| "You Darkness..." Reviews/Comments [ 133 ] |
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 19:08 CST
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W00t we finallt get back to inu and Kag. I'm a big liker of stories that involve Inu and Kag living the 500 years and more so of what happens when they meat their frends and family again.. Hope you won't dissapoint
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Title: I tried to review...for days...really I did.
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 01:39 CST
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This was a: gasped several times...squinted at it...made sure no-one was looking over my shoulder...openly shocked but secretly thinking "poetic justice" - Kind of lemon. WHEW!! (I could never write stuff like that...on one hand I'm chicken...and on the other; while I have tons of practical knowledge and book learning- I don't have any 'hands on' so to speak to draw from. I'm sure I could fabricate...but again; too chicken! LOL) I commend you for the sheer guts it takes to choreograph such a scene. *golf clap*
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Title: question
Reviewed By: Miroku_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 22:20 CST
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that was good. i have a question though, can we have another chapter which is focusses on Kagome, Inuyasha, Sango, Miroku, Shippo, Kirara, ext...? it might just be me but i'm sure the rest of the gang might want to know um... *cough* that Kagome is feeling better. Great chapter ^_^ Ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 19:47 CST
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*grins*Oooh...this is very...Hm...No words to explain...That's unusual...A first.../Rin:...Yes...first...
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 23:45 CST
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he really deserved all of the pain and torture, but i think he deserves alot more. great chappie, can't wait for the next one. please update soon, i want to see what happens to that sick freak.
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Reviewed By: Someone Interesting [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 20:07 CST
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I loved your story. I think you are a wonderful author, please write the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: queenserena(Me!) [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 22:07 CST
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*shudders*Oh...The poor thing...Talking about Sessho-chan, of cource. Had to...with Kouga...I dislike Kouga...Not the brightest crayon in the box..../Rin:*smiles*Sesshô-Maru-sama is very creative. Very creative.
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Miroku_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 18:29 CST
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Yay! that creep had it comeing ^_^ somehow i feel he deservis more.MORE PUNISHING!!!
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Title: Tried to review yesterday. It wouldn't let me...again
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 11:16 CST
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Well...couldn't happen to a nicer guy! Mwaaahaaahaaaahaaaaaa!!!
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 22:52 CST
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that is too good.he totally deserves it all. so he's gonna live like a youki then right? great chappie, update soon.
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smiles*Love it.../Rin:*sigh*Ah...Ignorance is bliss...The youki-sama will never know of 'his' doings...but still punish 'him' in ways so nice.../*blinks*That's it, you're staying away from Paige-chan...You're going Philosiphical...
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes just desserts. oh how i wished to have been a fly on the wall when he found out he was a girl transformed by the old woman. lol. o boy i know yasha would have loved to have been there. will sessho ever tell him? and i love DarklessVasion's idea about the title. i dont know i i want to read more of. yasha and kag or the Lord and his new pet. hmmmm. if it includes plenty of pain and degration for the ba$tard i say bring on the Lord. as usual a wonderful chapter. i cant wait til your next one. update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that's what the old woman was doing to him, heehee I can't wait to see what 'her' new lord it doing to do to 'her'....I know... I'm sick, and proud of it!
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Title: um... one more thing
Reviewed By: Miroku_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 19:27 CST
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hehe.... ^_^ sorry but i just have to say that i really like DarklessVasion's idea about the name for the next ch. "Dark and Twisted His Fate may be; call it Justice for one such as He." has such a nice ring to it, ne? i hope you use her idea for the ch title
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Title: what an awsome punishment
Reviewed By: Miroku_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 19:22 CST
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Hahahahaha!!!! the freak is inside some girls body *falls off of chair and rolls around on the floor laughing* what go's around comes around, karma, that's what i always say ^_^ ok, now i have a question, did you get the lords of the Northern/Souther lands from the Japanese driectional terms? (ok, so technicly their Chinese but Japan was useing many symbles and ideas from the main land back then) i think bull represents north or something. to bad that lion Yukia cant get drunk on the western wine, sake has a much greater alcohol content. i wish i had your writeing skills. i envey you. i hope we get to hear more from Inu and Kag next ch. oh, thats right, is Fluffy goin to tell him he turned the guy who did that to Kagome into a girl and is curently going through the same experince? i can just see the look on his face ^_^ Ja!!
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