| "You Darkness..." Reviews/Comments [ 133 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 19:10 CST
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Way to go Inuyasha. He saved her. Now for what Sesshoumaru is up to. Hope his found the boss. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 17:27 CST
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Going back to Chapter 10, when Sesshoumaru started bleeding and stuff, are you implying that he was violated back when he really young and relatively weak? I could see how brutes telling trying to make him scream might have turned him into the stoic we know today.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 17:02 CST
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I'm in this story deep. Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Gomen, mina...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 11:14 CST
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I have to tell you (I think everyone is enjoying it too much to say anything, myself included) but the typo in your disclaimer says that you "do now own InuYasha" when it should be "do not..." That kinda nullifies the disclaimer's purpose. -I know; I'm a party pooper. "I now own..." it would be nice, wouldn't it? LOL ----Great chapter. Awww, InuYasha didn't find a gang member to torment. But that may be a good thing because I have doubts about how well he could have controled himself if he was actually confronted with one and, with him hunting alone, there would be no one to remind him of their purpose. Yay! Ayumi is alive. ---ooh, Sesshoumaru's hunt is up next...I wonder what he will find...and what will be revealed? I have a feeling that there is something else behind everything. There have been subtle hints...hmmm....I won't speculate.
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: LottaLuvGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story.It's a work of masterpiece, and I would make one to if I had the time.I did have others but this place was such a faded memory, I deleted my work.Please continue.Email me if you'd like.Bye.
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Title: update soon!!!
Reviewed By: Miroku_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 15:53 CST
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please update soon! i really am adictid to your fic ^_^
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 13:59 CST
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My, oh, my...another dark and scary story. Poor Kagome...wow, InuYasha 'taking charge' instead of just 'charging in' and killing the whole lot of that sorry Nightwalker gang. I'm impressed with his restraint. Interesting job of potion making to visit justice on those nasty miscreants by making them experience what they put their victims through...Oh, if we could only do that for real! There would be a lot less people in prison...and more in assylums. Having to live with waking nightmares is worse than any imprisionment or death penalty that could be levied upon wrong-doers. (Making them live...) ----As for the "Hunt"...well, we do have to give a little something to appease all those bloodthirsty youkai or they might turn on the author...hehehe. Nicely creative was your method for bringing the "posse" through the well. Too may 'authors' just pop people back and forth indiscriminantly forgetting that ONLY InuYasha and Kagome are supposed to be able to do so. I personally think that is a big indicator, from Takahashi-san, that InuYasha and Kagome are ultimatly meant to be together; wherever or whenever they belong. **sigh** One can but hope...
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Reviewed By: Ryunosuke-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very powerful story and I enjoy reading it. The pain as described throughthe eyes of the characters is not only believeable but makes me wish I could help them in there quest. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 13:54 CST
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You need a tissue warning. This was very intense. I feel sad for Shippo, having to endure such at a young age. But I know that he would do anything for Kagome. The last part was great. I can that Kouga and Hakkaku were pushing there limits on control. So much the better though. Scaring those evil boys was probably worth all the lost control in the world. Hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 19:31 CST
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Poor Ginta. That was really hard to read. Your doing great. Lots of sorrow and angst in this. Hope that Sesshoumaru finds the leader himself. That will be a worthwhile chapter. Hope you can update soon. Later.
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Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 17:27 CST
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i admit it... i cried... AGAIN at this story, poor Ginta. poor girl. i keep forgetting its just a story. *sigh* ~Kat
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Title: Miroku_girl
Reviewed By: Miroku_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 17:21 CST
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YAY!! another cp ^_^ they must pay!!!! where is Kagome by the way?
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 16:59 CST
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I really like what you've done with Hakkaku and Ginta. As you know, if they get included in a fanfic at all, it's just as comic relief. That being said, the hunt seems to be going awfully easily. And with all these signals about where the baddies are hanging out it seems surprising to me that they have not been apprehended by the proper authorities -- unless some muckety muck is in on it...
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Reviewed By: draechaeli [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 05:38 CST
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It looks like Hakkaku has a girlfriend... lol. Sorry I couldn't resist. ~Na
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 08:38 CST
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*claps*Yeah! Go Hakkaku!/Rin:Her inu was reading this too.../She barked when I scrolled down...*grins*
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