| "You Darkness..." Reviews/Comments [ 133 ] |
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 21:21 CST
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o_O That hot spring sees a lot of action in one night.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 20:51 CST
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Good for them. I know that they didn't that. It was done very well, I enjoyed it alot. I wonder if you will reveal who had spied on them. Or was that your way of giving the reader embodiment within the story? Angain, well done. Can't wait for more, later.
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 11:04 CST
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OHHHH What is he going to turn into??? I must know!! Great story!!! Update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 02:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it took me from 11 pm to 3 am to read all of your chapters. i am stunned speachless. truly i felt the horror and fear of each poor girl. and kagome, such pain, then for it to disappear; i am so happy. i am glad yasha finally woke up to see his feeling for kagome and hers for him. i love what the first part of sessho plan for the a$$hole that did what they did to kag. i cannot wait to see what the old miko did to the jerk. you now have a loyal follower in your stories. not everything such be sunshine and daisies. we need darkness now and then to remind us of the beauty of light and love. you have provided this for me. i thank you for writing such a story of strenght. hopefully kagome does not suffer to badly of the nightmares. i know they can seem bad but you do eventully get over them. not to see shadows everwhere is a blessing and maybe kagome will have that soon. i feel her pain and thank you for showing it to others to realize what darkness is really out there. tahnk you again and i shall be waiting the next chapter soon. Teiya, LadySessho.
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Reviewed By: LaDDee_WaRRioR [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, sorry haven't been reviewing lately, things comes up and my internet wasn't paid (^.^') So I had to get another number (I'm not so rich ya know)Anyway continue the update, and congratulation on the drama winning contest
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 18:41 CST
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Oh boy, what could you have done to him. I wonder what kind of life he'll lead now? Hope it's nasty. Glad for the update, please continue. Later.
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter! she should change him into a girl so he knows what its like for them. update again soon!
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Reviewed By: queenserena(Hi!) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smiles*Aw, you\'re so mean to the poor kid...Wait, did I just say that?O.o/Rin:You need sleep. Lots. Rin wants to vote!/Then go find the site, we\'ll vote for an eternity!/Rin:YEAH!
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 16:09 CST
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YEa!! UPDATE!! I hopr they turn him into a DEamon :) Then they can chase him and beat him with their full strength. And for 100's of years @ that. O and congrads on the nominations Let us know how/if we can vote for you.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 13:14 CST
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are you turning that boy into a female plaything for a demon lord?? hum... won't he have some serious issues when he wakes up a girl!! LOL
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 12:21 CST
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*evil grin* hehe, the old witch is transforming him to...a female? That would be my guess. hehe, hahaahaaa, Mwwaa haahaa haaahaaa haahaa!!! Erp...I really have to reign in my weird side. --Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: AngelAnita [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW! He can't live without her? That's the sweetest thing! Oh, this is angelanita (same person from off of fanfiction . net) and yeah I love this story, its so nice! I'm thinking of writing a new one, a modern one! :D It's exciting. Anyway, I just wanted to tell you how much I love your story, and for you to PLEASEEE update soon, okay? *HUGGLES* ^_^
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Title: love it!
Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! this story is so f&*king good! I love every chapter! I have one word for you...UPDATE! ^____^
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Title: Chapter 25
Reviewed By: DemonicUprising [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome. just finished the 25th chapter. such a sweet ending to the chapter. Rin is such a cute little girl, good overall story, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 19:55 CST
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Great chapter. I loved how he thought all through everything. Sometimes big things make you really open your eyes to whats in front of you. And don't be disappointed about this chapter. I was needed and give great insight to what he was thinking. Makes the character more real. Great job. Update soon.
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