| "A Grim's Promise" Reviews/Comments [ 118 ] |
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: kira_the_demon On: December 10, 2004 09:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is one of the best fics ever, PLZ contenue with it it's really cool.. but buy P.S. sorry if my spelling sucks I can't spell for my life
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Reviewed By: Kata On: December 03, 2004 20:38 CST
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I've been enjoying this so far. I hope you don't turn it into a Kuwabara-bashing like many authors tend to do. Yusuke & Kuwabara pulls pranks on eack other but they really don't HATE each other. About the spirit awareness, are you going to alter the fact about Kuwabara? The fact where Genkai said that Kuwabara has unparalled awareness? She was admitting that he has a stronger awareness than she does then. The difference is that Genkai has the experience. where I can see Harry has some awareness, I doubt that its greater than Kuwabara.
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 17:38 CST
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Ha ha, go Remus! ^^ Wow, Yusuke got a kitten? And here I thought Kuwabara was the cat lover of the group. Harry's snake sounds cool. I like snakes... but I like rats more. My friends think I'm weird, but, well, there you go. (Besides, I AM weird.) Uh-oh, Snape saw them! Good thing he didn't recognize Harry. Long hair- braided long hair! Braids are fun to pull on. So are dreadlocks... *cough* Right! Okay! Continue please! Yay! (I rhymed.)
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 17:15 CST
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Most smaller snakes (body diameter under an inch or so) are extremely attractive to my mind. When they get larger some snakes don't have very attractive heads. Anyways, a smallish snake can be cute, in my opinion, of course. I guess Yusuke is growing up. I was pretty surprised when he started reading the newspapers. Anyways, it was a very enjoyable chapter.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 23:07 CST
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Wow this story is great and i really love it. Ive never read a story like this cause ive only read a few yyh/hp xovers and this is one of the best ive read so far. I understnd what you were saying about Ron but i hate to think of him that way. He really does have a big heart. I am proud to say i have no idea where this story is going and i like that i like being surprised when i read the new chapters. Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 17:53 CST
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Genkai is so evil! I want to grow old to be just like her.
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 07:00 CST
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Sure I'm enjoying it! ^^ Aw- poor Kura-chan. Who else has a feeling he'll end up overdosing on Tylenol? Bwa. *blink blink* Yusuke dressed up? Wow. *pictures it* Hmmm.... *shrugs* Mwa ha! Koenma's going to have a heart attack! He worries too much. Maybe Kurama should lend him some Tylenol. ^^ And it was cool how one of Puu's feathers went into Yusuke's wand! And Yusuke had to do all that reading- *snicker* No, I sympathize with him. I like reading, but I imagine spellbooks would get boring after a while... so! Continue with the story! I'm all ears!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 21:48 CST
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OoooOOOooo! This is so neat! It's the first HP/YYH crossover that's ever caught my attention and probably the only one I'll ever be reading- because it's great! I don't know how you got it, but I'm glad you did! ^^ Hmm- Harry with a braid- makes me think of Nuriko from Fushigi Yugi for some reason. I agree with Katzztar, giving details makes the story seem more real and- stuff. (Wow, that's descriptive of me. U_U) Like the bit about Botan taking James and Lily to Reikai. It doesn't have much to do with the plot, but it was a little thing thrown in that gives you something to think about, you know? You're really making this story interesting! How Ron betrayed Harry like that... I'm not mad about it, just sad. I don't think he really meant to. Poor Ronnie. Poor Harry. T_T Rita is the evil one! *cough cough* Um... um. Oh yeah! I didn't think Yukina would be one of the eight people! That's cool. I like Yukina. And it's really neat how you had Sirius staying at Genkai's while he was on the run- although I don't know how he got to Japan, BUT maybe I'll find out! Anyways, I love this story, it's great, it's interesting, it's deep, and it's got Harry looking like a girl. Which I imagine would be quite bishounen. Tee hee. ^^ Hoping for updates! This is going in my favorites!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 21:40 CST
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OK, I'm hooked but I am more interested in the boy who died than the boy who didn't so hurry back to Yusuke and Genkai. Seriously, I like the detail about the hair braiding as mourning (plus it's so animesque) and such that you have in there.
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Reviewed By: Katzztar again On: November 26, 2004 21:16 CST
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Thanks for give details about traditions such as the hair. It adds depth to the story.
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Reviewed By: Katzztar who forgot to sign in On: November 26, 2004 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you, thank you THANK YOU!!!! most forget or purposely leave out Kuwabara and Yukina. One question, Is Yukina staying at Genkai's or at the Kuwabara residence?in the anime , she's at Genkai's. But I've read that in the manga she stays with the Kuwabara siblings. Sooo, if Genkai gets to be Harry's new gaurdian and Yukina stays at Genkai's ....then Yukina and Kazuma Kuwabara would be most likely to encountering Harry . !!! ANNNNNNNNDD there's that pesky no magic law..... surely it doesn't hold over Japan, that's Brittish maigic law.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 14:27 CST
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What little you have is an interesting start and I would definitely read more. It appears that you are trying to adhere to the dates in both series. So is Yusuke like 16?
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: November 21, 2004 09:15 CST
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interesting... but sad....
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