update soon. And don't spare anything. Lets get everything out on the table. It will be good for everyone. Later.
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Title: a sad picture painted
Reviewed By: inu luver 2004 not signed in [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was so hard to read only because it was so real. It was some of your best writing yet. It was hard to read because your words painted the picture so well it was easy to "see" You have truely out done yourself. While it was a painfully true rendition it was still beautiful in word all the same. Thank you for it and I look foward to your other chapters.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 07:13 CST
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lol i like that... horror victims backwards.. that was clever, i was looking at it thinking it was russian or something... then thought... why would fluffy be speaking russian.. btw i like the story so far keep up the good work:)
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 21:57 CST
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interesting. i'm looking forward to more from you and i hope you get more out soon. i'm enjoying this story... (poor kago-chan! *sniffle*) i hope this linking with her mind will make it all easier for her to deal with something this awful! (going through something like that must suck ass!) i look forward to the next chapter! my only suggestion to you: watch your punctuation and the quotation marks. there were times when the sentences were confusing because you had an end quotation but the next paragraph was the same person speaking... it's a little hard to follow the story like that. and your use of commas... your excessive use of commas. other than that, it's a good story and i look forward to more! ja ne! ~hanyou-elf
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 00:31 CST
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absolutly awsome addition to the story. wow...Sesshoumaru is willing to do that for her? thats amazing. not that i would not put it past him. (i love sesshy, honest). great plot development and fresh ideas. keep em comming!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 20:44 CST
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Oh, boy. What a story. I like that youkai's response to her ordeal. You discussion about what women that have gone through this, was well done. Hope you can continue this. I am sure some people are finding answers and learning some things. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 00:43 CST
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Great chapter. Lots of questions answered. Love the interplay with Sesshoumaru. You are doing a great job. Can't wait to see more. Hope you update soon. Later.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 01:53 CST
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DUDE!!!!! i am so ready for some ass kicking! i've spent the last few moments trying to figure out who you were bringing back and i got em all i think! ASS KICKING TIME!!! i'm so excited!!! go team venture...err...team inuyasha!!! woo-hoo. (on a side note, i'm so happy that your bringing Sesshy along for the ride. that just makes it twice the fun!)great update!!!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 21:12 CST
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Watch out villians. Inuyasha and gang are on the prowl. So I take it that Sesshoumaru and him have patched things up. Other wise why include him. You might want to explain that, if you all ready did, sorry. Can't wait for more. Later.
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 20:03 CST
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Is he actually going to let Kouga help?!?! ::blinks:: wow. That's odd... But the situation is BAD and he wants "justice" so I guess I can understand. Who is the neko? I haven't seen all of the Anime yet, is it someone from that? Or is it your own character? I'm looking forward to an update. Your writing style is interesting, a mix of formal and relaxed language. Honestly I find it a bit confusing, but I think I can manage should you continue writing that way. Write more soon!
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Title: You Darkness
Reviewed By: YoukaiNMe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 04:04 CST
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This is getting interesting, always enjoy your stories.. Please update soon!! Added you to favs!!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 00:10 CST
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not too damn bad. I'm looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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you have the opening to a great story here. i like how you have defined the two main characters points of views about the beginning basis of each other and their feelings...and then their underlying feelings. Miroku and Sango are too sneaky for their own good. LOL. great ideas so far and i hope you add to them. keep it up. you have a great description of the setting to be able to imagine what is going on and where exactly Kagome is. i'm intrested in finding how InuYasha knew Kagome was in trouble, even when he could not smell her. very good...keep it up.
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